Improve the writing in the following email:

Good morning,

I'm Jane Doe, I'm interested in moving to Canada. My Sister and her husband live in Montreal and a friend of theirs highly recommended you. I'm of French nationality, I was born and raised in Austria, I have Diploma in Computer Science and I worked for 8 years in the sales department in Telecommunication Company.

I'm single and currently unemployed, I would like to move to Canada and live with my sister. I thought to getting a student permit and studying Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal but and after I graduate I apply for permanent residency. But I'm open to other suggestions.

My main plan is to get a permanent residency and settle in Canada. I'm interested to consult with you to find what program might fit me the best and to help me to submit my application.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Best regards,
Jane Doe
Good morning,

My name is Jane Doe. I am interested in moving to Canada and a friend of family members in Montreal highly recommended contacting you.

I am of French nationality but was born and raised in Austria. I have a diploma in Computer Science and worked for 8 years in the sales department at a telecommunication company. I am single and currently unemployed, and I would like to live with my sister upon moving to Canada.

I am considering acquiring a student permit and studying Biology at The Science Academy in Montreal, before applying for permanent residency after graduating. However, I would be interested to hear alternatives. My overall goal is to gain permanent residency and settle in Canada. I would like to consult with you to identify the best way forward and so that I can submit the best possible application.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
Jane Doe
Is good morning a good start of the email, also should I include the name of the person I am writing to in the beginning of the mail or is this not necessary (I am trying to be very polite)?