diff --git a/src/components/H.tsx b/src/components/H.tsx
index 220c0de84..34ca5cec1 100644
--- a/src/components/H.tsx
+++ b/src/components/H.tsx
@@ -909,8 +909,14 @@ const H = ({ args, highlightType, episodeNumberOverrides }: HProps) => {
if (locale === 'en') {
return (
<>
-
- We’re not done yet:
+
+
+ We’re not done yet:
+
Just pausing here for an explanation.
@@ -918,7 +924,17 @@ const H = ({ args, highlightType, episodeNumberOverrides }: HProps) => {
)
} else {
return (
- まだ途中ですが、解説のため一旦止めます!
+
+
+ まだ途中ですが、
+
+ 解説のため一旦止めます!
+
+
)
}
}
@@ -1934,14 +1950,14 @@ const H = ({ args, highlightType, episodeNumberOverrides }: HProps) => {
Things I’m pretty good at:{' '}
- Expository writing (like this course) and{' '}
+ Expository writing (like this course),{' '}
React/TypeScript (
see the repo for this course
- ). I’m okay at product design. I’ve also
- worked with Rails from version 2 to
- version 6.
+ ), and learning new things quickly. I’m okay at{' '}
+ product design. I’ve also worked with{' '}
+ Rails from version 2 to version 6.
Current interests: As a professional EN → JP
@@ -1950,7 +1966,7 @@ const H = ({ args, highlightType, episodeNumberOverrides }: HProps) => {
using AI to augment human intelligence
- . I try to read about deep learning in my spare time.
+ .
diff --git a/src/contents/0.en.tsx b/src/contents/0.en.tsx
index 46de13bcb..587a1c144 100644
--- a/src/contents/0.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/0.en.tsx
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ export default () => (
👨🏻🦳 Paul Graham
- , a co-founder of the firm, said this in{' '}
+ , a co-founder of this firm, said this in{' '}
his 2010 interview
{' '}
@@ -371,8 +371,8 @@ export default () => (
}
/>
- First: I studied computer science at Carnegie Mellon
- University (one of the top schools), and I can also say that{' '}
+ First: I studied computer science in college, and I
+ can also say that{' '}
Y Combinator is one of the coolest concepts in computer science
I learned.
@@ -441,8 +441,19 @@ export default () => (
concepts
, such as AI or blockchain. They genuinely want
- to understand how the software they’re using works.
+ to understand how modern software works (thanks to the latest tech
+ bubble).
+
+ Many non-programmers are
+
+ curious about how modern software works
+ >
+ }
+ />
But they can’t learn it because{' '}
@@ -475,10 +486,13 @@ export default () => (
}
/>
- Downside: I admit that this is not the best way to
- introduce computer science to non-programmers. That’s why I’m
- calling this course a “wild” introduction to
- computer science.
+ Downside: I admit that{' '}
+
+ this approach is not the best way to introduce computer science
+ to non-programmers
+
+ . That’s why I’m calling this course a “wild”
+ introduction to computer science.
The ideal way to teach computer science would be to{' '}
@@ -501,6 +515,7 @@ export default () => (
title: <>How to teach Y Combinator for non-programmers>,
content: (
<>
+
Now, how am I going to teach Y Combinator on this course?
Puzzles, not programming: In this course, I will
teach you Y Combinator using{' '}
@@ -536,8 +551,8 @@ export default () => (
they are optimized for smartphones. A lot
of “learn to code” resources are either (1){' '}
great, but not smartphone-ready or (2){' '}
- smartphone-ready, but not great. I tried to fix
- that. 😉
+ smartphone-ready, but not great. I tried to
+ change that. 😉
(
For programmers: This course is optimized for
non-programmers,{' '}
- so if you’re a programmer and want to learn Y
+ so if you’re a programmer and want to learn about Y
Combinator, there are other better resources.
{' '}
Press “Continue reading” below to learn more.
diff --git a/src/contents/13.en.tsx b/src/contents/13.en.tsx
index 7fc6a4067..47e1d4bfb 100644
--- a/src/contents/13.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/13.en.tsx
@@ -6,8 +6,7 @@ import {
Highlight,
Ul,
UlLi,
- Bold,
- Italic
+ Bold
} from 'src/components/ContentTags'
import H from 'src/components/H'
import BubbleQuotes from 'src/components/BubbleQuotes'
@@ -146,8 +145,11 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Now, here’s a question: What happens when
- you it?
+ Now, here’s a question:{' '}
+
+ What happens when you{' '}
+ it?
+
>
)
@@ -168,9 +170,11 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- I figured it out! I think the result will
- be a lunchbox that can be converted to{' '}
- .
+ I figured it out!{' '}
+
+ I think the result will be a lunchbox that can be
+ converted to .
+
👧🏻 I think the result will be
a
@@ -185,8 +189,10 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Yes! Correct! Saya, You’re exactly right!{' '}
- 🎉
+ Yes! Correct!{' '}
+
+ Saya, You’re exactly right! 🎉
+
>
)
@@ -196,8 +202,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- What? How is it possible that you figured it out so
- quickly?
+ What? How is it possible that you figured
+ it out so quickly?
Saya, did you solve it all in your head?
>
@@ -208,8 +214,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Not really. Actually, I used a trick.{' '}
- Let me explain!
+ Not really. Actually, I used a{' '}
+ trick. Let me explain!
>
)
@@ -250,8 +256,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Oh! The top section is actually a lunchbox that can be
- converted to !
+ Oh! The top section is actually a lunchbox
+ that can be converted to !
(
children: (
<>
- The middle-right section is actually a lunchbox that can
- be converted to !
+ The middle-right section is actually a
+ lunchbox that can be converted to{' '}
+ !
(
<>
Oh! This looks exactly like the one we saw on the last
- page: a lunchbox that reproduces{' '}
- .
+ page:{' '}
+
+ a lunchbox that reproduces{' '}
+ .
+
A lunchbox that reproduces
@@ -608,7 +618,7 @@ export default () => (
But… isn’t that cheating?
- Saya’s strategy was to replace each section with the
+ Saya’s method was to replace each section with the
corresponding mathbox features…
>
@@ -731,13 +741,7 @@ export default () => (
}}
/>
-
- If you{' '}
-
- , the result will be .
-
+
>
)
@@ -746,7 +750,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'surprised',
children: (
<>
- This result is the same as Saya’s method!
+ The result is the same as using Saya’s method!
So… I guess Saya’s method was right…?
@@ -758,8 +762,10 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Yes! Saya’s method was the correct
- approach.
+ Yes!{' '}
+
+ Saya’s method was the correct approach.
+
>
)
@@ -780,13 +786,17 @@ export default () => (
type: 'dog',
children: (
<>
- Let’s step back and review what we learned so far.
- Saya solved the problem by{' '}
-
+
+ Let’s step back and review what we learned so far.
+
+
+
+ 👧🏻 Saya solved the problem by{' '}
+
replacing parts of a lunchbox with the corresponding
mathbox features
-
+
, like this:
>
@@ -812,8 +822,8 @@ export default () => (
As we saw earlier:{' '}
If you replace parts of a lunchbox with the
- corresponding mathbox features, the result will be the
- same.
+ corresponding mathbox features,{' '}
+ the result will be the same.
>
@@ -837,27 +847,16 @@ export default () => (
/>
- the result will be the same.
+ The result will be the same.
-
- Right. That’s what happened in the earlier example—the
- result was in either case.
-
- >
- )
- },
{
type: 'dog',
children: (
<>
- Yes. And I{' '}
+ And I{' '}
encourage you to replace parts of a
lunchbox as much as possible
@@ -1045,8 +1044,8 @@ export default () => (
<>
This mathbox repeats {' '}
- three times and calculates {' '}
- ➕ .
+ three times and calculates {' '}
+ ➕ .
>
)
@@ -1077,7 +1076,7 @@ export default () => (
type: 'surprised',
children: (
<>
- Reall? Please show me how!
+ Really? Please show me how!
>
)
}
@@ -1098,8 +1097,10 @@ export default () => (
<>
Here’s the lunchbox we used earlier on this page.
- We’ll make some changes to this lunchbox to reproduce{' '}
- .
+
+ We’ll make some changes to this lunchbox to reproduce{' '}
+ .
+
>
)
@@ -1114,9 +1115,11 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- I just added some items to this lunchbox. The{' '}
- yellow section is the added
- items.
+
+ Here, I just added some items to this lunchbox.
+ {' '}
+ The yellow background indicates
+ the added items.
>
)
@@ -1124,7 +1127,8 @@ export default () => (
]}
/>
- The yellow section is the added items.
+ The yellow background indicates the added
+ items.
(
type: 'thinking',
children: (
<>
- Hmm… ok, whats’s so special about this lunchbox?
+ Hmm… ok, what’s so special about this lunchbox?
>
)
},
@@ -1140,7 +1144,9 @@ export default () => (
type: 'saya',
children: (
<>
- It turns out that:
+
+ It turns out that:
+
@@ -1173,7 +1179,10 @@ export default () => (
-
+
+ And calculates ➕{' '}
+
+
(
}}
/>
-
- つまり、
- すると、結果は {' '}
- になるのです。
-
+
>
)
@@ -1026,8 +1020,8 @@ export default () => (
この計算箱は、以下のように{' '}
を3回繰り返すことにより、
- ➕{' '}
- を計算できるわけだよね。
+ ➕{' '}
+ を計算できるわけだよね。
>
)
@@ -1148,7 +1142,11 @@ export default () => (
を3回繰り返す
-
+
+ つまり、
+ ➕{' '}
+ を計算できる
+
(
-
+
+ And calculates ➕{' '}
+
+
>
)
@@ -117,9 +120,7 @@ export default () => (
On this page, we’ll{' '}
the
lunchbox that I came up with, and{' '}
- see what steps it goes through{' '}
- before it becomes the same as{' '}
- at the end.
+ see what steps it goes through.
>
)
@@ -153,25 +154,13 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- I see,{' '}
+ Yeah, we need to see{' '}
- let’s see what happens in between the beginning and
- the end!
+ what happens in between the beginning and the end!
>
)
- },
- {
- type: 'saya',
- children: (
- <>
-
- Alright, let’s{' '}
- it!
-
- >
- )
}
]}
/>
@@ -254,13 +243,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
-
- We don’t need to worry about this yellow section for
- now, so:
- {' '}
-
- Let’s ignore this section for now.
-
+ Let’s ignore this section for now. We don’t
+ need to worry about it until later.
We’ll replace it with the “Ignore for Now”{' '}
@@ -293,14 +277,14 @@ export default () => (
name: 'conditionSectionName',
type: 'condition'
}}
- />
- :
+ />{' '}
+ of :
Because is{' '}
- , it chooses{' '}
- .
+ , which is NOT zero, it
+ chooses .
>
@@ -364,10 +348,9 @@ export default () => (
Oh!{' '}
- This yellow section is exactly the same as the last
- time!
- {' '}
- (The one we ignored.)
+ This yellow section is exactly the same as the one we
+ ignored last time!
+
>
)
@@ -390,8 +373,7 @@ export default () => (
Yes:{' '}
- This yellow section, which is exactly the same as
- before, has appeared again.
+ This yellow section has appeared again.
>
@@ -439,14 +421,14 @@ export default () => (
left={
<>
- Before
+ Last time
>
}
right={
<>
- Now
+ This time
>
}
@@ -483,10 +465,9 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- I also noticed that the number in{' '}
- went from{' '}
- to
- .
+ I see, the number in {' '}
+ went from to{' '}
+ .
So it decreased by one.
@@ -618,14 +599,14 @@ export default () => (
left={
<>
- Before
+ Last time
>
}
right={
<>
- Now
+ This time
>
}
@@ -729,8 +710,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- We’re almost done! Again, we’ll un-ignore
- the section we ignored earlier.
+ We’re almost done! I just un-ignored the
+ section we ignored earlier.
@@ -790,14 +771,14 @@ export default () => (
left={
<>
- Before
+ Last time
>
}
right={
<>
- Now
+ This time
>
}
@@ -932,11 +913,14 @@ export default () => (
After some more steps,
- is ,
-
- so it chooses
+ is
+
+ It chooses ,
+ which is
+
+
It repeats three times…
@@ -1037,7 +1021,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Now, here’s the important part: This
+ Now, here’s the important part. This
mathbox has:
@@ -1499,7 +1483,7 @@ export default () => (
This bottom half is what makes reproducing
- possible.
+ possible
(
<>
Yes. And this lunchbox has a{' '}
- special name, actually.
+ special name, actually.
>
)
@@ -1571,7 +1555,7 @@ export default () => (
But it’s really interesting to think that,{' '}
such a simple lunchbox (with only two kinds of food
- items) is necessary to reproduce{' '}
+ items) can reproduce{' '}
.
@@ -1649,7 +1633,7 @@ export default () => (
{
title: (
<>
- We finally get back?
+ Will we get back?
>
),
content: (
@@ -1657,7 +1641,7 @@ export default () => (
After successfully reproducing{' '}
, the villagers are now
- demanding the devil to get it back:
+ demanding the devil to return it:
(
The devil! We reproduced{' '}
using a lunchbox!
- Now, give that back to us!
+ Now, give it back to us!
>
)
},
@@ -1683,7 +1667,7 @@ export default () => (
}
]}
/>
- Will they get it back? Check on the next page!
+ Will the villagers get it back? Check on the next page!
>
)
diff --git a/src/contents/14.jp.tsx b/src/contents/14.jp.tsx
index a23926f7f..fdf612f60 100644
--- a/src/contents/14.jp.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/14.jp.tsx
@@ -36,7 +36,11 @@ const ThreeStepsSummary = () => (
を3回繰り返す
-
+
+ つまり、
+ ➕ {' '}
+ を計算できる
+
>
)
@@ -897,11 +901,14 @@ export default () => (
またいくつかのステップを経た後に、
が {' '}
- になるので、
-
- が残ります
+ になります
+
+ に入っている{' '}
+ が残る
+
+
が3回繰り返され…
diff --git a/src/contents/15.en.tsx b/src/contents/15.en.tsx
index 0b639b14d..c0a841709 100644
--- a/src/contents/15.en.tsx
+++ b/src/contents/15.en.tsx
@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@ import {
P,
HighlightBold,
Highlight,
- Italic,
Ul,
UlLi,
Bold
@@ -233,7 +232,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Well:{' '}
+ Yeah.{' '}
Try filling each of{' '}
and{' '}
@@ -516,7 +515,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- In summary:{' '}
+ So:{' '}
The above lunchbox can do{' '}
addition of two numbers.
@@ -598,7 +597,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- It looks like the previous lunchbox, but it’s slightly
+ It’s similar to the previous lunchbox but slightly
different.
@@ -816,9 +815,12 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- This is amazing! Mathboxes could only do additions and
- subtractions, but lunchboxes can also do
- multiplications!
+ This is amazing!{' '}
+ Mathboxes could only do
+ additions and subtractions, but{' '}
+
+ 🍱 lunchboxes can do multiplications!
+
>
)
@@ -995,7 +997,7 @@ export default () => (
the factorial of
- . If you actually calculate it, the result will be{' '}
+ . If you do the math, the result will be{' '}
.
(
<>
The factorial of .
- If you calculate it, the result is{' '}
+ If you do the math, the result will be{' '}
.
>
}
@@ -1021,7 +1023,7 @@ export default () => (
the factorial of
- . If you actually calculate it, the result will be{' '}
+ . If you do the math, the result will be{' '}
.
(
<>
The factorial of .
- If you calculate it, the result is{' '}
+ If you do the math, the result will be{' '}
.
>
}
@@ -1062,7 +1064,7 @@ export default () => (
Now, I will show you that:{' '}
- Lunchboxes can calculate factorials.
+ 🍱 Lunchboxes can calculate factorials.
>
@@ -1095,7 +1097,7 @@ export default () => (
But this time:{' '}
Instead of using the actual lunchbox, we’ll use the
- following notation:
+ following notation (abbreviation):
>
@@ -1105,7 +1107,7 @@ export default () => (
/>
Instead of the actual lunchbox…
- We’ll use this notation
+ We’ll use this notation (abbreviation)
(
children: (
<>
- Hmm… ok, but why do we need to use this instead of the
- original lunchbox?
+ Hmm… ok, but why do we need to use this notation instead
+ of the original lunchbox?
>
)
@@ -1154,9 +1156,24 @@ export default () => (
{' '}
- Therefore, if we don’t use this simpler notation to
- describe multiplications, we’ll run out of space.
+ Therefore: We need to use this simpler
+ notation to describe multiplications in order to save
+ some space. Otherwise, the lunchbox will be too big.
+ ✨,
+ ,
+ ✨
+ ]}
+ description={
+ <>
+ We’ll use this notation to
+
+ save some space
+ >
+ }
+ />
>
)
},
@@ -1250,10 +1267,6 @@ export default () => (
.
{' '}
-
- So it uses a lunchbox that can calculate
- multiplications.
-
>
)
}
@@ -1279,7 +1292,7 @@ export default () => (
By the way, the bottom half is{' '}
- Y Combinator which we
+ Y Combinator, which we
used on the last page.
>
@@ -1299,8 +1312,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- By using this lunchbox, you can calculate the factorial
- of any number.
+ That’s it! By using this lunchbox, you can
+ calculate the factorial of any number.
>
)
@@ -1333,8 +1346,8 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Let’s use this to calculate the factorial of{' '}
- .
+ Let’s use the above lunchbox to calculate the factorial
+ of .
(
To calculate this, we just need to{' '}
change on the
- earlier lunchbox to .
+ lunchbox to .
>
@@ -1381,7 +1394,7 @@ export default () => (
children: (
<>
- Let’s
+ Let’s it!