Hi Fiona, I've known the result of the writing competition that you entered. You've done a great piece of writing.
Thank you. I wasn't really expecting to win.
So the results was a great surprise.
Yes, but I guess I wasn't satisfied with my writing at all. Anyway, I know you're really good at writing so can you have a look at that sometime? It'll be great if you could give me some help on how I could improve. I really want to be a journalist like you when I'm older.