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 ![Me](/images/me.jpeg)
 
 ## 💁‍♂️ Who am I?
-I'm a business operations professional living in Philadelphia, USA. I like to spend my free time exploring programming and other technical topics. I also like photography, playing guitar and drums, and getting lost on my bike!
+I'm a technical communication professional living in Philadelphia, PA, USA. Outside of work, I'm interested in the intersection of art and technology. I also like photography, playing guitar, piano, and drums, and getting lost on my bike!
 
 For more about me, visit the [About me](https://derekfarr.com/docs/about/about-me) page.
 

content/docs/about/about-me.md

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 * [Plain language](https://www.plainlanguage.gov/)
 * Inclusive writing
 
-My style guide of choice is [Microsoft Manual of Style](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/style-guide). On this website, I enforce the Microsoft style and the preceding principles with [Vale](https://vale.sh/) and its plugin for [alex](https://alexjs.com/).
+My style guide of choice is [Microsoft Manual of Style](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/style-guide).
 
 ## 🧠 My approach to knowledge management
 When I approach a problem related to knowledge management (KM), I like to examine it from 4 points of view. Click the boxes below to learn more about each.

content/docs/articles/change-proxmox-node-ip.md

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 # Rename a Proxmox node
 
 ## Introduction
-Similar to [renaming a Proxmox node](/docs/articles/rename-proxmox-node), changing the IP address of a node in a Proxmox cluster isn't as straightforward as changing the IP address of a conventional Linux host.
+Changing the IP address of a node in a Proxmox cluster isn't as straightforward as changing the IP address of a conventional Linux host. These instructions explain the procedure step-by-step.
 
 ## Instructions
 ### Change node's IP address

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 # Access a remote server from a mobile phone via WireGuard
 
 ## Introduction
-I self-host a few apps on my home network, using a small single-board computer as my server.
+I self-host a few apps on my home network and needed a way to access those apps remotely. My solution? Use [WireGuard](https://www.wireguard.com/) to create a secure <abbr title="Virtual Private Network">VPN</abbr> tunnel to my home server, allowing me to access my self-hosted apps from anywhere.
 
-Until recently, I was only able to access my self-hosted apps at home on my home network. That limitation caused me a few problems.
-
-For example, one of the apps I self-host is [Actual](https://actualbudget.org/), an open-source budgeting app that totally changed the way I manage my personal finances. I love Actual, and I love the idea of keeping my financial data on my home network away from prying eyes. However, my inability to access Actual remotely meant I couldn't update my budget or add transactions without being at home. Annoying!
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-My solution? Use [WireGuard](https://www.wireguard.com/) to create a secure <abbr title="Virtual Private Network">VPN</abbr> tunnel to my home server, allowing me to access my self-hosted apps from anywhere.
-
-## Requirements
 This article describes how to create a bare-bones WireGuard setup that satisfies my basic requirements:
 - I need access to resources on a single server. I don't need to access anything else on my home network or on the internet through the tunnel.
 - I must be able to use my phone as the "client" to access the server.