Proof reading and copy tweaks. #3

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tekin commented Apr 20, 2012

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@jonleighton jonleighton merged commit dce9389 into jonleighton:master Apr 20, 2012

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jonleighton commented Apr 20, 2012

Thanks. I merged and then made some further edits in 3789042. I wasn't keen on the "side effect no 3" because it's not a side effect of having multiple actions in one object - it's just a related problem. So I pulled that back out of the list.

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tekin commented Apr 20, 2012

Sounds good. Good luck with the talk!

On 20 Apr 2012, at 04:01 PM, Jon Leightonreply@reply.github.com wrote:

Thanks. I merged and then made some further edits in 3789042. I wasn't keen on the "side effect no 3" because it's not a side effect of having multiple actions in one object - it's just a related problem. So I pulled that back out of the list.


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