diff --git a/report/report.lyx b/report/report.lyx index 128640f..c5a4b34 100644 --- a/report/report.lyx +++ b/report/report.lyx @@ -218,10 +218,10 @@ leftmark} \end_layout \begin_layout Abstract -While browsing websites third-party resources track your online habits, - which can be considered an invasion of privacy. - It was previously unknown how many third-party resources, known trackers - and tracker companies are represented on an average website. +When you are browsing websites, third-party resources track your online + habits; such tracking can be considered an invasion of privacy. + It was previously unknown how many third-party resources, trackers and + tracker companies are present on an average website. While downloading over \begin_inset ERT status open @@ -253,7 +253,8 @@ status open \emph on content \emph default - such as video, scripts and fonts make up a large portion of known trackers. + such as video, scripts and fonts make up a large portion of the known trackers + seen on a typical website. \end_layout \begin_layout Standard