From 207303a0e1e034f4c1ad6af84d2b791b24bdab42 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: JillThornhill <121565493+JillThornhill@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Aug 2023 19:36:25 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Update documentation-survey.md

Summarize https://edolstra.github.io/pubs/phd-thesis.pdf Chapter 2
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 .../learning_journey/documentation-survey.md          | 11 +++++++++++
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+)

diff --git a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
index 929d69e21..bc35ae5c7 100644
--- a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
+++ b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
@@ -151,6 +151,17 @@ To better navigate the material and judge its relevance, every entry should prov
   - Reading time: 15 min
   - Author: Eelco Dolstra
   - Created: 2006
+ 
+    Chapter 2:
+    2.1: The Nix Store, isolation of components, cryptographic hashes, non-destructive upgrades, prevention of undeclared dependencies, closures
+    2.2: Use of Nix expressions to build software, structure of Nixpkgs collection, Hello and SUbversion as examples of derivations.
+    2.3: Package Management: Installations, updates and rollbacks, user environments, uninstalling, garbage collection
+    2.4: Store derivations: Definition, `.drv` files in Nix store. `nix-instantiate`, `nix-store --realise`. Allows various deployment policies, including source and binary.
+    2.5. Deployment models. Mechanisms `nix-instantiate` and `nix-store`. Models: Manual download; vesion management system; channels; one-click installation
+    2.6: Transparent source/binary deployment: `nix-push` and `nix-pull`. Pre-built substitutes.
+
+    - Reading time: 30 min
+    
 
 ### Nixpkgs
 

From bc5de00543cd2895c5a465775ec901e4c42c745e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: JillThornhill <121565493+JillThornhill@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Aug 2023 19:38:00 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Update documentation-survey.md

Tidy up
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 .../working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md | 6 ++++++
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+)

diff --git a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
index bc35ae5c7..b80851203 100644
--- a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
+++ b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
@@ -153,11 +153,17 @@ To better navigate the material and judge its relevance, every entry should prov
   - Created: 2006
  
     Chapter 2:
+    
     2.1: The Nix Store, isolation of components, cryptographic hashes, non-destructive upgrades, prevention of undeclared dependencies, closures
+    
     2.2: Use of Nix expressions to build software, structure of Nixpkgs collection, Hello and SUbversion as examples of derivations.
+    
     2.3: Package Management: Installations, updates and rollbacks, user environments, uninstalling, garbage collection
+    
     2.4: Store derivations: Definition, `.drv` files in Nix store. `nix-instantiate`, `nix-store --realise`. Allows various deployment policies, including source and binary.
+    
     2.5. Deployment models. Mechanisms `nix-instantiate` and `nix-store`. Models: Manual download; vesion management system; channels; one-click installation
+    
     2.6: Transparent source/binary deployment: `nix-push` and `nix-pull`. Pre-built substitutes.
 
     - Reading time: 30 min

From b4043b4799a0250f1c5b54fc7afd04fe55c3dc4d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: JillThornhill <121565493+JillThornhill@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Aug 2023 19:40:17 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Update documentation-survey.md

Tidy up
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 .../working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md   | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
index b80851203..843816df5 100644
--- a/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
+++ b/maintainers/working_groups/learning_journey/documentation-survey.md
@@ -145,14 +145,14 @@ To better navigate the material and judge its relevance, every entry should prov
 
 - https://edolstra.github.io/pubs/phd-thesis.pdf
   
-    Chapter 1:
+  Chapter 1:
     Existing software deployment models and issues faced with them; motivation for developing Nix, features of the Nix deployment system
 
   - Reading time: 15 min
   - Author: Eelco Dolstra
   - Created: 2006
  
-    Chapter 2:
+  Chapter 2:
     
     2.1: The Nix Store, isolation of components, cryptographic hashes, non-destructive upgrades, prevention of undeclared dependencies, closures