highlight need for water
tweak conclusion (have fun)
add self to supporters
minor copy changes to index.markdown
I've spoken to a few others about your proposed changes and we'd like to accept some but not all. We love the final paragraph that you've added about having fun. In that context the removal of "Finally, " makes sense so that would be accepted too. We don't want to change the spelling of licence and we feel that the statement on water v. sugary drinks is superfluous. If you take out the spelling changes and statement on water and resubmit your pull request we'd be happy to accept it.
- revert license/licence spelling change
- revert sentence about water
- leave closing note about having fun
Ok, reverted the licence/license spelling and the bit about water. Left in the new "fun" closing and my signature. Cheers.
🆗 by me too btw