Update some notes.

src/yassg/notes/completed-books.md

@@ -18,13 +18,15 @@ somewhere easily available will help me stay motivated.
 
 ## Completed books in 2023
 
+- [No Country for Old Men][] by Cormac McCarthy (★★★★)
 - [Adjustment Day][] by Chuck Palahniuk (★★)
 - [Mr Mercedes][] by Stephen King (★★★★)
 - [Timeline][] by Michael Crichton (★★)
 - [Piranesi][] by Susanna Clarke (★★★★)
 - [Out][] by Natsuo Kirino (★★★)
 - [If It Bleeds][] by Stephen King (★★★)
 
+  [No Country for Old Men]: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/No_Country_for_Old_Men_(novel)>
   [Adjustment Day]: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adjustment_Day>
   [Mr Mercedes]: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mr._Mercedes>
   [Timeline]: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Timeline_(novel)>

src/yassg/notes/phpstorm-setup.md

@@ -13,8 +13,13 @@ My PhpStorm Customisations and Settings
 =======================================
 
 Maybe one day I’ll get round to using a [settings repository][], but for
-the moment running through this list takes at most ten minutes with a
-fresh installation of PhpStorm, so eh.
+the moment going through this list with a fresh installation of PhpStorm
+takes a couple of minutes, so eh.
+
+**Note**: The search functionality in PhpStorm’s *Settings* window is
+pretty good, so I haven’t included the whole hierarchy of menus you need
+to drill down to find a particular setting. Use the setting name
+formatted in *italics* as the search term.
 
   [settings repository]: <https://www.jetbrains.com/help/phpstorm/settings-tools-settings-repository.html>
 
@@ -34,10 +39,6 @@ In addition to the plugins that come bundled with PhpStorm, I also use
 
 I’m also one of these people.
 
-**Note**: The search functionality in PhpStorm’s *Settings* window is
-pretty good, so I haven’t included the whole hierarchy of menus you need
-to drill down to find a setting.
-
 - Turn on *Use contrast scrollbars*.
 - Turn on *Use smaller indents in trees*.
 - Turn off *Show tool window bars*.
@@ -51,6 +52,10 @@ to drill down to find a setting.
   <span class="os-menu-item">Appearance</span> →
   <span class="os-menu-item">Navigation Bar</span>).
 
+If using the New UI Beta:
+
+- Turn on *Compact mode*.
+
 
 ## IdeaVim customisations and settings
 
@@ -67,9 +72,8 @@ to drill down to find a setting.
 
 - Check that PhpStorm is aware of all available PHP CLI interpreters in
   *Languages & Frameworks* → *PHP* in the *Settings* window.
-- If using PhpStorm 2020.3 or later, if the option is available sync the
-  IDE theme with the OS (on macOS change the preferred light theme to
-  *macOS Light*). Otherwise, use the Darcula theme throughout.
+- Set the IDE theme to Darcula or Dark, depending on whether you’re
+  using the existing UI or the New UI Beta.
 - Set the editor font to [Iosekva][] Term.
 - Set default visual guides at 72 and 78 characters.
 - Set the *Project Opening*’s *Default directory*.

src/yassg/notes/updating-docker-containers-with-docker-compose.md

@@ -26,11 +26,13 @@ $ docker volume ls -f dangling=true
 $ # If dangling volumes exist, remove them with "docker volume prune -f".
 ```
 
-You may need to run these commands with `sudo`. See the Docker
-documentation for more information [on pruning unused Docker objects][].
+You may need to run these commands with `sudo`. The Docker documentation
+has more information [on pruning unused Docker objects][] if the above
+pruning commands don’t go far enough.
 
 If, like me, you’re running these commands on a DiskStation, you can
-safely ignore any “Docker container stopped unexpectedly” notifications.
+safely ignore any “Docker container stopped unexpectedly” notifications
+from DiskStation Manager.
 
   [Synology DiskStation]: <https://www.robotinaponcho.net/notes/#synology-diskstation>
   [on pruning unused Docker objects]: <https://docs.docker.com/config/pruning/>

src/yassg/notes/white-loaf-recipe.md

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
 A Basic White Loaf Recipe
 =========================
 
-This recipe won’t produce anything award-winning, but when I feel like
-baking this will create a decent loaf without too much faff.
+When I feel like baking something this will create a decent loaf without
+too much faff.
 
 
 ## Ingredients
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ baking this will create a decent loaf without too much faff.
 | Fine salt                |           2%           |  10 g   |
 | Olive oil                |           2%           |  10 ml  |
 
-You’ll also need a little extra olive oil for coating your proofing
+You’ll also need a little extra olive oil for coating the proofing
 vessel.
 
   [Baker’s Percentage]: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Baker_percentage>
@@ -35,18 +35,17 @@ vessel.
 ## Method
 
 1.  Chuck everything into a stand mixer set up with a dough hook and
-    knead on a medium speed for two minutes. Increase the speed a notch
-    and knead for an additional three minutes.
+    knead on medium speed for two minutes. Increase the speed by a notch
+    and continue kneading for three minutes.
 2.  Take the dough out, lightly oil the stand mixer bowl, and plop the
     dough back in. Use the oil to coat the dough to prevent it from
     drying out. Cover the bowl with cling film or a towel and let the
-    dough rise until it has doubled in size (this can be done overnight
-    in the fridge if time allows).
+    dough rise until it has doubled in size (if time allows, this can be
+    done overnight in the fridge).
 3.  Empty the bowl onto a lightly-dusted surface and knead the dough for
     a minute.
-4.  Shape the dough as required (I put mine in a lightly-floured loaf
-    tin). Cover with a tea towel and let it prove until it has doubled
-    in size.
+4.  Put the dough in a lightly-floured loaf tin and cover with a tea
+    towel. Let the dough prove again until it has doubled in size.
 5.  While the dough is proving for a second time, whack the oven on as
     high it’ll go with a pizza stone, if you have one, and an empty loaf
     tin on the middle shelf.