text adjustments

mostly small adjustments to punctuation and spacing

add spaces between multiple item effects,
   ie [STR 10 DEF 10] instead of [STR 10DEF 10]
use oxford comma
remove quotations around stutters and pauses
remove lingering reference to 'House of Camelope'

EBOOT/eboot.tsv

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 0x21fe90	キャンプメニューを終了しますか？	35	Close camp menu?			
 0x21fed0	#4C今はセーブする事ができません。	35	#4CYou can't save now.			
 0x21fef4	#4C※ステージ攻略中にセーブしたデータは、{ 0a }　ロードするとワールドマップからの再開となります。	95	#4C※Loading data saved during a stage{ 0a }restarts you from the world map.			75
-0x21ff64	タイトル画面に戻りますか？{ 0a }（ゲームの途中経過は失われます）	59	Return to title?{ 0a }(Game progress will be lost)			50
+0x21ff64	タイトル画面に戻りますか？{ 0a }（ゲームの途中経過は失われます）	59	Return to title?{ 0a }(Unsaved progress will be lost)			50
 0x22003c	現在は実行できません。	23	Can't practice now.			19
 0x220054	これ以上は作成できません。	27	Can't make any more.			20
 0x220070	ステージ攻略中は調理を行うことが出来ません。	47	Can't prepare food during a stage.			34
@@ -85,17 +85,17 @@
 0x220424	頭飾りを装備します。	23	Equip headgear.			21
 0x22043c	衣服を装備します。	19	Equip clothes.			
 0x220450	装飾品を装備します。	23	Equip accessories.			
-0x220468	使用アイテムの確認と使用を行います。	39	Check or use usable items.			
-0x220490	食材アイテムを確認します。	27	Check food items.			
-0x2204ac	コレクトアイテムを確認します。	31	Check collectible items.			
-0x2204cc	イベントアイテムを確認します。	31	Check event items.			
+0x220468	使用アイテムの確認と使用を行います。	39	View or use usable items.			
+0x220490	食材アイテムを確認します。	27	View food items.			
+0x2204ac	コレクトアイテムを確認します。	31	View collectible items.			
+0x2204cc	イベントアイテムを確認します。	31	View event items.			
 0x2204ec	弁当の作成を行います。	23	Prepare food.			
-0x220504	クエストの情報を確認します。	31	Check quest info.			
-0x220524	敵の情報を確認します。	23	Check enemy info.			
-0x22053c	獲得した実績を確認します。	27	Check earned trophies.			22
-0x220558	マニュアルを確認します。	27	Check the manual.			
+0x220504	クエストの情報を確認します。	31	View quest information.			
+0x220524	敵の情報を確認します。	23	View enemy information.			
+0x22053c	獲得した実績を確認します。	27	View earned trophies.			22
+0x220558	マニュアルを確認します。	27	View the manual.			
 0x220574	現在の進行状況を保存します。	31	Save current progress.			
-0x220594	セーブデータを読み込みます。	31	Loading saved data.			
+0x220594	セーブデータを読み込みます。	31	Load saved data.			
 0x2205b4	各種セーブデータを削除します。	31	Erase saved data.			
 0x2205d4	ゲームの設定を変更します。	27	Change game settings.			21
 0x2205f0	タイトル画面に戻ります。	27	Return to title screen.			23
@@ -105,12 +105,12 @@
 0x22069c	戦闘ボイスとシステムボイスのＯＮ／ＯＦＦを切り替えます。	59	Turn battle and system voices on and off.			
 0x2206d8	イベントボイスのＯＮ／ＯＦＦを切り替えます。	47	Turn event voices on and off.			
 0x220708	ゲームの難易度を変更します。	35	Change difficulty.			
-0x22072c	状態回復	11	St.Recovery			11
-0x220738	STR上昇	11	STR Up			
-0x220744	INT上昇	11	INT Up			
-0x220750	ｸﾘﾃｨｶﾙUP	3	Crit Up			
-0x22075c	経験値UP	11	EXP Up			
-0x220768	ミラUP	11	Mira Up			
+0x22072c	状態回復	11	 CureStatus			11
+0x220738	STR上昇	11	 STR Up			
+0x220744	INT上昇	11	 INT Up			
+0x220750	ｸﾘﾃｨｶﾙUP	3	 Crit Up			
+0x22075c	経験値UP	11	 EXP Up			
+0x220768	ミラUP	11	 Mira Up			
 0x220774	【HEAL%4d  EXP%5d%s】 %s	27	[HEAL%4d EXP%5d%s] %s			
 0x220790	【%3dP】  %s	15	[%3dP]  %s			
 0x2207a0	【%3dP】  %s　[%.1f％]	23	[%3dP]  %s　[%.1f％]			
@@ -120,10 +120,10 @@
 0x2207ec	片手／	7	1H/			
 0x2207f4	両手／	7	2H/			
 0x2207fc	STR%3d	7	STR%3d			
-0x220804	INT%3d	11	INT%3d			
-0x220810	DEF%3d	11	DEF%3d			
+0x220804	INT%3d	11	 INT%3d			
+0x220810	DEF%3d	11	 DEF%3d			
 0x22081c	DEF%3d	7	DEF%3d			
-0x220824	STR%3d	11	STR%3d			
+0x220824	STR%3d	11	 STR%3d			
 0x220830	INT%3d	7	INT%3d			
 0x220838	】	7	]			
 0x220840	%s	3	%s			
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
 0x220fa4	特殊効果	15	Effect			6
 0x220fb4	作成回数	15	Qty Made			8
 0x220fc4	：	3	：			
-0x220fd8	状態異常回復	15	Recover Status			15
+0x220fd8	状態異常回復	15	   Cure Status			15
 0x220fe8	ＳＴＲ上昇	15	　　　　STR Up			12
 0x220ff8	ＩＮＴ上昇	15	　　　　INT Up			12
 0x221008	ｸﾘﾃｨｶﾙ率UP	15	　Crit Rate Up			14
@@ -251,12 +251,12 @@
 0x221578	セーブする	11	Save			
 0x221584	タイトル画面に戻る	19	Return to Title			15
 0x221598	先に進む	11	Proceed			
-0x2215b8	状態回復	11	St.Recovery			
-0x2215c4	STR上昇	11	STR Up			
-0x2215d0	INT上昇	11	INT Up			
-0x2215dc	ｸﾘﾃｨｶﾙUP	3	Crit Up			
-0x2215e8	経験値UP	11	EXP Up			
-0x2215f4	ミラUP	11	Mira Up			
+0x2215b8	状態回復	11	 CureStatus			
+0x2215c4	STR上昇	11	 STR Up			
+0x2215d0	INT上昇	11	 INT Up			
+0x2215dc	ｸﾘﾃｨｶﾙUP	3	 Crit Up			
+0x2215e8	経験値UP	11	 EXP Up			
+0x2215f4	ミラUP	11	 Mira Up			
 0x221600	【HEAL%4d  EXP%5d%s】 %s	27	[HEAL%4d EXP%5d%s] %s			
 0x22161c	【	3	[			
 0x221620	片手／	7	1H/			
@@ -325,10 +325,10 @@
 0x222918	習得した四季魔法とレベル、魔法スロットの状態を引き継ぎます。	63	Keep learned magic, magic levels, and slots.			44
 0x222958	習得したギアクラフトを引き継ぎます。	39	Keep learned gear crafts.			25
 0x222980	各ステージのリザルト評価状態を引き継ぎます。	47	Keep stage results.			19
-0x2229b0	所持しているお弁当と食材、料理ガイド、調理履歴、弁当箱の数を引き継ぎます。	75	Keep ingredients and food, cooking guides, cooking history and lunch boxes.			75
+0x2229b0	所持しているお弁当と食材、料理ガイド、調理履歴、弁当箱の数を引き継ぎます。	75	Keep food ingredients, cooking guides, cooking history, and lunch boxes.			75
 0x2229fc	所持しているコレクトアイテムと、博物館への寄贈状態を引き継ぎます。	67	Keep collectibles and museum donation status.			
-0x222a40	敵情報の状態を引き継ぎます。	31	Keep enemy info.			
-0x222a60	武器屋、雑貨屋の販売状態と、ノラのランクを引き継ぎます。	59	Keep weapon and general store and farm status.			51
+0x222a40	敵情報の状態を引き継ぎます。	31	Keep enemy information.			
+0x222a60	武器屋、雑貨屋の販売状態と、ノラのランクを引き継ぎます。	59	Keep weapon, general store, and farm status.			51
 0x222a9c	所持している星の欠片を引き継ぎます。	39	Keep owned star shards.			
 0x222ac4	以上の項目を引き継ぎ、ゲームを開始します。	43	Keep selected items and start game.			41
 0x222af0	タイトル画面に戻ります。	27	Return to title screen.			

arg/input/area_names.tsv

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ mp_0103	0x53	area name	 Star Capital Lexendria
 mp_0104	0x53	area name	 Stellarium, Place of Stars
 mp_0105	0x4c	area name	
 mp_0106	0x4c	area name	mp_0105 0x4c
-mp_0110	0x53	area name	 Herschels' House
+mp_0110	0x53	area name	 Herschel Residence
 mp_0111	0x53	area name	 Meteor Workshop
 mp_0112	0x53	area name	 Moonlight Pavilion Inn
 mp_0113	0x53	area name	 Sunset General Store

notes.md

@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ You might find these changes *somewhat* more meaningful/controversal than my shu
 * Moon View Pavillion -> Moonlight Pavilion
   * I can't figure out what the Japanese means beyond "moon", but "Moonlight" sounds better than "Moon View"? at least, "moon" and "light" are used often enough together in English to have its own word. Also "pavillion" is supposedly an obsolete spelling
     * maybe "Luna Vista" to keep the Spanish thing going?
-* Herschel House -> Herschels' House
+* Herschel House -> Herschel Residence
 * Ruined Tower -> Tower Ruins 
   * the whole island is full of fallen ruins, this is another such ruin that happens to be an intact tower (and not a regular old tower than happens to be in ruins)
 

script/input/mp_0000.tsv

@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ talk_Dorado
 0x4187	0x98	Dorado		So I'll let you handle the	
 				monster extermination, Nayuta.	
 0x41e8	0x98	ALTO		Come to think of it, I don't	
-				think I've never seen you	
+				think I've ever seen you	
 				fight before, Dorado...	
 0x4243	0x98	Dorado		H-Hey now, don't damage my reputation.	
 0x428b	0x98	Dorado		E-Even I...!	
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ talk_Lupus
 0x6b85	0x98	Lupus		Hehe, you've certainly lived up to	
 				your reputations as troublemakers.	
 0x6bec	0x6B	ALTO		Sweatdrop	
-0x6c1e	0x98	ALTO		(That's a heck of an accusation...)	
+0x6c1e	0x98	ALTO		(That's one heck of an accusation...)	
 0x6c87	0x98	Lupus		But it's still a shame. If it were	
 				tourist season right now, it would	
 				be even more exciting...	

script/input/mp_0001c.tsv

@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ talk_Dorado
 				I'm concerned another could appear	
 				in the future...	
 0xd49	0x98	Dorado		I'll have to consult with Orvus	
-				about trying to do something	
-				to protect the village.	
+				about trying to protect the	
+				village somehow.	
 0xdab	0x98	Dorado		Thank you for saving	
 				Lyra and Vel for me.	
 0xdf9	0x98	Dorado		...But I never thought I'd	

script/input/mp_0002.tsv

@@ -650,7 +650,7 @@ QS_02_quest_end
 0xa6bc	0x3F	Name		Orvus' Voice	
 0xa6d0	0x98	Aulbath		Hmm, good work.	
 0xa832	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Master, is the	
-				village alright?	
+				village all right?	
 0xa87b	0x06	Aulbath		ANI_NOD	
 0xa8a3	0x98	Aulbath		Yes, though I was on the lookout,	
 				no monsters tried to enter.	
@@ -868,7 +868,7 @@ QS_81_undertake
 0xf826	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Huh, if I look closely at the box...	
 				Doesn't it look like some kind of	
 				writing is engraved in it?	
-0xf8a9	0x98	NOI	#6A	That's... the ancient	
+0xf8a9	0x98	NOI	#6A	That's...the ancient	
 				script of the Mitos...?	
 0xf911	0x98	Aulbath		Perhaps it contains a	
 				hint for opening the box.	
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ QS_81_quest_end
 0x11380	0x06	NOI		ANI_WAIT	
 0x113a5	0x98	Aulbath		Hmm... Please do.	
 0x1142a	0x40	UNDEF		Nayuta and the others decided to head to the	
-				Herschels' house. They explained the situation	
+				Herschel residence. They explained the situation	
 				to Eartha, who performed the star shard analysis.	
 EV_2_S04_under_noi					
 0x11760	0x98	ALTO		(...In the end, Cygna wasn't	

script/input/mp_0003.tsv

@@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ QS_34_undertake
 0x10f8a	0x06	Norma		ANI_NOD	
 0x10fb0	0x98	Norma	#6A	Yes, that is correct.	mp_0003 0x10455
 0x10fe7	0x06	Norma		ANI_WAIT2	
-0x1100f	0x98	Norma	#6A	...Can you grant my request?	
+0x1100f	0x98	Norma	#6A	...Will you grant my request?	
 0x1104f	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE2	
 0x11079	0x98	ALTO		It won't be easy, but...	
 				I'll try to do as much as I can.	

script/input/mp_0003c.tsv

@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@ talk_Crux
 0x1669	0x98	Crux		So that these small islands won't	
 				become stuck and isolated, we'll	
 				brace ourselves and keep sailing...	
-0x16e0	0x98	Crux		Well, that's what	
-				the captain says.	
+0x16e0	0x98	Crux		Well, that's what the	
+				captain says, anyway.	
 talk_Axe					
 0x17aa	0x98	Axe		Nayuta... Looks like	
 				you're awake.	
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ talk_Camelope
 0x280c	0x98	Camelope		I had a long discussion with Sasha,	
 				and she decided to return and visit	
 				the family home.	
-0x287f	0x98	Camelope		The House of Camelope is a prominent merchant	
+0x287f	0x98	Camelope		The Camelopes are a prominent merchant	
 				family in charge of a vast trade network...	
 				We have plenty of stockpiled goods.	
 0x2905	0x98	Camelope		...Shall I order the stock to be released	

script/input/mp_0100.tsv

@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ EV_3_S25_invite_creha
 0x10a95	0x98	ALTO	#6A	You know, about that,	
 				I'd like to have a word with you...	
 0x10af7	0x40	UNDEF		Nayuta told Creha about the invitation	
-				to the Herschels' house.	
+				to the Herschel residence.	
 0x10b53	0x6B	Creha		Surprise	
 0x10b86	0x98	Creha		...To your house, Nayuta?	
 0x10bd6	0x98	Creha		Noi, is that all right?	

script/input/mp_0101.tsv

@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ EV_1_S00_go_jungle
 0xfb90	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Haha, that's good to hear.	
 0xfbc6	0x98	ALTO	#6A	By the way... There's a bunch	
 				of things we wanted to ask you.	
-0xfc3e	0x98	NOI		'Th-Things'?	
+0xfc3e	0x98	NOI		'Things'?	
 0xfc6e	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE1	
 0xfc98	0x98	ALTO	#6A	This world...	
 				Lost Heaven.	

script/input/mp_0110.tsv

@@ -2758,7 +2758,7 @@ EV_8_S04_talk_noi
 0x34970	0x06	ALTO		ANI_SIT1	
 0x34a12	0x06	NOI		ANI_WAKE_UP	
 0x34b7c	0x40	UNDEF		Nayuta and Lyra brought Noi to the	
-				Herschels' house in order to care for her.	
+				Herschels residence in order to care for her.	
 0x34be5	0x40	UNDEF		The islanders were thrilled	
 				when they noticed Noi, but...	
 0x34c44	0x40	UNDEF		When they learned that Noi needed treatment,	

script/input/mp_0112.tsv

@@ -1788,7 +1788,7 @@ talk_Eida_Creha
 				to return, you come back all wet.	
 0x186b4	0x98	Lyra		...Here, I'll lend you a towel,	
 				so dry yourself off properly, okay?	
-0x18711	0x98	Creha		'Tao-el'...?	
+0x18711	0x98	Creha		'Towel'...?	
 0x1873b	0x6B	Lyra		Sweatdrop	
 0x1876d	0x98	Lyra		F-Forget it, just hold still.	
 				(Oh, all right, if I have to...)	

script/input/mp_0113.tsv

@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ QS_25_ask_Sasha
 				You told me...	
 0x9fc7	0x98	Bootie	#6A	N-Ngooh!	
 				Don't say that!	
-0xa01c	0x98	Sasha	#6A	...O-Oh.	mp_0005c 0x3562
+0xa01c	0x98	Sasha	#6A	...Oh, um.	mp_0005c 0x3562
 0xa046	0x6B	Sasha		Sweatdrop	
 0xa079	0x6B	ALTO		Sweatdrop	
 0xa0ab	0x06	ALTO		ANI_CHAGRINED	

script/input/mp_0115c.tsv

@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ talk_Vavo
 				on his research assistant.	
 0x6d18	0x98	Vavo		To repay him, I want to	mp_0115c 0x6c1d
 				show him great results	
-				of my research someday.	
+				from my research someday.	
 0x6db3	0x98	Vavo		All the aquatic organisms in this room	
 				were found suspended inside ice crystals.	
 0x6e0e	0x98	Vavo		Using a special process, we are	

script/input/mp_1099.tsv

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ QS_24_undertake
 0x4996	0x06	ALTO		ANI_TALK	
 0x49bc	0x98	ALTO	#6A	I see... I think I get the idea.	
 0x4a19	0x98	ALTO	#6A	But, what, specifically,	
-				should I do?.	
+				should I do?	
 0x4a71	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THINK2	
 0x4a99	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Don't tell me you want	
 				to come to my world too?	
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ QS_24_quest_end
 0x5a52	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Yes. If you want,	
 				please take them.	
 0x5add	0x06	ALTO		ANI_HANDOVER	
-0x5b33	0x40	UNDEF		Handed over Pacific Flying Squid.	
+0x5b33	0x40	UNDEF		Handed over Flying Squid.	
 0x5b75	0x40	UNDEF		Handed over Island Loco Moco.	
 0x5bb3	0x40	UNDEF		Handed over Ruins Rock Salt.	
 0x5d05	0x98	Gio		Hmm, well, well, well...	
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ QS_34_consultation
 0x86fa	0x98	Gio		Well, if you want to calm two people,	
 				you need something better than an herb.	
 0x8773	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE1	
-0x879d	0x98	ALTO	#6A	'Something...better'?	
+0x879d	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Something...better?	
 0x87d3	0x06	Gio		ANI_NOD	
 0x87f7	0x98	Gio		Yes, oil from an aromatic tree	
 				has a superior calming effect.	

script/input/mp_4100.tsv

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ EV_4_S10_meet_seram
 0x228e	0x06	Seram		ANI_GESTURE1	
 0x22b9	0x98	Seram		From here on out, our actions won't	
 				be so repetitive and predictable.	
-0x231b	0x98	ALTO	#6A	The...k-key?	
+0x231b	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Th-The...'key'?	
 0x234e	0x06	NOI		ANI_GESTURE2	
 0x2377	0x98	NOI	#6A	Wh-What are you saying!?	mp_0101 0x1f77e
 0x23b8	0x06	Seram		ANI_WAIT	

script/input/mp_5200.tsv

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ EV_5_S19_meet_zext
 				world down a righteous path.	
 0x313c	0x98	Zext	#0W	Those humans worshipped	
 				us... As a race of 'gods.'	
-0x319c	0x98	ALTO	#0W#240x#270y	'A race...of gods'...	
+0x319c	0x98	ALTO	#0W#240x#270y	A race...of 'gods'...	
 0x3240	0x40	ALTO		Then... the mural in Heimmel...	
 0x33e3	0x98	Seram		Heh, an image of the Mitos	
 				leading your world.	

script/input/mp_7099c.tsv

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ EV_7_S14_battle_zext
 				to take it back.	
 0x2a2c	0x98	Zext	#4A	Back to a beautiful world where	
 				so many lives once prospered!!	
-0x2a9f	0x98	Zext	#2W#6A#18S	Recreation, begin!!	
+0x2a9f	0x98	Zext	#2W#6A#18S	Re-creation, begin!!	
 0x2cb1	0x06	Zext		ANI_WAIT	
 0x2d33	0x06	ALTO		ANI_TENSION_WAIT	
 0x2df5	0x06	NOI		ANI_WORRIED	
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ EV_7_S14_battle_zext
 0x30c9	0x98	Zext	#140x#120y	The temporary history created by	
 				foolish humans is now at an end...!	
 0x314c	0x06	ALTO		ANI_TENSION_STRONG_DENY	
-0x3195	0x98	ALTO	#6A#16S	...As I thought,	
-				#16Syou're wrong!!	
+0x3195	0x98	ALTO	#6A#16S	...After all this,	
+				#16Syou're still wrong!!	
 0x31ec	0x98	ALTO	#6A	I lived on the surface, so I know...	
 				Humanity isn't foolish!	
 0x3246	0x98	ALTO	#6A	If a human makes a mistake, then	

text/input/item.tsv

@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@
 0xc1c0	desc	Strange peach with a deep sweet flavor. Said to give eternal youth.
 0xc234	name	Elemi Resin
 0xc24c	desc	Colorless and transparent resin. Used to repair broken lenses.
-0xc2c0	name	Pacific Flying Squid
+0xc2c0	name	Flying Squid
 0xc2d8	desc	Remnant Island specialty. Sun-dried.
 0xc34c	name	Ruins Rock Salt
 0xc364	desc	Remnant Island specialty. Naturally occurring salt crystals.
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 0x11be4	name	Hot Dog
 0x11bfc	desc	Easy dish with sausage between bread.
 0x11c70	name	Jungle Rice
-0x11c88	desc	Boxed lunch packed with deluxe spicy meat and rice.
+0x11c88	desc	Boxed lunch packed with spicy meat and rice.
 0x11cfc	name	Roast
-0x11d14	desc	Teriyaki-cooked meat. Mouthwatering is inevitable.
+0x11d14	desc	Teriyaki-cooked meat. Makes your mouth water.
 0x11d88	name	Half-Cooked Burger
 0x11da0	desc	Half-cooked sunny side up eggs with a round burger.
 0x11e14	name	Noble Boxed Lunch
@@ -1103,7 +1103,7 @@
 0x12d64	name	Darkness Stew
 0x12d7c	desc	Mysterious soup. Its appearance and flavor are incredible.
 0x12df0	name	Getty Dog
-0x12e08	desc	Made of mystery meat. Herbs enhance the flavor.
+0x12e08	desc	Made of mystery meat. Herbs enhance its flavor.
 0x12e7c	name	Dynasty Tripe
 0x12e94	desc	Guts stew with traditional seasoning.
 0x12f08	name	Boiled Eyes