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edited tutorial 2 - minor text changes

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1 parent ed8e50c commit 6259b543abab6ba4a197b29c0b291364aaf396da @jordanrossdunn jordanrossdunn committed Dec 12, 2012
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@@ -17,7 +17,11 @@
%li
%h5 My Events
%h5
- In addition to creating events users can view their own personal Event Stream by clicking "My Events". This will focus the Stream to include only Events that you have created or added to your Calendar.
+ In addition to creating events, by clicking "My Events" users can focus the Stream to include only Events that you have created or added.
+ %li
+ %h5 My Stream
+ %h5
+ By clicking "My Stream" you can see your personalized Stream which will include Events created by users you are following.
%li
%h5 Messages
%h5
@@ -45,7 +49,7 @@
%div
%h2 More on Following & Followers
%h5
- To view your "Following" or "Followers" list click on the corresponding link in the side-bar. Your choice of Followings will be represented in your Stream (under "My Events") bringing Events created by these users into the mix. Following a user will also provide them with your username and email so that they may communicate with you.
+ To view your "Following" or "Followers" list click on the corresponding link in the side-bar. Your choice of Followings will be represented in your Stream (under "My Stream") bringing Events created by these users into the mix. Following a user will also provide them with your username and email so that they may communicate with you.
%img{:alt => "", :src => "/images/tutorial/following.png"}/
%h6
To stop following a particular user simply click the "Unfollow" button for that entry.
@@ -115,7 +115,13 @@
<li>
<h5>My Events</h5>
<h5>
- In addition to creating events users can view their own personal Event Stream by clicking "My Events". This will focus the Stream to include only Events that you have created or added to your Calendar.
+ In addition to creating events, by clicking "My Events" users can focus the Stream to include only Events that you have created or added.
+ </h5>
+ </li>
+ <li>
+ <h5>My Stream</h5>
+ <h5>
+ By clicking "My Stream" you can see your personalized Stream which will include Events created by users you are following.
</h5>
</li>
<li>
@@ -162,7 +168,7 @@
<div>
<h2>More on Following & Followers</h2>
<h5>
- To view your "Following" or "Followers" list click on the corresponding link in the side-bar. Your choice of Followings will be represented in your Stream (under "My Events") bringing Events created by these users into the mix. Following a user will also provide them with your username and email so that they may communicate with you.
+ To view your "Following" or "Followers" list click on the corresponding link in the side-bar. Your choice of Followings will be represented in your Stream (under "My Stream") bringing Events created by these users into the mix. Following a user will also provide them with your username and email so that they may communicate with you.
</h5>
<img alt='' src='public/images/tutorial/following.png' />
<h6>

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