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add a link to this issue to the blog post, as an official place to leave feedback about this post
fix it because GitHub Pages doesn't support regex replace
Critique
Using the numbers from unreal engine in place of numbers for Photoshop needs a more complete explanation of my reasoning
Why does it matter that the artist is doing it for free?
I think I should just add in the energy of a Visa transaction. If I can find the energy usage of PayPal, cash, etc., then I should probably add those in for comparison, but not use them for the final calculation
Doesn't mention energy difference of generating a simple vs complex image
Needs a section on ethics
Make an obvious reference to that ethics section, right at the top where it can't be missed (thinking a big bright bold box of some sort)
Note about how art shouldn't be about profit. Actually that should be its own whole blog post... Why money harms art #70
Editing notes
make sure the capitalization of all of the headings are consistent
Device
calculate and point out the median device energy usage to show why this choice was made
"just commission, an artist", have a reminder that the iMac energy usage was at idle
Human
change the sentence about why I chose one kilocalorie so that it says something more to the effect of "typing basically uses no energy, but so we have some into compare to, let's say one kilocalorie since that's the smallest anyone would bother to measure"
bundle that up with the note about scientific American proving that mental effort doesn't increase calorie consumption
point out that I'm also not including idle human body energy usage
Make the title of that section reflect that, since it's not the body itself, but the usage of it
in the first "putting these together" section, clarify the energy usage of human activity as well
Video game
explicitly say why We use "1 hour" as the length of a Fortnite session
Reconsider usage of "MMO" in the game server section
just say "a game server" in the section title
the aside discussing how the Fortnite energy usage paper doesn't site sources should be a citation at the bottom, not in line, because it disrupts flow
Same with the MMO definition
Sort list of sources in the server energy usage section (maybe move it to the main source list?)
Uses a generalized "MMO" statistic, but congratulates Fortnite specifically after discovering the energy usage per-player is ~7.8 Joules
Putting these together
fix the math, it doesn't check out. seems the energy usage number for generating eight images is before overhead, but the multiplier is after overhead. Also, the multiplier is the same one used in commissioning an artist; it should be 26, not 24.
Googling
in the "just Google a real image" section, the paragraph that prepares all the numbers should make "and that uses 36 kJ" parenthetical
break up that paragraph so that it's much more concise and obvious what the numbers are referring to. Probably move the fact that I'm assuming they have a browser shortcut to a different sentence or paragraph. Stack up the reasoning upfront and have the numbers all together.
"assuming it takes a single search and one minute to find what you want" might be better wording
Note the effects of Google image search results include generated images now. Not only does that muddy the waters in our comparisons of generated versus non-generated images, it also makes the image search take longer if you explicitly do not want a generated image
Industry
in "The energy usage of industry-scale software development", put the order-of-magnitude guess in bold
For comparison
In the "For comparison" make sure the captions in all of the figure boxes are consistent
Meta
in the Meta section, move what I've ignored to the bottom (before the Calculations section)
https://blog.kyleggiero.me/Image-generators-energy-usage/
Critique
Editing notes
Device
Human
Video game
Server
Putting these together
Googling
Industry
For comparison
Meta
Possible new sources
Comparison ideas