Technical edits.

[rmsharp]

Some commas and italics of e.g., other minor corrections.

[eddelbuettel]

Thanks, will merge this.

As you are so dilligent, can you check the normal webpage too?

[rmsharp]

How do you want me to propose edits? There are similar minor technical errors in the tint.html file pointed to by the URL.

On Oct 18, 2016, at 5:24 AM, Dirk Eddelbuettel notifications@github.com wrote:

Thanks, will merge this.

As you are so dilligent, can you check the normal webpage too?

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[eddelbuettel]

I think email works just fine. Else do it here.

[rmsharp]

In
The clear layout, focused use of white space and unparallel use of the margin for complementary information, including graphs, offer a novel and very valuable resource for typsetting.

the word “unparallel” should probably be “unparalleled” and “typsetting” should be “typesetting”.

Now a picky suggestion -- feel free to ignore. Managing greek abbreviations is highly opinionated. I am suggesting a style suitable for a formal document.

“e.g.” appears twice in the Usage section. It should be followed by a comma.

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I think email works just fine. Else do it here.

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[eddelbuettel]

Both errors fixed.

Both e.g. removed. They were superfluous there. Corrected a 'the use' to 'then use'.