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Proposal to update marketing copy #7021

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@gaearon gaearon commented Jun 12, 2016

This is a bikeshed followup to #7012.
I felt like rephrasing them a little bit.

Please feel free to reject.
Sorry I didn’t do this before #7012 got merged!

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@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@ id: home
<div class="marketing-row">
<div class="marketing-col">
<h3>Declarative</h3>
<p>React makes it painless to update your views when your data changes. Just return the views to display for each possible state, and React handles the updates.</p>
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I tried to remove “painless”, “just”, “easily” because these are somewhat subjective.

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gaearon commented Jun 12, 2016

Let's go with #7022

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@gaearon gaearon deleted the gaearon-patch-1 branch July 6, 2016 22:18
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