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Updated more copy. Fixes #1070

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allen committed Mar 13, 2012
1 parent f67bc23 commit 9a4d399a04cbf4ed561d4ead34987e0c63dc471c
Showing with 7 additions and 7 deletions.
  1. +6 −6 install/lib/class.installerpage.php
  2. +1 −1 install/lib/class.updaterpage.php
@@ -89,20 +89,20 @@ protected function __build($version = VERSION, XMLElement $extra = null) {
protected function viewMissinglog() {
$h2 = new XMLElement('h2', __('Missing log file'));
- $p = new XMLElement('p', __('Symphony couldn’t create a valid log file. Make sure the %s folder is writable.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL) . '</code>')));
+ $p = new XMLElement('p', __('Symphony tried to create a log file and failed. Make sure the %s folder is writable.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL) . '</code>')));
$this->Form->appendChild($h2);
$this->Form->appendChild($p);
}
protected function viewRequirements() {
- $h2 = new XMLElement('h2', __('Outstanding Requirements'));
+ $h2 = new XMLElement('h2', __('System Requirements'));
$this->Form->appendChild($h2);
if(!empty($this->_params['errors'])){
$div = new XMLElement('div');
- $this->__appendError(array_keys($this->_params['errors']), $div, __('Symphony needs the following requirements satisfied before installation can proceed.'));
+ $this->__appendError(array_keys($this->_params['errors']), $div, __('Symphony needs to meet the following requirements before thing can be taken to the "next level".'));
$this->Form->appendChild($div);
}
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ protected function viewSuccess() {
new XMLElement('h2', __('The floor is yours'))
);
$div->appendChild(
- new XMLElement('p', __('Thanks for taking the quick but epic installation journey with us. It\'s now your turn to shine!'))
+ new XMLElement('p', __('Thanks for taking the quick, yet epic installation journey with us. It\'s now your turn to shine!'))
);
$this->Form->appendChild($div);
@@ -164,15 +164,15 @@ protected function viewSuccess() {
if($ul->getNumberOfChildren() !== 0){
$this->Form->appendChild(
new XMLElement('p',
- __('Unfortunately the following extensions couldn’t be enabled and must be manually installed. Sorry about that.')
+ __('Looks like the following extensions couldn’t be enabled and must be manually installed. It\'s a minor setback in our otherwise prosperous future together.')
)
);
$this->Form->appendChild($ul);
}
$this->Form->appendChild(
new XMLElement('p',
- __('Before proceeding, we recommend that the %s folder be removed to keep things nice and secure.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL) . '</code>'))
+ __('I think, you and I will achieve great things together. Just one last thing, how about we remove the %s folder and really secure the safety of our relationship.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL) . '</code>'))
)
);
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ protected function viewSuccess() {
);
$this->Form->appendChild(
new XMLElement('p',
- __('Before logging in, we recommend that the %s directory be removed for security.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL_URL) . '</code>'))
+ __('Your mum is also nagging you about removing that %s directory before you log in.', array('<code>' . basename(INSTALL_URL) . '</code>'))
)
);

1 comment on commit 9a4d399

brendo commented on 9a4d399 Mar 14, 2012

Love it.

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