(
<>
The first step in solving{' '}
- with 3
+ with 3
rows is to{' '}
focus on the pair of{' '}
@@ -984,7 +984,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- Take a look at this , which
+ Take a look at this , which
has two pairs of 1
’s:
@@ -1514,7 +1514,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
@@ -1652,7 +1652,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
Next: Take a look at this{' '}
-
+
There’s only one item (a )
@@ -1904,7 +1904,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
diff --git a/src/contents/5.jp.tsx b/src/contents/5.jp.tsx
index 150b85103..b2c5a1199 100644
--- a/src/contents/5.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/5.jp.tsx
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
ここからは、より複雑な
-
+
を解いてもらおう。たとえば、こういうパズルだ。
>
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ export default () => (
/>
3段の
-
+
(
<>
ではまず、こういった3段の
-
+
の解き方を説明しよう。
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
3段の
-
+
を解く際には、まず
左上と左下に 1{' '}
@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
@@ -1037,7 +1037,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
まず、こちらの
-
+
を見てみな。
>
@@ -1072,7 +1072,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
続いて、こちらの
-
+
を見てみな。
>
@@ -1212,7 +1212,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
まずは、こちらの
-
+
から見ていきましょう。
@@ -1427,7 +1427,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
@@ -1561,7 +1561,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
続いて、こちらの
-
+
をご覧ください。
@@ -1809,7 +1809,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- :
+ :
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index a4a241904..cffa1be58 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ export default () => (
But: The mathboxes were taken by the devil{' '}
😈. To take them back, we must solve{' '}
-
+
. A lunchbox works as follows:
@@ -945,7 +945,7 @@ export default () => (
previous .
- :
+ :
>
)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
index e0b664957..66c089e04 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ export default () => (
奪われた計算箱を取り返すためには、悪魔が出題する
-
+
を解かないといけません。弁当箱には、以下のような法則があります。
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
こちらの
-
+
をご覧ください!
>
@@ -986,7 +986,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
続いて
-
+
。このページの冒頭で紹介した弁当箱です。
>
diff --git a/src/contents/7.en.tsx b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
index 4ae3dfbf8..455d403e7 100644
--- a/src/contents/7.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ export default () => (
Sure. First,{' '}
.
diff --git a/src/contents/7.jp.tsx b/src/contents/7.jp.tsx
index 4498de503..9b3c8c188 100644
--- a/src/contents/7.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/7.jp.tsx
@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
わかりました。まず、
- 。
+ 。
>
)
diff --git a/src/contents/9.jp.tsx b/src/contents/9.jp.tsx
index 90b1f79cb..e4bd323e5 100644
--- a/src/contents/9.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/9.jp.tsx
@@ -885,7 +885,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
-
+
に、「
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 21:55:27 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 03/11] Continue with 5
---
src/components/H.tsx | 5 +-
src/contents/11.en.tsx | 2 +-
src/contents/2.en.tsx | 2 +-
src/contents/3.en.tsx | 4 +-
src/contents/4.en.tsx | 4 +-
src/contents/5.en.tsx | 182 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
src/contents/6.en.tsx | 5 +-
7 files changed, 131 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/components/H.tsx b/src/components/H.tsx
index 861310c8f..1e2a60d94 100644
--- a/src/components/H.tsx
+++ b/src/components/H.tsx
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ interface HProps {
includeTwitter?: boolean
}
| { name: 'pressNext' }
- | { name: 'yesNoQuiz'; postfix?: string }
+ | { name: 'yesNoQuiz'; postfix?: string; lowerCase?: true }
| { name: 'yesNoQuizCorrect' }
| { name: 'yesNoQuizIncorrect' }
| { name: 'yesNoQuizYes'; hideText?: boolean }
@@ -276,7 +276,8 @@ const H = ({ args, highlightType, episodeNumberOverrides }: HProps) => {
if (locale === 'en') {
return (
<>
- 👍 Yes / 👎 No Quiz{args.postfix}
+ 👍 Yes / 👎 No{' '}
+ {args.lowerCase ? 'q' : 'Q'}uiz{args.postfix}
>
)
} else {
diff --git a/src/contents/11.en.tsx b/src/contents/11.en.tsx
index fcea864af..dcd34ea91 100644
--- a/src/contents/11.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/11.en.tsx
@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ export default () => (
I’ll show you another example. This one’s going to be a{' '}
-
+
.{' '}
diff --git a/src/contents/2.en.tsx b/src/contents/2.en.tsx
index 3ad1b13d8..3b3505e66 100644
--- a/src/contents/2.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/2.en.tsx
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ export default () => (
We’ll start this page with a{' '}
-
+
.
{' '}
diff --git a/src/contents/3.en.tsx b/src/contents/3.en.tsx
index 52d6edb8d..85e1ebf93 100644
--- a/src/contents/3.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/3.en.tsx
@@ -771,7 +771,9 @@ export default () => (
Alright.{' '}
- Let’s do a then.
+ Let’s do a{' '}
+ {' '}
+ then.
diff --git a/src/contents/4.en.tsx b/src/contents/4.en.tsx
index d8525c42e..2259a9e95 100644
--- a/src/contents/4.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/4.en.tsx
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
So this is the solution for the first{' '}
- :
+ :
>
)
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
So this is the solution for the second{' '}
- :
+ :
>
)
diff --git a/src/contents/5.en.tsx b/src/contents/5.en.tsx
index 7f91e747e..4debf445b 100644
--- a/src/contents/5.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/5.en.tsx
@@ -329,7 +329,13 @@ export default () => (
Then:{' '}
I will give you{' '}
- {' '}
+ {' '}
to solve.
@@ -953,7 +959,7 @@ export default () => (
Let’s do a{' '}
-
+
{' '}
to check your understanding!
@@ -1223,7 +1229,14 @@ export default () => (
After explaining them, I’ll give you more{' '}
- !
+
+ !
>
)
@@ -1303,8 +1316,8 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- Take a look at this , which
- has two pairs of 1
+ Take a look at this lunchbox, which has two pairs of{' '}
+ 1
’s:
@@ -1494,7 +1507,8 @@ export default () => (
<>
Yes. Hope you were following along!
- Let’s do a now.
+ Let’s do a{' '}
+ now.
>
)
@@ -1651,8 +1665,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- Next: Take a look at this{' '}
-
+ Next: Take a look at this lunchbox:
There’s only one item (a )
@@ -1665,8 +1678,12 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Notice that there’s only one item (a{' '}
- ) on the bottom row.
+ Notice that{' '}
+
+ there’s only one item (a )
+ on the bottom row
+
+ .
>
)
@@ -1676,8 +1693,11 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Okay… let’s assume that we start with the pair of{' '}
- 1’s.
+ Okay…{' '}
+
+ let’s see what happens if we start with the pair of{' '}
+ 1’s.
+
>
)
@@ -1692,8 +1712,10 @@ export default () => (
]}
description={
<>
- Suppose that we start with the pair of{' '}
- 1’s…
+ What happens if we start with
+
+ the pair of 1
+ ’s?
>
}
/>
@@ -1704,20 +1726,23 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Then, which label (out of{' '}
- {' '}
- {' '}
-
- ) should we use for the ?
+ I’m wondering:{' '}
+
+ Which label (out of{' '}
+ {' '}
+ {' '}
+
+ ) should we use for the ?
+
>
)
@@ -1749,16 +1774,21 @@ export default () => (
<>
Can’t use any of the labels for the
-
+ , because
+
+ it’s the only item on the bottom row
>
}
/>
- Therefore: In this scenario,{' '}
-
- you can’t start with the pair of{' '}
- 1’s.
-
+ Therefore:{' '}
+
+ In this scenario,{' '}
+
+ you can’t start with the pair of{' '}
+ 1’s.
+
+
Can’t start with the pair of{' '}
@@ -1804,43 +1834,53 @@ export default () => (
2’s,
- You’ll be looking at{' '}
- just the top two rows, and…
+
+ We can label the on the
+ top as{' '}
+
+ , and…
+
- There are two items () on
- the bottom, which can be labeled as{' '}
- {' '}
- and{' '}
-
- .
+
+ There are two items ()
+ on the bottom, which can be labeled as{' '}
+ {' '}
+ and{' '}
+
+ .
+
- >
- )
- },
- {
- type: 'devil',
- children: (
- <>
- Exactly. Here are the labels for each item:
+
+ Adding labels:{' '}
+ {' '}
+ {' '}
+
+
>
)
}
]}
/>
-
- Adding labels:{' '}
- {' '}
- {' '}
-
-
The rest is simple.
@@ -2024,6 +2064,14 @@ export default () => (
>
)
+ },
+ {
+ type: 'smile',
+ children: (
+ <>
+ Ok, got it!
+ >
+ )
}
]}
/>
@@ -2043,8 +2091,14 @@ export default () => (
<>
I solved all of the{' '}
- so
- far!
+ {' '}
+ so far!
>
)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index cffa1be58..81abf9a12 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ export default () => (
Let’s do a{' '}
-
+
{' '}
to check your understanding!
@@ -942,7 +942,8 @@ export default () => (
<>
Let’s try to apply the rules on the lunchbox from the
- previous .
+ previous{' '}
+ .
:
From 120a6102cff51e2c44cec906397a503e33eb418d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:02:57 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 04/11] Continue with 6
---
src/contents/6.en.tsx | 11 ++++++-----
src/contents/6.jp.tsx | 1 +
2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index 81abf9a12..b6c27993e 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ export default () => (
content: (
<>
- Welcome to the intermediate levels: They’ll be
+ Welcome to the intermediate levels: Things will be
harder than the beginner levels, but you should be able to
handle them!
@@ -131,17 +131,18 @@ export default () => (
We also learned about the mathboxes with 3 or more rows:
+ Lunchbox with 3 rows
- That’s what we’ve learned in the beginner levels:{' '}
- You don’t need to remember them. You just need to
- know that these rules exist, and you should be fine.
+ Note:{' '}
+ You don’t need to memorize the rules. You
+ just need to know that these rules exist, and you should be fine.
You don’t need to remember these rules!>}
+ description={<>You don’t need to memorize these rules!>}
/>
Let’s start the intermediate levels!
>
diff --git a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
index 66c089e04..79e37e8be 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
@@ -124,6 +124,7 @@ export default () => (
そして初級編の最後では、3段以上ある弁当箱の法則について解説しました。
+ 3段の弁当箱
From a60087620bb31a39447a53d61cbe1ff0d094a124 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:10:01 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 05/11] Continue with 6
---
src/contents/6.en.tsx | 16 ++++++++++------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index b6c27993e..62d119ef9 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -160,9 +160,12 @@ export default () => (
<>
We’ll start the intermediate levels.
- As promised: I’ll give you a{' '}
- very difficult question. I’ll give you
- the mathboxes back if you solve it!
+ As promised:{' '}
+
+ I’ll give you a{' '}
+ very difficult question. I’ll give
+ you the mathboxes back if you solve it!
+
>
)
@@ -199,7 +202,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
But before I give you the question, let me introduce you{' '}
- to my partner.
+ to my business partner.
>
)
@@ -208,7 +211,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'thinking',
children: (
<>
- What? Your partner?
+ What? Your business partner?
>
)
},
@@ -250,7 +253,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Thanks for coming! Everyone, this is my partner, Minion.
+ Thanks for coming! Everyone, this is my business
+ partner, Minion.
>
)
From 3e525c25c8deafb40ece3eb33a37ed93910cd268 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:16:06 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 06/11] Continue with 6
---
src/contents/6.en.tsx | 19 ++++++++++++-------
src/contents/6.jp.tsx | 1 -
2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index 62d119ef9..98d768928 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -243,7 +243,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Hello, I’m Minion. How may I help you today, Mr. Devil?
+ Hello, I’m Minion. How may I help you
+ today, Mr. Devil?
>
)
@@ -272,8 +273,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Well, Minion is not a regular dog. He’s got some{' '}
- special tricks.
+ Well, Minion is a special dog. He’s got some{' '}
+ awesome tricks.
Minion, show these guys one of your tricks!
>
@@ -333,9 +334,9 @@ export default () => (
<>
By using my trick,{' '}
-
+
I can convert this lunchbox into a mathbox
-
+
.
@@ -370,7 +371,9 @@ export default () => (
<>
Yes, and importantly:{' '}
- The conversion follows a specific rule.
+
+ The conversion follows a specific rule.
+
Try guessing what this rule is!
@@ -391,7 +394,9 @@ export default () => (
<>
I convert a lunchbox into a mathbox, and
- there’s a specific rule for the conversion
+
+ there’s a specific rule for the conversion
+
>
}
/>
diff --git a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
index 79e37e8be..66c089e04 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.jp.tsx
@@ -124,7 +124,6 @@ export default () => (
そして初級編の最後では、3段以上ある弁当箱の法則について解説しました。
- 3段の弁当箱
From 071276a52f4aac228d13b2cc60c8d5a289f63dd2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:24:32 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 07/11] Continue with 6
---
src/contents/6.en.tsx | 30 ++++++++++++++++++------------
1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/6.en.tsx b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
index 98d768928..5b5aa0d56 100644
--- a/src/contents/6.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/6.en.tsx
@@ -633,8 +633,11 @@ export default () => (
Important: I can only convert{' '}
certain types of lunchboxes into
- mathboxes. A lunchbox must match the following patterns
- to be convertible.
+ mathboxes.
+
+
+ A lunchbox must match the following patterns to be
+ convertible.
First:{' '}
@@ -703,7 +706,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Let’s now add label each item as 🅰️ or{' '}
+ Let’s now label each item as 🅰️ or{' '}
🅱️’s using this rule:
@@ -851,10 +854,10 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
-
+
As long as it follows the same pattern, it doesn’t
matter which items are used.
-
+
Example: Suppose that we have{' '}
@@ -874,8 +877,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- We’ll add 🅰️’s and 🅱️’s as
- follows…
+ We’ll label 🅰️’s and 🅱️’s
+ as follows…
>
)
@@ -1055,7 +1058,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
That means the number of 🅰️’s on the
- bottom right is zero.
+ bottom right is zero.
So: After converting to a mathbox, it
@@ -1081,7 +1084,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
I see, so the number of 🅰️’s on the
- bottom right can be zero.
+ bottom right can be zero.
>
)
@@ -1091,11 +1094,14 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Right: “Some 🅰️’s” can mean
- “Zero 🅰️’s”.
+ Right:{' '}
+
+ “Some 🅰️’s” can mean “
+ Zero 🅰️’s”.
+
- “Some 🅰️’s” can mean “
+ “Some 🅰️’s” can also mean “
Zero 🅰️’s”.
>
From dc875e277d3d38581b7220a5a77b8161762b5bbb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:47:19 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 08/11] Fix 7
---
src/contents/7.en.tsx | 70 +++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
1 file changed, 38 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/7.en.tsx b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
index 455d403e7..2b2a3d311 100644
--- a/src/contents/7.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
@@ -94,7 +94,8 @@ export const StepTwo = () => (
Second: We can’t start with the leftmost pair of{' '}
1
’s because there’s only one item on the bottom (a{' '}
- )
+
+ ).
Therefore,{' '}
@@ -127,9 +128,12 @@ export const StepThree = () => (
children: (
<>
- Third: We’ll need to start with the pair of{' '}
- 2’s again, just
- like the last time.
+ Third:{' '}
+
+ We’ll need to start with the pair of{' '}
+ 2’s
+ {' '}
+ again, just like the last time.
>
)
@@ -167,7 +171,9 @@ export default () => (
You don’t need to understand everything immediately. Even if you
don’t completely get it, please keep reading!
-
+ {' '}
+ After reading a few more pages, you might understand it.{' '}
+ 😉
(
>
}
/>
-
-
- There’s a lot of overlapping materials for the next few pages.
- {' '}
- So even if you have no idea what’s going on, after reading a few
- more pages, you might understand it. 😉
-
>
)
},
@@ -260,7 +259,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- We learned on the last page that:{' '}
+ We learned on the last page that{' '}
I can convert this lunchbox to{' '}
.
@@ -348,7 +347,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Now:
+ Here’s the challenge:
@@ -379,7 +378,7 @@ export default () => (
After running it, it becomes a lunchbox
- that can be converted to .
+ that can be converted to
(
children: (
<>
- Now, here’s the challenge:
+ So, here’s what you need to do:
@@ -572,9 +571,11 @@ export default () => (
]}
/>
+ Randomly filled each icon
+ with
+
{' '}
- を適当に{' '}
- に入れてみた
+
(
children: (
<>
- Now, we’ll the above
- lunchbox, and…
+ Now, we’ll {' '}
+ the above lunchbox, and…
@@ -607,7 +608,8 @@ export default () => (
]}
/>
- We’ll this lunchbox, and…
+ We’ll this lunchbox,
+ and…
@@ -625,7 +627,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Ok, let’s it!
+ Ok, let’s {' '}
+ it!
>
)
@@ -717,9 +720,7 @@ export default () => (
Now, we want to convert this to a mathbox…
But unfortunately:{' '}
-
- I won’t be able to convert this to a mathbox.
-
+ I won’t be able to convert this.
>
)
@@ -737,7 +738,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Why? Because it doesn’t follow this
+ Why not? Because it doesn’t follow this
pattern:
@@ -749,8 +750,10 @@ export default () => (
/>
- There needs to be exactly one 🅱️ on the
- top-right, but that’s not the case here.
+
+ There needs to be exactly one 🅱️ on the
+ top-right, but that’s not the case here.
+
>
)
@@ -770,9 +773,12 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Hmm… if the top-right was a {' '}
- instead of a , it could have
- been converted to .
+ Hmm…{' '}
+
+ if the top-right was a {' '}
+ instead of a , it could
+ have been converted to .
+
It was so close!
>
@@ -783,7 +789,7 @@ export default () => (
If the top-right was a ,
- it could have been converted to
+ it could have been converted to
From 0574b91d2d62b1c6e9fa90bb6c7fce8aa448149c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 22:51:24 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 09/11] Fix 7
---
src/contents/7.en.tsx | 13 +++++++------
src/contents/7.jp.tsx | 6 ++----
2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/7.en.tsx b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
index 2b2a3d311..aa2a60a3a 100644
--- a/src/contents/7.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/7.en.tsx
@@ -811,8 +811,9 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- So: Because it didn’t become{' '}
- at the end…
+ So: Because it didn’t become a lunchbox
+ that can be converted to at
+ the end…
>
)
@@ -826,7 +827,7 @@ export default () => (
It didn’t become a lunchbox
- that can be converted to
+ that can be converted to
(
type: 'dog',
children: (
<>
- Therefore, your answer was incorrect!
+ Your answer was incorrect!
>
)
}
@@ -875,7 +876,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Hopefully you understand what the problem is asking. So
+ Hopefully you understood what the problem is asking. So
let’s state it again:
@@ -950,7 +951,7 @@ export default () => (
<>
The villagers are so close to getting their mathboxes back, but
- they’re struggling with such a difficult problem.
+ they’re struggling with the difficult problem.
(
children: (
<>
- つまり、実行しても{' '}
- {' '}
+ つまり、実行しても {' '}
に変換できる弁当箱にならなかったので…
>
@@ -784,8 +783,7 @@ export default () => (
- {' '}
- に変換できる弁当箱にならなかった
+ に変換できる弁当箱にならなかった
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 23:01:53 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 10/11] Fix 8
---
src/contents/8.en.tsx | 14 ++++++++------
1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/8.en.tsx b/src/contents/8.en.tsx
index 366594067..a06662013 100644
--- a/src/contents/8.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/8.en.tsx
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ export default () => (
We’re doomed!>,
+ title: <>The challenge>,
content: (
<>
(
<>
But we need to solve this to get our mathboxes{' '}
- back! We’re doomed!
+ back!
>
)
@@ -143,7 +143,8 @@ export default () => (
<>
We appreciate it, but this isn’t for kids.
- We tried hard but couldn’t solve it. So I doubt you can.
+ We tried hard but couldn’t solve it. I don’t think you
+ can do it!
>
)
@@ -208,7 +209,8 @@ export default () => (
]}
/>
- We’ll this lunchbox, and…
+ We’ll this lunchbox,
+ and…
@@ -277,7 +279,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'surprised',
children: (
<>
- Wait…! It can’t be…!
+ Wait…! This is…!
>
)
},
@@ -397,7 +399,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'thinking',
children: (
<>
- Hmm…?
+ Hmm… ok, let me hear what you have to say.
>
)
},
From f726184a6c35f95441fb2354058097c26546c6a0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shu Uesugi
Date: Tue, 29 Oct 2019 23:17:48 -0700
Subject: [PATCH 11/11] Fix 8
---
src/contents/8.en.tsx | 87 ++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
1 file changed, 37 insertions(+), 50 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/contents/8.en.tsx b/src/contents/8.en.tsx
index a06662013..c50633d68 100644
--- a/src/contents/8.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/8.en.tsx
@@ -640,11 +640,11 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Let’s it! This time, we’ll
- continue running until the end.{' '}
+ Let’s it!
+ This time, we’ll continue running until the end without
+ stopping.{' '}
- If you can’t wait,{' '}
>
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ export default () => (
- If we it,
+ If we it,
it becomes a lunchbox
@@ -821,35 +821,19 @@ export default () => (
<>
Maybe…
-
+
it can add ?
-
+
>
)
},
- {
- type: 'dog',
- children: (
- <>
- Exactly!
- >
- )
- },
- {
- type: 'thinking',
- children: (
- <>
- What do you mean?
- >
- )
- },
{
type: 'dog',
children: (
<>
- Here’s what I mean:
+ Exactly!
@@ -1052,10 +1036,12 @@ export default () => (
- I see…, so:
+
+ So, to add 1 to a number:
+
@@ -1136,9 +1122,10 @@ export default () => (
type: 'saya',
children: (
<>
+ I got it!
- I got it! First, we’ll use this lunchbox that can be
- converted to :
+ First, we’ll use this lunchbox that can be converted to{' '}
+ :
>
)
@@ -1184,8 +1171,9 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Correct! Let’s {' '}
- it to check!
+ Correct! Let’s{' '}
+ it to
+ check!
(
@@ -1346,7 +1334,8 @@ export default () => (
Therefore: There are many lunchboxes that can
- reproduce .
+ reproduce .{' '}
+ 😉
>
}
@@ -1446,7 +1435,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'sad',
children: (
<>
- Hey Minion, I want to tell you about something…
+ Hey Minion, I want to tell you something…
>
)
},
@@ -1463,8 +1452,10 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Wasn’t that problem too difficult?{' '}
- There’s no way we could’ve come up with an answer
+
+ The problem on the last page was too difficult!
+ {' '}
+ There’s no way we could’ve come up with an answer as
quickly as Saya did.
@@ -1480,7 +1471,7 @@ export default () => (
The previous problem:
- 😢
+ 😢
There’s no way we could’ve come up with
@@ -1493,15 +1484,12 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Please don’t worry! In fact, only a super
- genius would be able to come up with an answer for this
- question.
+ Oh, don’t worry! The problem was very
+ difficult. We didn’t expect you to answer it.
-
- And you don’t need to be a super genius to learn about
- computer science or Y combinator.
-
+ You don’t need to be able to answer questions like this
+ to learn computer science.
>
)
@@ -1518,14 +1506,10 @@ export default () => (
type: 'dog',
children: (
<>
-
- Yes: It was a very difficult question. We
- didn’t expect you to answer it.
-
- As long as you can look at the answer and understand
- why it’s correct, you’ll be fine.
+ As long as you understand it after looking at the
+ answer, you’ll be fine.
>
@@ -1577,7 +1561,8 @@ export default () => (
]}
/>
- However, Saya doesn’t seem too happy.
+ However:{' '}
+ Saya doesn’t seem too happy.
(
children: (
<>
- Hey Minion, I noticed something{' '}
- very strange…
+
+ Hey Minion, I noticed something{' '}
+ very strange…
+
>
)