From 0c5f2df092d6bc1deb9d0d21c17e3166fbd6a45d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Adenot <paul@paul.cx>
Date: Fri, 22 Sep 2023 12:51:45 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Address final review comments

---
 index.bs | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs
index af37c2e9a..8a9607a1d 100644
--- a/index.bs
+++ b/index.bs
@@ -3049,7 +3049,8 @@ Constructors</h4>
                     1. Set the {{[[rendering thread state]]}} for
                         |c| to <code>"suspended"</code>.
 
-                    1. Determine the {{[[render quantum size]]}} for this {{OfflineAudioContext}}, based on the value of the {{OfflineAudioContextOptions/renderSizeHint}}:
+                    1. Determine the {{[[render quantum size]]}} for this {{OfflineAudioContext}},
+                            based on the value of the {{OfflineAudioContextOptions/renderSizeHint}}:
 
                         1. If it has the default value of <code>"default"</code> or
                                <code>"hardware</code>", set the {{[[render quantum size]]}} private
@@ -12462,11 +12463,11 @@ block of 128 samples-frames is called a <a>render quantum</a>, and
 the <a>render quantum size</a> is 128.
   </del>
   <ins>
-Rendering an audio graph is done in blocks of samples-frames, the size of this
-block being constant for the lifetime of a {{BaseAudioContext}}. The number of
-sample-frames of a block of sample-frames is called the <dfn>render quantum
-size</dfn>, and the block itself is called a <dfn>render quantum</dfn>. It
-defaults to 128, but can be controlled by {{AudioContextOptions/renderSizeHint}}
+Audio graph rendering is done in blocks of sample-frames, with the size of each
+block remaining constant for the lifetime of a {{BaseAudioContext}}. The number of
+sample-frames in a block is called <dfn>render quantum size</dfn>, and the block
+itself is called a <dfn>render quantum</dfn>. Its default value is 128, and it can
+be configured by setting {{AudioContextOptions/renderSizeHint}}.
   </ins>
 </div>