more text adjustments

most significant of which is changing a line from Orvus to refer to Nayuta instead of Creha and Cygna also fix weird amounts of comma typos
dackst · Feb 3, 2021 · 7dc7a33409cf8d46c155f672a6897eccc15605a4 · 7dc7a33
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commit 7dc7a33409cf8d46c155f672a6897eccc15605a4
diff --git a/script/input/mp_0000d.tsv b/script/input/mp_0000d.tsv
@@ -340,9 +340,9 @@ EV_5_S00_talk_islander
 				that other world and must have survived	
 				many trials and tribulations.	
 0x8090	0x06	Aulbath		ANI_WAIT2	
-0x80ba	0x98	Aulbath		That young lady...and Cygna.	
-				We should be able to trust	
-				them to do the right thing.	
+0x80ba	0x98	Aulbath		We should be able to trust him to	
+				do the right thing regarding that	
+				young lady...and Cygna.	
 0x812a	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THANKS	
 0x8152	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Eartha, Master...	
 0x818e	0x6B	Serpent		Ellipsis	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_0002.tsv b/script/input/mp_0002.tsv
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ talk_Aulbath_sub
 				phantom Yupina Grass...	
 0x1fc5	0x6B	Aulbath		Ellipsis	
 0x1ffa	0x98	ALTO		Well, umm...	
-				(That is pretty	
+				(That IS pretty	
 				 suspicious, huh?)	
 0x2051	0x98	Aulbath		Heheh, well, I will overlook this	
 				for now. Let us just celebrate	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_0110.tsv b/script/input/mp_0110.tsv
@@ -2000,7 +2000,7 @@ EV_3_S22_recovery_asa
 0x24ba9	0x98	Hydol	#6A	Hmm, it seems that you're awake.	
 0x24bf3	0x98	Hydol	#6A	How's your body feeling?	
 0x24cb2	0xBC	Asa		Ellipsis	
-0x24cef	0x98	Asa_b	#0W#6A	...I feel so much better.,,	
+0x24cef	0x98	Asa_b	#0W#6A	...I feel so much better...	
 0x24db1	0x98	Asa_b	#0W#6A	...Doctor, is this...?	
 0x24df6	0x06	Hydol		ANI_WAIT3	
 0x24e1e	0x98	Hydol	#6A	As a matter of fact, Nayuta brought me	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_0112.tsv b/script/input/mp_0112.tsv
@@ -1378,7 +1378,7 @@ talk_Hydol
 				you've given me with my work. You've	
 				been a big help.	
 0x13259	0x98	Hydol		If you are ever not feeling well,	
-				you can always come visit me there,	
+				you can always come visit me there.	
 0x132af	0x98	Hydol		I plan to stay for a little	
 				while longer. I will check	
 				back in as soon as I can.	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_0115.tsv b/script/input/mp_0115.tsv
@@ -333,8 +333,8 @@ talk_Caelum
 0x5717	0x98	Caelum		We will put the new items	
 				on display immediately.	
 0x576e	0x98	Caelum		Hehe, that's some pretty good stuff...	
-0x57b7	0x98	Caelum		Please let us know if discover	
-				anything unusual again,	
+0x57b7	0x98	Caelum		Please let us know if you discover	
+				anything unusual again.	
 0x581f	0x98	Caelum		Huh, it looks like you don't	
 				have anything to give us.	
 0x5873	0x98	Caelum		If you find something that could be	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_1099.tsv b/script/input/mp_1099.tsv
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ QS_24_undertake
 				thought that maybe humans aren't	
 				as bad as I thought.	
 0x48cb	0x06	Gio		ANI_NOD	
-0x48ef	0x98	Gio		Hmm, be that as it may..,	
+0x48ef	0x98	Gio		Hmm, be that as it may...	
 0x491f	0x06	Gio		ANI_GESTURE2	
 0x4948	0x98	Gio		I wish to better understand	
 				the world of humans myself.	

diff --git a/script/input/mp_4000a.tsv b/script/input/mp_4000a.tsv
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ EV_5_S06_help_nemeas
 0x3e82	0x98	NOI	#0W	.....	mp_0000d 0x70fd
 0x3f7e	0x98	Nemeas		Anyway... It seems you are	
 				seeking a way to scale the	
-				walls of Heliograd,	
+				walls of Heliograd.	
 0x407e	0x06	Nemeas		ANI_GESTURE1	
 0x40ca	0x98	Nemeas		Giving Noi some of my power	
 				should solve that problem.	

diff --git a/script/input/noi.tsv b/script/input/noi.tsv
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ talk_Noi
 				we found that resin.	
 0xc74	0x98	NOI		This will help both you	
 				and your sister...	
-0xcbc	0x98	NOI		...I-It's nothing.	mp_3099 0x11ad8
+0xcbc	0x98	NOI		...N-Nevermind.	
 0xd12	0x98	NOI		(Our business is finished.	
 				 We should resume the search	
 				 for Cygna and Zext.)