From 3bee65b050aa19ac330028b3f6a40a2742cfb38e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Robb Shecter <robb@public.law>
Date: Thu, 2 May 2024 08:51:39 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Update README.md

---
 README.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 7545040..e62efb0 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ class Dog < ValidatedObject::Base
 end
 ```
 
-We can make it immutable with `attr_reader`:
+Alternatively, we could make it immutable with `attr_reader`:
 
 ```ruby
 class ImmutableDog < ValidatedObject::Base
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ end
 > `attr_reader` followed by `validates` is such a common pattern that
 > there's a second DSL which wraps them up into one call: `validates_attr`.
 
-Here's the immutable version of `Dog` re-written with the simplified DSL:
+Here's the immutable version of `Dog` re-written with the new, simplified DSL:
 
 ```ruby
 class ImmutableDog < ValidatedObject::Base