Revised up to first eyecatch.

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@@ -580,8 +580,7 @@
 00:29:39 {Shinji}      Is it a new Angel?
 00:29:41 {Rei}         Ikari-kun, where are you?
 00:29:44 {Shinji}      Ayanami?
-00:29:46 {Shinji}      That was Ayanami's voice just now, wasn't it?
-00:29:49 {Shinji}      Misa-
+00:29:46 {Shinji}      Wasn't that Ayanami's voice just now, Misa-
 00:29:53 {Shinji}      Oh, come on!
 00:29:55 {Sakura}      We're ready!
 00:29:56 {Sakura}      Ikari-san, this way!
@@ -591,54 +590,60 @@
 00:30:06 {Sakura}      Ikari-san! Quickly!
 00:30:11 {Shinji}      Enough.
 00:30:13 {Shinji}      Ayanami! I'm right here!
-00:30:28 {Shinji}      Eva... Unit 00.
+00:40:30 {Man}         Damage sustained on starboard midsection!
+00:40:31 {Man}         Fissure occurring in armor plate two!
+00:40:33 {Tama}        Pressure drop detected in the provisional quarantine visiting room!
+00:40:35 {Tama}        Emergency closure of barrier walls!
+00:30:28 {Shinji}      Eva... Unit 00?
 00:30:30 {Rei}         Ikari-kun...
 00:30:32 {Rei}         Come this way.
 00:30:35 {Misato}      Don't do it, Shinji-kun.
 00:30:37 {Misato}      Just stay right here.
-00:30:38 {Shinji}      What's with that, Misato-san?
-00:30:41 {Shinji}      Weren't you just saying a moment ago that you didn't need me?
-00:30:43 {Misato}      Even so, you'll be kept in our custody.
-00:30:45 {Shinji}      That's just too one-sided!
-00:30:53 {Shinji}      Please stop it! 
-00:50:53 {Shinji}      The target is an Eva!
-00:30:55 {Misato}      That's why.
-00:30:57 {Misato}      We will eradicate all of Nerv's Evas.
-00:30:59 {Shinji}      Nerv... 
-00:31:01 {Shinji}      This isn't Nerv, too?
+00:30:38 {Shinji}      What was that, Misato-san?
+00:30:41 {Shinji}      Weren't you just saying that you didn't need me?!
+00:30:43 {Misato}      Even so, you're to be kept in our protection.
+00:30:45 {Shinji}      What about how *I* feel?!
+00:30:53 {Shinji}      Please stop! 
+00:50:53 {Shinji}      You're firing at an Eva!
+00:30:55 {Misato}      That's precisely why.
+00:30:57 {Misato}      We will destroy all of Nerv's Evas.
+00:30:59 {Shinji}      Nerv's...?
+00:31:01 {Shinji}      Isn't this Nerv, too?
 00:31:02 {Misato}      We are Wille, an organization dedicated to Nerv's annihilation.
 00:31:07 {Shinji}      That's... 
-00:31:09 {Shinji}      No, but it's being piloted by Ayanami!
+00:31:09 {Shinji}      But wait, Ayanami's piloting it!
 00:31:12 {Misato}      It's not her! 
-00:31:13 {Misato}      Rei is gone, Shinji-kun.
+00:31:13 {Misato}      Rei's no more, Shinji-kun.
 00:31:15 {Shinji}      Liar! 
-00:31:16 {Shinji}      I mean, she's right here, isn't she?!
-00:31:18 {Shinji}      You're just dense, Misato-san! 
-00:31:20 {Shinji}      I've had enough!
+00:31:16 {Shinji}      But she's right there, isn't she?!
+00:31:18 {Shinji}      Misato-san, you're clueless!
+00:31:20 {Shinji}      I'm done here!
 00:31:24 {Sakura}      Ikari-san!
-00:31:27 {Sakura}      It's okay if you go back, but...
-00:31:29 {Sakura}      Please, whatever you do, don't pilot an Eva!
-00:31:31 {Sakura}      We really could use a break...
-00:31:43 {Asuka}       Glasses, don't let it get away!
+00:31:27 {Sakura}      Do whatever you want, but...
+00:31:29 {Sakura}      Please just don't pilot an Eva!
+00:31:31 {Sakura}      Seriously, give us a break.
+00:31:43 {Asuka}       Glasses, don't let them get away!
 00:31:44 {Mari}        Loud and clear!
+00:41:57 {Woman}       Eva Unit 08 launching!
 00:31:48 {Mari}        ♪ When you take aim ♪ 
-00:31:50 {Mari}        ♪ Be careful not to miss your mark ♪
-00:31:55 {Mari}        Hey, come on!
-00:32:02 {Mari}        Got ya!
-00:32:09 {Mari}        I knew it! An Adams' vessel?
-00:32:17 {Mari}        At least say "hi" or something!
-00:32:22 {Ritsuko}     The fact he was taken in priority over Eva-01 
-00:32:25 {Ritsuko}     means he still has potential as a trigger!
+00:31:50 {Mari}        ♪ Be careful that you don't miss your mark ♪
+00:31:55 {Mari}        Hey, c'mon!
+00:32:02 {Mari}        Gotcha!
+00:32:09 {Mari}        Couldn't be... an Adams' Vessel?
+00:32:17 {Mari}        At least say hi, damn it!
+00:32:22 {Ritsuko}     If they prioritized taking him over Eva-01, 
+00:32:25 {Ritsuko}     it means he still has the potential to be a trigger!
 00:32:27 {Ritsuko}     Misato! Use the DSS Choker!
-00:32:44 {Ritsuko}     Mission directive from Executive Officer. 
-00:32:46 {Ritsuko}     Pursuit unnecessary. 
-00:32:47 {Ritsuko}     All personnel, resume emergency damage control and camouflage operations.
+00:32:44 {Ritsuko}     This is the vice-captain.
+00:32:46 {Ritsuko}     No need to pursue.
+00:32:47 {Ritsuko}     All personnel, tend to the emergency repairs and resume outfitting the ship.
 00:32:51 {Man}         Roger. 
-00:32:52 {Man}         Pursuit unnecessary. 
-00:32:53 {Asuka}       Hmph.
-00:32:54 {Man}         All personnel, resume emergency damage control and camouflage operations.
-00:32:55 {Asuka}       What do you know. 
-00:32:56 {Asuka}       He's not an idiot, just a brat!
+00:32:52 {Man}         No need to pursue.
+00:43:02 {Asuka}       Hmph.
+00:43:03 {Man}         All personnel, tend to the emergency repairs and resume outfitting the ship.
+00:43:04 {Asuka}       What do you know. 
+00:43:05 {Asuka}       He's not even an idiot. 
+00:43:06 {Asuka}       He's just a brat!
 00:32:58 {Title}       Evangelion New Theatrical Edition: Quickening
 00:33:16 {Shinji}      I did save her after all. 
 00:33:18 {Shinji}      Misato-san lied to me.