From 45b0182604d7aed1401daf0fa751fc2e74f3215d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Med Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2024 07:23:38 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Martin Duke Review tsv-art --- draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md index fdfba56..a03f90b 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md +++ b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md @@ -468,10 +468,10 @@ Description: ### NEW Description: -: The port number identifying the start of a range of ports. A value of zero indicates that the range start is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. +: The port number identifying the start of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range start is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: Additional information on defined TCP port numbers can be found at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned tranport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## portRangeEnd @@ -483,10 +483,10 @@ Description: ### NEW Description: -: The port number identifying the end of a range of ports. A value of zero indicates that the range end is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. +: The port number identifying the end of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range end is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: Additional information on defined TCP port numbers can be found at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned tranport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## ingressInterfaceType @@ -799,6 +799,6 @@ Thomas Graf tagged an issue with the forwardingStatus Information Element and fo Thanks to Eric Vyncke for the review and comments. -Thanks to Qin Wu for the opsdir review and Behcet Sarikay for the genart review. +Thanks to Qin Wu for the opsdir review, Behcet Sarikay for the genart review, and Martin Duke for the tsvart review. Thanks to Mahesh Jethanandani for the AD review. From 298878b9b21b1c17a2e2a2796820975930e78d2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Med Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2024 07:56:21 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] nit --- draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md index a03f90b..1445440 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md +++ b/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.md @@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ Description: : The port number identifying the start of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range start is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: See the assigned tranport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned transport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## portRangeEnd @@ -486,7 +486,7 @@ Description: : The port number identifying the end of a range of port numbers. A value of zero indicates that the range end is not specified, i.e., the range is defined in some other way. Additional Information: -: See the assigned tranport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. +: See the assigned transport protocol (e.g., TCP, UDP, DCCP, and SCTP) port numbers at https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers. ## ingressInterfaceType