diff --git a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md index fdfba56..1445440 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md +++ b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md @@ -468,10 +468,10 @@ Description: ### NEW Description: -: The port number identifying the start of a range of ports. A value of zero indicates that the range start is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. +: The port number identifying the start of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range start is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: Additional information on defined TCP port numbers can be found at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned transport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## portRangeEnd @@ -483,10 +483,10 @@ Description: ### NEW Description: -: The port number identifying the end of a range of ports. A value of zero indicates that the range end is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. +: The port number identifying the end of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range end is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: Additional information on defined TCP port numbers can be found at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned transport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## ingressInterfaceType @@ -799,6 +799,6 @@ Thomas Graf tagged an issue with the forwardingStatus Information Element and fo Thanks to Eric Vyncke for the review and comments. -Thanks to Qin Wu for the opsdir review and Behcet Sarikay for the genart review. +Thanks to Qin Wu for the opsdir review, Behcet Sarikay for the genart review, and Martin Duke for the tsvart review. Thanks to Mahesh Jethanandani for the AD review.