From 5813ae1f4b3dd0acde1e78a21b13cc533388e8e3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: John Martin <me@johnmart.in>
Date: Wed, 18 Sep 2013 14:27:42 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] [#1092] Updates helper text for orgs, groups and datasets

---
 ckan/templates/group/snippets/helper.html        | 15 ++++++++-------
 ckan/templates/organization/snippets/helper.html | 16 +++++++---------
 ckan/templates/package/base_form_page.html       |  6 +++---
 3 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ckan/templates/group/snippets/helper.html b/ckan/templates/group/snippets/helper.html
index a73c9d6dde7..38585ab7eae 100644
--- a/ckan/templates/group/snippets/helper.html
+++ b/ckan/templates/group/snippets/helper.html
@@ -4,12 +4,13 @@ <h2 class="module-heading">
     {{ _('What are Groups?') }}
   </h2>
   <div class="module-content">
-    {% trans %}
-      <p>Groups allow you to group together datasets under a community (for
-        example, Civil Liberty data) or topic (e.g. Transport, Health,
-        Environment) to make it easier for users to browse datasets by theme.
-        Datasets can be part of a group, but do not belong to the group for
-        editing or authorisation purposes.</p>
-    {% endtrans %}
+    <p>
+      {% trans %}
+        You can use CKAN Groups to create and manage collections of datasets.
+        This could be to catalogue datasets for a particular project or team,
+        or on a particular theme, or as a very simple way to help people find
+        and search your own published datasets.
+      {% endtrans %}
+    </p>
   </div>
 </div>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/ckan/templates/organization/snippets/helper.html b/ckan/templates/organization/snippets/helper.html
index f0acbd46d73..6ec71c0d67e 100644
--- a/ckan/templates/organization/snippets/helper.html
+++ b/ckan/templates/organization/snippets/helper.html
@@ -4,14 +4,12 @@ <h2 class="module-heading">
     {{ _('What are Organizations?') }}
   </h2>
   <div class="module-content">
-    {% trans %}
-      <p>Organizations act like publishing departments for datasets (for
-        example, the Department of Health). This means that datasets can be
-        published by and belong to a department instead of an individual
-        user.</p>
-      <p>Within organizations, admins can assign roles and authorisation its
-        members, giving individual users the right to publish datasets from
-        that particular organisation (e.g. Office of National Statistics).</p>
-    {% endtrans %}
+    <p>
+      {% trans %}
+        CKAN Organizations are used to create, manage and publish collections
+        of datasets. Users can have different roles within an Organization,
+        depending on their level of authorisation to create, edit and publish.
+      {% endtrans %}
+    </p>
   </div>
 </div>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/ckan/templates/package/base_form_page.html b/ckan/templates/package/base_form_page.html
index 049d83b1ebb..a738a8716c8 100644
--- a/ckan/templates/package/base_form_page.html
+++ b/ckan/templates/package/base_form_page.html
@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@ <h2 class="module-heading"><i class="icon-info-sign"></i> {{ _('What are dataset
       <div class="module-content">
         <p>
           {% trans %}
-          Datasets are simply used to group related pieces of data. These
-          can then be found under a single url with a description and
-          licensing information.
+          A CKAN Dataset is a collection of data resources (such as files),
+          together with a description and other information, at a fixed URL.
+          Datasets are what users see when searching for data.
           {% endtrans %}
         </p>
       </div>