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script/input/mp_0000.tsv

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ talk_Dorado
 				And at least ask for her name...!	
 0x339b	0x98	Dorado		She must be the daughter of some	
 				noble visiting the island.	
-0x3401	0x98	Dorado		...Aah, it's no use.	
+0x3401	0x98	Dorado		...*sigh*, it's no use.	
 				Just thinking about her	
 				makes my heart race!	
 0x34a7	0x98	Dorado		N-Nayuta!?	
@@ -272,8 +272,8 @@ talk_Lupus
 0x5980	0x98	ALTO		W-Well, umm...	
 0x59b0	0x98	Lupus		Haha, it's all good though.	
 0x59e8	0x98	Lupus		Even though there's lots of things about this	
-				case that pique my interest, it's all good as	
-				long as everything worked out fine in the end.	
+				case that pique my interest, it's all good,	
+				as everything worked out fine in the end.	
 0x5a73	0x98	Lupus		Anyway, tell me about it when	
 				you get the chance. It seems	
 				pretty interesting.	
@@ -282,14 +282,14 @@ talk_Lupus
 				cured Eartha's illness, and why Cygna	
 				hasn't been around lately...	
 0x5bd4	0x98	Lupus		Even though there's lots of things about this	mp_0000 0x59e8
-				case that pique my interest, it's all good as	
-				long as everything worked out fine in the end.	
+				case that pique my interest, it's all good,	
+				as everything worked out fine in the end.	
 0x5c5f	0x98	Lupus		Anyway, tell me about it when	mp_0000 0x5a73
 				you get the chance. It seems	
 				pretty interesting.	
 0x5cf9	0x98	Lupus		Even though there's lots of things about this	mp_0000 0x59e8
-				case that pique my interest, it's all good as	
-				long as everything worked out fine in the end.	
+				case that pique my interest, it's all good,	
+				as everything worked out fine in the end.	
 0x5d84	0x98	Lupus		Anyway, tell me about it when	mp_0000 0x5a73
 				you get the chance. It seems	
 				pretty interesting.	
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ talk_Lupus
 				right now, especially you, Dorado.	
 0x5f99	0x98	Lupus		I'll go see how she's doing later.	
 0x5fdc	0x98	Lupus		...Sorry, but I should let	
-				my grandpa know first.	
+				Grandpa know first.	# he's still talking directly to Dorado here
 0x6065	0x98	Lupus		There exist some people who	
 				claim this world is spherical.	
 0x60ce	0x98	Lupus		There sure are some weirdos	
@@ -1295,7 +1295,7 @@ QS_11_fourth_hint
 0x13654	0x98	Dorado		Hey, what's wrong, Nayuta?	
 				Is there something on my face?	
 0x136b3	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THINK2	
-0x136db	0x98	ALTO	#6A	(The note said it to check	
+0x136db	0x98	ALTO	#6A	(The note said to check	
 				 the knight's backside...)	
 0x13739	0x98	ALTO	#6A	(If someone mentions a knight in this town,	
 				 they're probably talking about Dorado...)	
@@ -1462,7 +1462,7 @@ QS_12_quest_end
 				It's a flower from the East	
 				that's supposed to never wither.	
 0x15d0d	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Sasha said in the language of flowers,	
-				it means, 'eternal love.'	
+				it means 'eternal love.'	
 0x15d67	0x06	Sculp		ANI_WAIT2	
 0x15d8f	0x98	Sculp		N-Nayuta, you...	
 				Just how did you bring me	

script/input/mp_0000c.tsv

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ talk_Dorado
 0xbde	0x98	Bootie		...Hey, don't ignore me.	
 				Take me with you too!	
 0xc2d	0x6B	Dorado		Sweatdrop	
-0xc8f	0x98	Dorado		Ah, you're so annoying!!	
+0xc8f	0x98	Dorado		Ugh, you're so annoying!!	
 				This is a job for adults!	
 0xcdf	0x98	Dorado		Besides, didn't you just get scared	
 				when I was attacked by that monster	
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ talk_Sculp_add
 				the lineup of vegetables for sale at	
 				the general store will increase.	
 0x30ba	0x07	System	#4C	If you find soil,	mp_0000 0x9d16
-				be sure to bring it here.	
+				be sure to bring it to him.	
 0x3150	0x98	Sculp		Hmm, Nayuta...	mp_0000 0x9dac
 				It looks like you have	
 				some good soil again.	
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ talk_Aquela
 				 caused those wars in the past...?)	
 0x43dd	0x98	NOI		(I-It's not impossible... Maybe.)	
 0x4429	0x98	Aquela		I am sure my ancestors will be watching	
-				over you as you two go about the mission	
+				over you two as you go about the mission	
 				you must complete...	
 0x44a3	0x98	Aquela		I will not pry into the details,	
 				but please, do your best.	

script/input/mp_0000d.tsv

@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ EV_5_S00_talk_islander
 				that other world and must have survived	
 				many trials and tribulations.	
 0x8090	0x06	Aulbath		ANI_WAIT2	
-0x80ba	0x98	Aulbath		That young lady... and Cygna.	
+0x80ba	0x98	Aulbath		That young lady...and Cygna.	
 				We should be able to trust	
 				them to do the right thing.	
 0x812a	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THANKS	

script/input/mp_0001.tsv

@@ -630,13 +630,13 @@ QS_35_quest_start
 				 before somewhere...)	
 0xb96a	0x98	Ursaminor		...I found it in front of the inn.	
 0xb9d4	0x06	Ursaminor		ANI_WAIT2	
-0xba00	0x98	Ursaminor		I think... it belonged to my	
+0xba00	0x98	Ursaminor		I think...it belonged to my	
 				sister who ran away home.	
 0xba44	0x6B	ALTO		Exclamation	
 0xba76	0x06	ALTO		ANI_SURPRISE_WEAK	
 0xbaa5	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Y-Your runaway sister!?	
 0xbaf0	0x06	ALTO		ANI_COMPLAIN	
-0xbb1a	0x98	ALTO	#6A	That means... she could	
+0xbb1a	0x98	ALTO	#6A	That means...she could	
 				be on Remnant Island!?	
 0xbb86	0x06	Ursaminor		ANI_NOD	
 0xbbb0	0x98	Ursaminor		...Possibly.	
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ QS_35_undertake
 0xc9b9	0x98	ALTO	#6A#16S	Eeeeeeeeh!?	
 0xc9eb	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE1	
 0xca15	0x98	ALTO	#6A	R-Reticul...	
-				Is she that... adventurer!?	
+				Is she that...adventurer!?	
 0xca64	0x6B	Ursaminor		Exclamation	
 0xca9b	0x06	Ursaminor		ANI_ANGRYTALK	
 0xcacb	0x98	Ursaminor		...What do you mean?	
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ QS_35_undertake
 				Can you give this to her?	
 0xcff2	0x06	Ursaminor		ANI_HANDOVER	
 0xd029	0xC1	System		obtained.	mp_0000 0x7558
-0xd107	0x98	ALTO	#6A	It's a... letter?	
+0xd107	0x98	ALTO	#6A	It's a...letter?	
 0xd13d	0x06	Ursaminor		ANI_NOD	
 0xd167	0x98	Ursaminor		...I at least want her to know	
 				that Father and I are well.	
@@ -1146,7 +1146,7 @@ EV_8_S02_meet_lyra
 				always by my side.	
 0x14dba	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE1	
 0x14de4	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Since now is a good	
-				opportunity, I want	
+				opportunity, I want to	
 				say thank you.	
 0x14e48	0x06	Lyra		ANI_NOD	
 0x14e8b	0x98	Lyra	#1W	Y-Yeah...	
@@ -1192,7 +1192,7 @@ EV_4_S13_meet_creha
 0x16236	0x98	ALTO	#6A	Phew, thank goodness...	
 				Seems like nothing happened.	
 0x1628e	0x06	ALTO		ANI_WAIT	
-0x162b4	0x98	Creha		Nothing...?	
+0x162b4	0x98	Creha		'Nothing'...?	
 0x162e8	0x06	ALTO		ANI_SCRATCH_HEAD	
 0x16316	0x98	ALTO	#6A	No, there was just something	
 				I was a little worried about.	
@@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ EV_4_S13_meet_creha
 0x16fcb	0x98	Creha	#1W	I am sure that is what it	
 				means to be 'human.'	
 0x1702f	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THINK	
-0x17064	0x98	ALTO	#2W#6A	Help others...?	
+0x17064	0x98	ALTO	#2W#6A	'Help others'...?	
 				You might be right.	
 0x170bf	0x98	ALTO	#1W#6A	That is pretty much the core	
 				principle of Cygna's Handyman	

script/input/mp_0001c.tsv

@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ talk_Dog_before
 				with Eartha immediately.	
 0x3905	0x40	UNDEF		Nayuta returned home, and talked	mp_0001 0x3b76
 				to Eartha about the stray dog.	
-0x3969	0x40	UNDEF		Though Eartha was surprised at first, she gladly 	mp_0001 0x3bda
+0x3969	0x40	UNDEF		Though Eartha was surprised at first, she gladly	mp_0001 0x3bda
 				approved of the idea once informed of the situation.	
 0x3afc	0x98	Dog		Ruff, ruff.	mp_0001 0x38bf
 0x3b26	0x98	ALTO		Huh, I haven't seen a dog around before.	mp_0001 0x3d94
@@ -374,7 +374,7 @@ EV_6_S09_help_dorado
 0x600f	0x98	ALTO		Dorado!	
 0x603e	0x06	NOI		ANI_COMPLAIN	
 0x6067	0x98	NOI		Are you all right!?	
-0x60c9	0x98	Dorado	#0W#6A#275x#230y	Oh, it's, it's Nayuta...	
+0x60c9	0x98	Dorado	#0W#6A#275x#230y	Oh, i-it's Nayuta...	
 0x6110	0x98	Dorado	#0W#6A#275x#230y	Shit, how could a monster like that appear...	
 0x6177	0x98	ALTO		The monster...	
 				Where's Vel!?	

script/input/mp_0001d.tsv

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ talk_Dog_before
 				with Eartha immediately.	
 0x1349	0x40	UNDEF		Nayuta returned home, and talked	mp_0001 0x3b76
 				to Eartha about the stray dog.	
-0x13ad	0x40	UNDEF		Though Eartha was surprised at first, she gladly 	mp_0001 0x3bda
+0x13ad	0x40	UNDEF		Though Eartha was surprised at first, she gladly	mp_0001 0x3bda
 				approved of the idea once informed of the situation.	
 0x1540	0x98	Dog		Ruff, ruff.	mp_0001 0x38bf
 0x156a	0x98	ALTO		Huh, I haven't seen a dog around before.	mp_0001 0x3d94

script/input/mp_0002.tsv

@@ -128,13 +128,13 @@ talk_Aulbath_sub
 0x2454	0x98	Aulbath		She has a strong spirit, but	
 				she has a tendency to hide	
 				her own shortcomings.	
-0x24ac	0x98	Aulbath		Nayuta, it is especially during times 	
+0x24ac	0x98	Aulbath		Nayuta, it is especially during a time	
 				like this that you should support her.	
 0x24fd	0x98	ALTO		Yes...!	mp_0001 0xfd91
 0x2549	0x98	Aulbath		She has a strong spirit, but	mp_0002 0x2454
 				she has a tendency to hide	
 				her own shortcomings.	
-0x25a1	0x98	Aulbath		Nayuta, it is especially during times 	mp_0002 0x24ac
+0x25a1	0x98	Aulbath		Nayuta, it is especially during a time	mp_0002 0x24ac
 				like this that you should support her.	
 0x2628	0x98	Aulbath		This is not the first	
 				time that Cygna has	
@@ -759,7 +759,7 @@ QS_02_stopperB
 				you going? Come back here.	
 0xd9bc	0x98	ALTO		Y-Yes!	mp_0002 0xd4f0
 QS_11_get_treasure					
-0xdbc0	0x98	ALTO		'A vehicle for setting off on a journey...?'	mp_0000 0x13e59
+0xdbc0	0x98	ALTO		'A vehicle for setting off on a journey'...?	mp_0000 0x13e59
 0xdc0f	0x98	ALTO		It sounds like the hiding place	
 				is under this boat, but there's	
 				no space for Vel to have put it..	
@@ -788,9 +788,9 @@ QS_24_get_salt
 				island specialties. Let's go	
 				bring them to Geo.	
 0xe4d4	0x06	ALTO		ANI_THINK2	
-0xe4fc	0x98	ALTO		Isn't there still the 'local cuisine'	
+0xe4fc	0x98	ALTO		Isn't there still the 'local dish'	
 				that the elder mentioned...?	
-0xe55f	0x98	ALTO		But it's the specialty dish of someone	
+0xe55f	0x98	ALTO		But it's the specialty of someone	
 				you wouldn't think of as a cook...	
 				...Just who could it be?	
 QS_81_quest_start					
@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ QS_81_undertake
 				for the 'power stations' of	
 				astral power.	
 0x1000d	0x06	ALTO		ANI_GESTURE2	
-0x10037	0x98	ALTO		'Power stations?'	
+0x10037	0x98	ALTO		'Power stations'?	
 0x1007e	0x06	Aulbath		ANI_THINK	
 0x100a8	0x98	Aulbath		Hmm... It sounds like they are a	
 				place where power congregates.	
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ QS_81_undertake
 0x10476	0x98	ALTO		(Those places on each continent where	
 				 the wardens were imprisoned...	
 				 Could they be...?)	
-0x104f0	0x98	ALTO		(And, 'changed as they should be?')	
+0x104f0	0x98	ALTO		(And, 'changed as they should be'?)	
 0x10539	0x98	ALTO		(The proper order of the seasons...	
 				 ...Maybe we'll need to put some	
 				 thought into this.)	

script/input/mp_0002d.tsv

@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ tuto_Aulbath
 				battle, make sure to be prepared.	
 talk_Michy					
 QS_58_find_Michy1					
-0x321a	0x3F	Name		Mysterious Creature	
+0x321a	0x3F	Name		Strange Animal	
 0x3233	0x98	Michy		Mishishi.	
 0x325d	0x6B	ALTO		Surprise	
 0x3297	0x06	ALTO		ANI_SURPRISE_WEAK	

script/input/mp_0003.tsv

@@ -343,8 +343,8 @@ talk_Axe
 				this all the time.	
 0x6d40	0x98	ALTO		Yeah, I know! ♪	
 0x6d6e	0x98	Axe		Oh man... I can't convince you of	
-				anything I have to say you've got	
-				that twinkle in your eyes.	
+				anything I have to say when you've	
+				got that twinkle in your eyes.	
 0x6e19	0x98	Axe		Though I WAS a little scared back there,	
 				I still gotta to get the job done.	
 0x6e89	0x98	Axe		Now then, it's time to	
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ talk_Carina
 0x7b54	0x98	Carina		Hehe, but I'm glad he came	
 				home in one piece! ㈱	
 				Family safety is first.	
-0x7c13	0x98	Carina		Look Cory, your father's home!	
+0x7c13	0x98	Carina		Look Cory, Daddy's home!	
 0x7c54	0x98	baby		Gaga.	
 0x7cbd	0x98	Carina		Heh, Nayuta.	
 				Have you finished	
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ talk_Bell
 0x8b7e	0x98	Bell		Hey, Cory, what's that stuff	
 				drying out in front of our house?	
 0x8bd7	0x98	Bell		Too bad, time's up!	
-				The answer was 'fish!!'	
+				The answer was 'fish'!!	
 0x8c1f	0x98	baby		Abubu...	
 talk_Collie					
 0x8ca2	0x98	Collie		Aah...	
@@ -590,8 +590,8 @@ talk_Ursaminor_Reticul
 				What are you doing here?	
 0x9ffb	0x3F	Name		Spirited Girl	
 0xa010	0x98	Reticul		You're the one who's surprised me.	
-				Why are you here...?	
-0xa060	0x98	Reticul		Oh right, Father has done business in	
+				Why are YOU here...?	
+0xa060	0x98	Reticul		Oh right, Papa has done business in	
 				this area for a long time, hasn't he?	
 				...Sorry, I forgot.	
 0xa0db	0x3F	Name		Youth with Rucksack	
@@ -623,10 +623,10 @@ talk_Ursaminor_Reticul2
 talk_Vavo					
 0xa4f0	0x98	Vavo		There is a legend that on the	
 				other side of the End of the	
-				World is a never-ending 'Hell.'	
+				World is a bottomless 'Hell.'	
 0xa55f	0x98	Vavo		Since it mainly only affects the northern reaches	
-				of the continent, which is close to the End, the	
-				disease was named 'Hell Fever,' but...	
+				of the continent close to the End, the disease	
+				was named 'Hell Fever,' but...	
 0xa5f0	0x98	Vavo		...As a matter of fact, there have been	
 				recent reports that the 'End' has been	
 				gradually expanding towards this island...	
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ talk_Vavo
 				him from time to time to	
 				further your own studies.	
 0xaa1e	0x98	Vavo		Professor Volans' ideas are strange,	
-				strange, but very thought-provoking.	
+				but very thought-provoking.	
 0xaa6c	0x98	Vavo		You might want to talk with	mp_0003 0xa99c
 				him from time to time to	
 				further your own studies.	
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ talk_Creha
 0xad80	0x98	ALTO		Anyway, just stay healthy,	
 				and don't overdo it.	
 0xadd1	0x98	ALTO		If you collapsed, Eartha,	
-				Noi and I would all be	
+				Noi, and I would all be	
 				worried about you...	
 0xae34	0x98	Creha		...Understood.	
 				I'll be careful.	
@@ -1380,9 +1380,9 @@ EV_4_S09_creha_scene_3rd
 0x16be1	0x98	Lyra	#2W#6A	...But even so,	
 				I'm curious.	
 0x16c36	0x06	Lyra		ANI_WAIT3	
-0x16c8a	0x98	Lyra	#1W#6A	You're somehow... different from other girls.	
+0x16c8a	0x98	Lyra	#1W#6A	You're somehow...different from other girls.	
 0x16ce0	0x06	Lyra		ANI_GESTURE2	
-0x16d18	0x98	Lyra	#1W#6A	It's like you're... broken, somehow...	
+0x16d18	0x98	Lyra	#1W#6A	It's like you're...broken, somehow...	
 				That's just how it feels to me.	
 0x16ddf	0x98	Creha	#2W	.......	mp_0001 0xc917
 0x16e7f	0x06	Creha		ANI_NOD	

script/input/mp_0003c.tsv

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ talk_Puppis
 				I don't have enough space in my	
 				head to worry about that, too.	
 0xa7f	0x6B	ALTO		Surprise	
-0xab1	0x98	ALTO		'Too...?' What do	
+0xab1	0x98	ALTO		'Too'...? What do	
 				you mean by that?	
 0xb03	0x98	Puppis		Well, rumor has it... war	
 				has finally broken out on	
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@ talk_Vavo
 0x2334	0x98	Vavo		As for what will come next...	
 				Examining the rubble may prove	
 				effective in predicting that.	
-0x23cc	0x98	Vavo		It's times like these are an	
-				academic's time to shine. I	
+0x23cc	0x98	Vavo		It's times like these that are	
+				an academic's time to shine. I	
 				must do my part well.	
 0x246b	0x98	Vavo		It's precisely because of this baffling situation	
 				that we find ourselves in that academics should