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      <diff>@@ -215,9 +215,8 @@ passing a hash produces a list of key/value pairs:
 
 The C&lt;show_pets()&gt; function works because the C&lt;%pet_names_and_types&gt; hash
 flattens into the list C&lt;'Lucky', 'dog', 'Rodney', 'dog', 'Tuxedo', 'cat',
-'Petunia', 'cat'&gt;. The hash assignment inside the function C&lt;show_pets()&gt; 
-works essentially as the more explicit assignment to C&lt;%pet_names_and_types&gt;
-does.
+'Petunia', 'cat'&gt;. The hash assignment inside the function C&lt;show_pets()&gt; works
+essentially as the more explicit assignment to C&lt;%pet_names_and_types&gt; does.
 
 This is often useful, but there are limitations to understand.  If you wish to
 make a C&lt;show_pets_of_type()&gt; function, where one parameter is the I&lt;type&gt; of
@@ -232,8 +231,8 @@ C&lt;pop&gt; to remove it from the end of C&lt;@_&gt;):
 
         while (my ($name, $species) = each %pets)
         {
-            B&lt;next unless $species eq $type;&gt;   ## Isn't using 'unless' frowned upon?
-            say &quot;$name is a $species&quot;;          ## according to PBP? (jeremiah)
+            B&lt;next unless $species eq $type;&gt;
+            say &quot;$name is a $species&quot;;
         }
     }
 
@@ -374,7 +373,7 @@ names:
 
 Functions in namespaces are I&lt;visible&gt; outside of those namespaces in the sense
 that you can refer to them directly, but they are only callable by their short
-names from within the namespace in which they are declared, unless you have
+names from within the namespace in which they are declared--unless you have
 somehow made them available to the current namespace through the processes of
 importing and exporting.
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  <author>
    <name>chromatic</name>
    <email>chromatic@wgz.org</email>
  </author>
  <url>http://github.com/chromatic/modern_perl_book/commit/2cab6da9205f76cdf4b2da90d7ada07be602aada</url>
  <id>2cab6da9205f76cdf4b2da90d7ada07be602aada</id>
  <committed-date>2009-11-05T16:59:53-08:00</committed-date>
  <authored-date>2009-11-05T16:59:53-08:00</authored-date>
  <message>Pull request from Jeremiah Foster; minor edits to Functions/Subroutines chapter.</message>
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  <committer>
    <name>chromatic</name>
    <email>chromatic@wgz.org</email>
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