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Continued typo, sentence structure, and file cleanup

Notes:

1) Removed the Great Dane Rouge file, which was a not-included duplicate of the Great Dane file.
2) Standardized hyphenation to use A - B (rather than A--B or A -- B) format since it was the most common in the game already and keeping the style consistent improves the game's presentation.
3) Cleaned up prompts in Blue Bishop's files by reverting an old flub where the text was replaced with 'Else' rather than 'Otherwise' at the start of sentences, reading somewhat awkward.
4) Miscellaneous typo, comma, and code cleanup across many files, fixing a variety of minor issues.
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Strongbird committed Feb 8, 2019
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  2. +1 −1 AGentlemanCalledB/Francois.i7x
  3. +154 −157 Blue Bishop/Doran.i7x
  4. +6 −6 Blue Bishop/Ebonflame Dragator.i7x
  5. +4 −4 Blue Bishop/Ebonflame Drake.i7x
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  7. +36 −36 Blue Bishop/Feral Sea Dragoness.i7x
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@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ to say FireSpriteMasturbate:
say " Deciding to make use of the beaten sprite, you remove your gear and prepare for some fun. After sizing the little creature up, you decide your massive member is just too much for his tiny form. Endeavoring to make use of your little plaything, you press his entire body against your throbbing cock, stroking its entire length with his small, warm form. Soon the sprite has his arms wrapped around you, grinding his body against you as you use him to stroke yourself off. Through your combined efforts, your balls are soon tensing up in anticipation as you quickly approach climax, blowing your [cum load size of player] load into the air. As your cum showers down atop the sprite, you finally release him, basking in your afterglow as he scampers off while doing his best to shake off your sticky mess.";

to say RideFireSpriteCock:
say " Deciding to make use of the beaten sprite, you remove your gear and take a seat out on the ground. Pulling the little sprite towards your groin, you position his already firm prick in front of your hungry pussy and wrap your legs around his [if scalevalue of player > 1]small [end if]form, pulling his entire body against your crotch as you press his length into your slick slit. Your body fills with warmth as you envelope his orange flesh, and soon you begin rocking his entire body against your groin as you do your best to ride his [if scalevalue of player > 1]smaller [end if]form to climax, your spasming cunt gripping his warm member as his own climax sends powerful spurts of his warm seed deep within you. Releasing the sprite, you relax on the ground in the afterglow of your climax as he pulls out with a wet slurp, allowing some of his glowing orange semen and your own femcum to drool from your pussy as he scampers off.";
say " Deciding to make use of the beaten sprite, you remove your gear and take a seat out on the ground. Pulling the little sprite towards your groin, you position his already firm prick in front of your hungry pussy and wrap your legs around his [if scalevalue of player > 1]small [end if]form, pulling his entire body against your crotch as you press his length into your slick slit. Your body fills with warmth as you envelop his orange flesh, and soon you begin rocking his entire body against your groin as you do your best to ride his [if scalevalue of player > 1]smaller [end if]form to climax, your spasming cunt gripping his warm member as his own climax sends powerful spurts of his warm seed deep within you. Releasing the sprite, you relax on the ground in the afterglow of your climax as he pulls out with a wet slurp, allowing some of his glowing orange semen and your own femcum to drool from your pussy as he scampers off.";

to say FireSpriteCunnilingus:
if FireSpritemode is 0:
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ to say Francoisdesc:
Instead of conversing the Francois:
if HP of Karen is 6 and companion of player is Retriever Girl:
say " Francois greets you with a smile as you approach. 'Ah, mon ami[if player is not male and player is female]e[end if], good to see you again! And who is this you've brought with you?'";
say " 'It's me, Karen,' she responds. 'We were hoping you could help me out with --'[line break]";
say " 'It's me, Karen,' she responds. 'We were hoping you could help me out with-'[line break]";
say " 'Karen! Mon Dieu, I had feared the worst mon amie,' Francois interrupts, stepping around the counter and placing a small kiss on each side of her muzzle before pulling her into a hug. After breaking off, Francois motions towards one of the tables near the front of the store. The three of you sit and chat for a while, regaling the mutt with the tale of your escape from Rex before Karen finally asks him about her past. 'Ah, désolé mon amie, we never spoke much of our personal lives, only of our shared interest, les animaux. I recall you mentioning being a student at the college, but I am afraid that's all I know.'";
say " 'Well, it's more than I knew before,' Karen responds. 'Thank you, Francois, for everything. I might not even be here if not for you helping our friend here escape from Rex,' she says, smiling at you before leaning in and giving him a timid kiss on the cheek. Soon after the conversation draws to a close, you and Karen gather your things and prepare to head back out into the city as Francois returns to his work behind the counter.";
now HP of Karen is 7;

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@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ to say ebgatorvic:
say " After what feels like hours of being pounded into the ground, the dragon-gator finally roars out, sinking its sharp talons into you as it plunges its wide organ deep inside you one last time";
if impregnatevalid is true:
say ". [if ebgatord < 2]You briefly think the lizard's dick is knotted for how it forces a large bulge at its back past your ring, but it quickly reveals its true purpose as the bulb ascends[else]You're quickly reminded of the intense sensation of being [']tied['] with the lizard's dick, large bulge at its base forced past your ring, ascending[end if] along its shaft, until a large, coarse egg is squeezed from its head and into your bowels.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss -- and perhaps ensuring the orb is planted deep within you -- he still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, [if scalevalue of player > 3]slightly[else]substantially[end if] strained orgasm, [if player is male]your unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else if player is female]your unattended cunt[sfn] staining the ground with your juices[else]causing you to writhe in insatiable need[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if scalevalue of player > 4 or player is twistcapped] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss - and perhaps ensuring the orb is planted deep within you - he still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, [if scalevalue of player > 3]slightly[else]substantially[end if] strained orgasm, [if player is male]your unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else if player is female]your unattended cunt[sfn] staining the ground with your juices[else]causing you to writhe in insatiable need[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if scalevalue of player > 4 or player is twistcapped] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Abandoning your battered, bruised, and bloated form with a low hiss, you're forced to crawl away and recover from the consequences of the ordeal. [italic type]You're somewhat worried about the long-term results of carrying this egg...[roman type]";
if ebgatord < 2, now ebgatord is 2;
now mpreghijack is true;
now ebgatorhijack is 2;
now hijackgestation is 8;
else:
say ". Like a fire hose, the lizard's dick pumps its substantial, molten cum deep into your bowels, making you wince and cry out in the intense, searing sensation.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss -- and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed -- it still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, strained orgasm, [if player is male]your unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else if player is female]your unattended cunt[sfn] staining the ground with your juices[else]causing you to writhe in insatiable need[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if scalevalue of player > 4 or player is twistcapped] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss - and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed - it still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, strained orgasm, [if player is male]your unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else if player is female]your unattended cunt[sfn] staining the ground with your juices[else]causing you to writhe in insatiable need[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if scalevalue of player > 4 or player is twistcapped] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Abandoning your battered, bruised, and bloated form with a low hiss, you're forced to crawl away and recover from the consequences of the ordeal.[mimpregchance]";
else if player is female:
say " You soon feel the slightly flat head of the reptile's[if ebgatord is 0][else] peculiar,[end if] oversized dick press against[if cunts of player > 1] one of[end if] your cunt[sfn]";
@@ -51,15 +51,15 @@ to say ebgatorvic:
say " After what feels like hours of being pounded into the ground, the dragon-gator finally roars out, sinking its sharp talons into you as it plunges its wide organ deep inside you one last time";
if impregnatevalid is true:
say ". [if ebgatord < 2]You briefly think the lizard's dick is knotted for how it forces a large bulge at its back past your lips, but it quickly reveals its true purpose as the bulb ascends[else]You're quickly reminded of the intense sensation of being [']tied['] with the lizard's dick, large bulge at its base forced past your lips, ascending[end if] along its shaft, until a large, coarse egg is squeezed from its head and into your womb.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss -- and perhaps ensuring the orb is planted deep within you -- he still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, [if cunt length of player < 12]slightly[else]substantially[end if] strained orgasm, your [if player is male]unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else]pussy weakly throbbing against its oversized invader[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if cunt length of player > 11] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss - and perhaps ensuring the orb is planted deep within you - he still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, [if cunt length of player < 12]slightly[else]substantially[end if] strained orgasm, your [if player is male]unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else]pussy weakly throbbing against its oversized invader[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if cunt length of player > 11] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Abandoning your battered, bruised, and bloated form with a low hiss, you're forced to crawl away and recover from the consequences of the ordeal. [italic type]You're somewhat worried about the long-term results of carrying this egg...[roman type]";
if ebgatord < 2, now ebgatord is 2;
now preghijack is true;
now ebgatorhijack is 1;
now hijackgestation is 8;
else:
say ". Like a fire hose, the lizard's dick pumps its substantial, molten cum deep into your bowels, making you wince and cry out in the intense, searing sensation.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss -- and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed -- it still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, strained orgasm, your [if player is male]unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else]pussy weakly throbbing against its oversized invader[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if cunt length of player > 11] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss - and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed - it still continues to fuck you senselessly, forcing a weak, strained orgasm, your [if player is male]unattended cock[smn] staining the ground with your [cum load size of player] load[else]pussy weakly throbbing against its oversized invader[end if]. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your[if cunt length of player > 11] slightly[end if] gaping hole.";
say " Abandoning your battered, bruised, and bloated form with a low hiss, you're forced to crawl away and recover from the consequences of the ordeal.[impregchance]";
else:
say " You soon feel the slightly flat head of the reptile's[if ebgatord is 0][else] peculiar,[end if] oversized dick press against your face";
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ to say ebgatorvic:
say ", a [if HP of player > 0]loud[else]weak[end if], muffled groan escapes your lips as the blunt head of the overly wide organ is shoved past your lips, plunged ever-deeper down your gullet.";
say " The monster hisses loudly in rough satisfaction with each successive inch of the throbbing, molten-precum oozing cock is forced down your throat. The heat of its coarsely scaled, heaving body like a fire against your [bodytype of player] form, it's hard to say if you're aroused by the ordeal, given how numb you are from this intense sensation[if HP of player < 1] and your prior defeat[end if], sweat almost feeling like it's boiling off as you as his motion becomes rougher with each powerful thrust.";
say " After what feels like hours of being pounded into the ground, the dragon-gator finally roars out, sinking its sharp talons into you as it plunges its wide organ [if scalevalue of player < 4]as deep as he can[else]all the way[end if] inside you one last time. Like a fire hose, the lizard's dick pumps its substantial, molten cum deep into your stomach, making you wince and gag out in the intense, searing sensation.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss -- and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed -- it still continues to fuck you senselessly until it's eventually apparent to him that he's completely spent. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your maw, quickly gasping and coughing against the marginally cooler open air.";
say " Still high from the throes of bliss - and its motion further lubricated by its glowing seed - it still continues to fuck you senselessly until it's eventually apparent to him that he's completely spent. Finally satisfied, the beast wrenches his still-hard rod from your maw, quickly gasping and coughing against the marginally cooler open air.";
say " Abandoning your battered, bruised, and bloated form with a low hiss, you're forced to crawl away and recover from the consequences of the ordeal.";

impregnatevalid is a truth state that varies. impregnatevalid is usually false.
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ When Play begins:
now enemy name entry is "";
now enemy type entry is 0; [non-unique enemy]
now attack entry is "[one of]The gator[or]The oversized lizard[or]The scaled beast[or]The ebonflame dragator[or]It[or]He[at random] [one of]lunges forward and snaps it jaws around one of your limbs, the horribly sharp teeth digging into you until you finally pry its jaw wide enough to free yourself[or]shreds you painfully with its claws[or]attempts to pin you against the ground, biting and clawing at you until you push yourself free[or]painfully bashes you with its large, powerful tail[at random].";
now defeated entry is " With one final attack, the terrifying monster lets out a low groan and slumps onto the ground, completely spent and unable to move -- save for the occasional stirring. You decide it's probably best to move on before the gator recovers.";
now defeated entry is " With one final attack, the terrifying monster lets out a low groan and slumps onto the ground, completely spent and unable to move - save for the occasional stirring. You decide it's probably best to move on before the gator recovers.";
now victory entry is "[ebgatorvic]";
now desc entry is "[ebgatordesc]";
now face entry is "NA";
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