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-== Camping, a Microframework
+= Camping, a Microframework
 
-Camping is a web framework which consistently stays at less than 3kb of code.
+Camping is a web framework which consistently stays at less than 4kB of code.
 You can probably view the complete source code on a single page. But, you
 know, it's so small that, if you think about it, what can it really do?
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ A skeletal Camping blog could look like this:
     end
 
     def index
-      for post in @posts
+      @posts.each do |post|
         h1 post.title
       end
     end
@@ -56,34 +56,39 @@ Interested yet?  Luckily it's quite easy to install Camping.  We'll be using
 a tool called RubyGems, so if you don't have that installed yet, go grab it!
 Once that's sorted out, open up a Terminal or Command Line and enter:
 
-* &lt;tt&gt;gem install camping&lt;/tt&gt;
+    gem install camping
 
-Or for the bleeding edge:
+Even better, install the Camping Omnibus, a full package of recommened libs:
 
-* &lt;tt&gt;gem install camping --source http://gems.judofyr.net&lt;/tt&gt;
+    gem install camping-omnibus --source http://gems.judofyr.net
 
-Camping itself only depends on Rack[http://rack.rubyforge.org] and using the
-command above will only install Camping and Rack.  However, if you intend to
-use the views you also need to install +markaby+, and if you're going to use
-the database you need +activerecord+ as well:
-
-* &lt;tt&gt;gem install markaby&lt;/tt&gt;
-* &lt;tt&gt;gem install activerecord&lt;/tt&gt;
+If not, you should be aware of that Camping itself only depends on
+Rack[http://rack.rubyforge.org], and if your going to use the views you also
+need to install +markaby+, and if you're going to use the database you need
++activerecord+ as well.
 
+    gem install markaby
+    gem install activerecord
+ 
 == Learning
 
-* Start by reading the documentation in {the Camping module}[link:classes/Camping.html],
-  it should get you started pretty quick.
-* {The wiki}[http://wiki.github.com/why/camping] is the place for all tiny,
-  useful tricks that we've collected over the years.  Don't be afraid to
-  share your own discoveries; the more, the better!
-* Still wondering?  Subscribe to {the mailing list}[http://rubyforge.org/mailman/listinfo/camping-list],
-  the place where it's all happening!  Don't worry, though, the volume is just
-  as micro as Camping itself.  
-  
+First of all, you should read {the first chapters}[link:book/01_introduction.html]
+of The Camping Book. It should hopefully get you started pretty quick. While
+you're doing that, you should be aware of the _reference_ which contains
+documentation for all the different parts of Camping.
+
+{The wiki}[http://wiki.github.com/camping/camping] is the place for all tiny,
+useful tricks that we've collected over the years.  Don't be afraid to share
+your own discoveries; the more, the better!
+
+And if there's anything you're wondering about, don't be shy, but rather 
+subscribe to {the mailing list}[http://rubyforge.org/mailman/listinfo/camping-list]
+and ask there.  We also have an IRC channel over at Freenode, so if you feel
+like chatting with us, you should join {#camping @ irc.freenode.net}[http://java.freenode.net/?channel=camping].
+
 == Authors
 
-Camping was originally started by {why the lucky stiff}[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Why_the_lucky_stiff],
+Camping was originally crafted by {why the lucky stiff}[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Why_the_lucky_stiff],
 but is now maintained by the _community_.  This simply means that if we like your
 patch, it will be applied.  Everything is managed through {the mailing list}[http://rubyforge.org/mailman/listinfo/camping-list],
 so just subscribe and you can instantly take a part in shaping Camping.</diff>
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    <name>Magnus Holm</name>
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