From f8801d755a4ed647a52a85628812388c4cd34da2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daria Vladykina <daria.vladykina@suse.com>
Date: Mon, 13 May 2024 17:53:38 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Installation QS: final fixes

---
 xml/s4s_installation.xml             | 10 +++++-----
 xml/s4s_installation_sap.xml         | 14 +++++++-------
 xml/s4s_planning.xml                 |  4 ++--
 xml/s4s_upgrade_sap_hana_cluster.xml |  6 +++---
 4 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xml/s4s_installation.xml b/xml/s4s_installation.xml
index cce3e28c..4f11dfa2 100644
--- a/xml/s4s_installation.xml
+++ b/xml/s4s_installation.xml
@@ -225,9 +225,9 @@
      <guimenu>Network Settings</guimenu> will open.
     </para>
     <para>
-     If instead the screen <guimenu>Registration</guimenu> appears,
-     your network connection works. To change network settings anyway, click
-     <guimenu>Network Configuration</guimenu>.
+     However, if the <guimenu>Registration</guimenu> screen appears instead,
+     this indicates that your network connection works. To change network 
+     settings anyway, click <guimenu>Network Configuration</guimenu>.
     </para>
     <para>
      When you are finished configuring networking, proceed with
@@ -302,9 +302,9 @@
    <step performance="optional">
     <para>The <guimenu>Add On Product</guimenu> dialog allows you
      to add additional software sources (so-called
-     <quote>repositories</quote>) to &productname;, that are not provided
+     <quote>repositories</quote>) to &productname; that are not provided
      by the &scc;. Such add-on products may include third-party products,
-     drivers, or additional software for your system.
+     drivers or additional software for your system.
     </para>
    </step>
    <step>
diff --git a/xml/s4s_installation_sap.xml b/xml/s4s_installation_sap.xml
index cc21cf16..e30e8321 100644
--- a/xml/s4s_installation_sap.xml
+++ b/xml/s4s_installation_sap.xml
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
      </mediaobject>
     </figure>
     <para>
-     Select the appropriate option from the drop-down box.
+     Select the appropriate option from the drop-down list.
      In the text box, specify the path to your source according to the format
      given in the following table.
     </para>
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@
      before or set up your
      system to be an installation server, you can also directly choose
      that server as the provider of the &instmaster;.
-     To do so, use the drop-down box below <guimenu>Choose an installation
+     To do so, use the drop-down list below <guimenu>Choose an installation
      master</guimenu>.
     </para>
    </step>
@@ -483,7 +483,7 @@
     <para>
      On the screen <guimenu>SAP Installation Wizard</guimenu>, provide
      the location of additional &instmedia; you want to install.
-     This can include an &sap; kernel, a database, and
+     This can include an &sap; kernel, a database and
      database exports.
     </para>
     <variablelist>
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@
        <para>
         Do not copy additional &instmedia;. Choose this option
         if you do not need additional &instmedia; or to install
-        additional &instmedia; directly from their source, for example
+        additional &instmedia; directly from their source, for example,
         CDs/DVDs or flash disks.
        </para>
        <para>
@@ -564,7 +564,7 @@
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Engines that add functionality to a standard product: &sap; TREX,
-        &sap; Gateway, and Web Dispatcher.
+        &sap; Gateway and Web Dispatcher.
        </para>
        <!--
         "Engines" in plural: A bit of an inconsistency. Still just one at a
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@
       <listitem>
        <para>
         Allows changing the various system properties such as the &sap; system
-        ID, database ID, instance number, or host name. This can be used to
+        ID, database ID, instance number or host name. This can be used to
         install the same product in a very similar configuration on different
         systems.
        </para>
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@
    <step>
     <para>
      If you selected <guimenu>SAP Standard System</guimenu>,
-     <guimenu>Distributed System</guimenu>, or
+     <guimenu>Distributed System</guimenu> or
      <guimenu>SAP High-Availability System</guimenu>,
      additionally choose a back-end database under
      <guimenu>Back-end Databases</guimenu>.
diff --git a/xml/s4s_planning.xml b/xml/s4s_planning.xml
index 08df5072..fcf9cade 100644
--- a/xml/s4s_planning.xml
+++ b/xml/s4s_planning.xml
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
       </listitem>
      </itemizedlist>
      <para>
-      For more information about &hana; refer to <link xlink:href="https://help.sap.com/docs/SAP_HANA_PLATFORM"/> (the section <menuchoice><guimenu>Implement</guimenu><guimenu>SAP HANA Master Guide</guimenu><guimenu>SAP HANA Deployment Options </guimenu><guimenu>On-Premise Deployments</guimenu>
+      For more information about &hana;, refer to <link xlink:href="https://help.sap.com/docs/SAP_HANA_PLATFORM"/> (the section <menuchoice><guimenu>Implement</guimenu><guimenu>SAP HANA Master Guide</guimenu><guimenu>SAP HANA Deployment Options </guimenu><guimenu>On-Premise Deployments</guimenu>
 </menuchoice>).
      </para>
     </listitem>
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
         Whether to enable Multitenant Database Containers (MDC). The
         multi-tenant support of &hana; allows having multiple databases that
         run as one &hana; installation. (To use &hana; MDC, you need &hana;
-        Life Cycle Manager.)
+        Lifecycle Manager.)
        </para>
        <para>
         For a single-tenant installation, choose <guimenu>No</guimenu>.
diff --git a/xml/s4s_upgrade_sap_hana_cluster.xml b/xml/s4s_upgrade_sap_hana_cluster.xml
index 23026afd..f6c0896f 100644
--- a/xml/s4s_upgrade_sap_hana_cluster.xml
+++ b/xml/s4s_upgrade_sap_hana_cluster.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
  xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook"
  xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
  xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink">
- <title>Upgrading a &hana; cluster</title>
+ <title>Upgrading an &hana; cluster</title>
  <info>
   <dm:docmanager xmlns:dm="urn:x-suse:ns:docmanager">
    <dm:bugtracker/>
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@
     <para>
      The wizard shows you two steps: automatic and manual. In this automatic
      step, the wizard puts cluster resources into maintenance mode before it
-     starts with the automatic steps. The manual steps are &hana; specific and
-     need to be executed by a &hana; administrator. For more information, see
+     starts with the automatic steps. The manual steps are &hana;-specific and
+     need to be executed by an &hana; administrator. For more information, see
      the official &hana; documentation.
     </para>
    </step>