Jack, would you please read this letter I've just written? I'd like to have your opinion.
I'd be glad to tell you what I think.
If you don't think it's any good, please say so. I really want to get this job.
It looks fine to me. But I have one suggestion.
What is it?
If I were you, I'd change the beginning. You should write about your education first.
Good idea, Jack. What do you think about the second part?
Well, I'm afraid it's too short. You should include much more information about your work experience.