From 6d4a1c31d3aed9ec4358fd2d542ec24d37684229 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Allan=20Nordh=C3=B8y?= <epost@anotheragency.no>
Date: Sat, 2 Jan 2021 20:45:00 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Improved download page

---
 download.phtml | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/download.phtml b/download.phtml
index 19481881..66c041b4 100644
--- a/download.phtml
+++ b/download.phtml
@@ -41,17 +41,17 @@
   <h3><?php echo T_("Sandbox")?></h3>
   <ul class="imagelist">
     <li class="imagelistitem" style="background-image: url(<?=$top_dir?>/images/icons/flatpak.png);">
-      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("Flatpaks are bundles, which contain beneath the program also all required libraries. If your distribution is too old, to offer all required libraries, but has the package <a href=\"%s\">Flatpak</a>, you can install a recent version of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> from"), $URL_FLATPAK)?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("Flatpaks are programs that bundle in all required libraries. If you have <a href=\"%s\">Flatpak</a> installed, you can grab any recent version of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> from"), $URL_FLATPAK)?></p>
       <p class="justify"><a href="<?php echo $URL_FLATHUB;?>"><img width='240' alt='Download on Flathub' src='https://flathub.org/assets/badges/flathub-badge-en.png'/></a></p>
       <p class="justify"><a href="<?php 
       /* Translators: %s is the base url of the gnucash wiki, adjust this,
          if a localized instance of the Flatpak page exists like "%sDe/Flatpak" */
-        printf (T_("%sFlatpak"), $URL_WIKI);?>"><?php printf (T_("Known Issues and other details …"));?></a></p>
+        printf (T_("%sFlatpak"), $URL_WIKI);?>"><?php printf (T_("Known issues and other details…"));?></a></p>
     </li>
   </ul>
 
   <h3><?php echo T_("Source code")?></h3>
-  <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("If your distro doesn't ship with <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> or you wish to install a different version than it ships with, you could try to build <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> directly from the source code. The <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> wiki has <a href='https://wiki.gnucash.org/wiki/Building'>guidelines for several distributions</a>.")?></p>
+  <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("If you can't easily install <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> in your distribution, or wish to install a different version than it ships with, you can build <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> from source code as described in <a href='https://wiki.gnucash.org/wiki/Building'>the wiki</a>.")?></p>
   <ul class="imagelist">
     <li class="imagelistitem" style="background-image: url(<?=$top_dir?>/images/icons/package.png);"><a href="<?php echo $latest_stable_path.$latest_stable_source;?>">bzip2 compressed tarball</a> <?php printf (T_("for GnuCash %s"), $latest_stable)?></li>
   </ul>
@@ -62,8 +62,8 @@
       <div class="featureborder">
       <h2 class="featuretitle"><?php printf (T_("Unstable/Development release (%s)"), $latest_unstable)?></h2>
       </div>
-      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("Unstable (development) releases are for testing purposes only. They contain the newest features and improvements, but may also contain serious bugs still. Don't install these releases for everyday use.")?></p>
-      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("The latest unstable release of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> is %s.  Choose the download for your operating system below."), $latest_unstable)?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("Unstable (development) releases are for testing purposes only. They contain the newest features and improvements, but possibly also bugs. Don't install these releases for everyday use.")?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("The latest unstable release of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> (available below) is %s."), $latest_unstable)?></p>
       
       <ul>
         <li><?php printf (T_("GnuCash %s for"), $latest_unstable)?> <a href="<?php echo $latest_unstable_path.$latest_unstable_win;?>">Microsoft Windows 7/8/10</a></li>
@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@
       <div id="previous" class="featureborder">
         <h2 class="featuretitle"><?php printf (T_("Old Stable release (%s)"), $old_stable)?></h2>
       </div>
-      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("This old stable release is the final version of the previous stable series. It's available for users who aren't ready for a major upgrade but want to make sure that they have all of the bugfixes from the old series.")?></p>
-      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("The last old stable release of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> is %s.  Choose the download for your operating system below."), $old_stable)?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("This old stable release is the final version of all bugfixes from the previous stable series without being a major upgrade.")?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php printf (T_("The last old stable release of <span class=\"gnucash\">GnuCash</span> (available below) is %s."), $old_stable)?></p>
       
       <ul>
         <li><?php printf (T_("GnuCash %s for"), $old_stable)?> <a href="<?php echo $old_stable_path.$old_stable_win;?>">Microsoft Windows 7/8/10</a></li>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
       <div id="historical" class="featureborder">
         <h2 class="featuretitle"><?php echo T_("Latest versions for historical operating systems") ?></h2>
       </div>
-      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("This versions are really old. Do not expect any support.")?></p>
+      <p class="justify"><?php echo T_("These versions are really old. No support is offered.")?></p>
       <ul>
         <li><?php printf (T_("GnuCash %s for"), $last_xp_vista_version)?>
           <ul>