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Improves the copy for the new app screen (#24918)

Summary:
1. Consistency with full stops  (you can see screenshots in #24783 )
2. Improvements to the wording, describing what you're going to see

## Changelog

[Internal] [Fixed] - Improves the copy for the new app screen
Pull Request resolved: #24918

Differential Revision: D15391421

Pulled By: cpojer

fbshipit-source-id: 2ec6d2d5bd4845c5f4c699838ae865ab4217e49e
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orta authored and facebook-github-bot committed May 17, 2019
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@@ -19,19 +19,18 @@ const links = [
{
title: 'The Basics',
link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/tutorial',
description:
'Read the docs on what to do once seen how to work in React Native.',
description: 'Explains a Hello World for React Native.',
},
{
title: 'Style',
link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/style',
description: 'All of the core components accept a prop named style.',
description:
'Covers how to use the prop named style which controls the visuals.',
},
{
title: 'Layout',
link: 'https://facebook.github.io/react-native/docs/flexbox',
description:
'A component can specify the layout of its children using the flexbox specification.',
description: 'React Native uses flexbox for layout, learn how it works.',
},
{
title: 'Components',
@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ const ReloadInstructions = Platform.select({
ios: () => (
<Text>
Press <Text style={styles.highlight}>Cmd+R</Text> in the simulator to
reload your app's code
reload your app's code.
</Text>
),
default: () => (
<Text>
Double tap <Text style={styles.highlight}>R</Text> on your keyboard to
reload your app's code
reload your app's code.
</Text>
),
});
@@ -56,8 +56,7 @@ const App = () => {
<View style={styles.sectionContainer}>
<Text style={styles.sectionTitle}>Learn More</Text>
<Text style={styles.sectionDescription}>
Read the docs on what to do once seen how to work in React
Native.
Read the docs to discover what to do next:
</Text>
</View>
<LearnMoreLinks />

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