From a8112a6d8ae9ee9ec4dc55419fee5941bf7abbbd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tim Bannister Date: Mon, 17 Jan 2022 21:40:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Clarify advice about etcd private key "Quote" can mislead; skip should be more obvious. --- .../tools/kubeadm/ha-topology.md | 2 +- .../tools/kubeadm/high-availability.md | 10 +++++----- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology.md b/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology.md index 53b1f380248f3..4a1a8ae9033a1 100644 --- a/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology.md +++ b/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ --- reviewers: - sig-cluster-lifecycle -title: Options for Highly Available topology +title: Options for Highly Available Topology content_type: concept weight: 50 --- diff --git a/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/high-availability.md b/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/high-availability.md index dd5106985c734..8ba0ac3d6d546 100644 --- a/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/high-availability.md +++ b/content/en/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/high-availability.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ --- reviewers: - sig-cluster-lifecycle -title: Creating Highly Available clusters with kubeadm +title: Creating Highly Available Clusters with kubeadm content_type: task weight: 60 --- @@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ cluster using kubeadm: control plane nodes and etcd members are separated. Before proceeding, you should carefully consider which approach best meets the needs of your applications -and environment. [This comparison topic](/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology/) outlines the advantages and disadvantages of each. +and environment. [Options for Highly Available topology](/docs/setup/production-environment/tools/kubeadm/ha-topology/) outlines the advantages and disadvantages of each. If you encounter issues with setting up the HA cluster, please provide us with feedback in the kubeadm [issue tracker](https://github.com/kubernetes/kubeadm/issues/new). -See also [The upgrade documentation](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/kubeadm/kubeadm-upgrade/). +See also the [upgrade documentation](/docs/tasks/administer-cluster/kubeadm/kubeadm-upgrade/). {{< caution >}} This page does not address running your cluster on a cloud provider. In a cloud @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ SSH is required if you want to control all nodes from a single machine. scp /etc/kubernetes/pki/front-proxy-ca.crt "${USER}"@$host: scp /etc/kubernetes/pki/front-proxy-ca.key "${USER}"@$host: scp /etc/kubernetes/pki/etcd/ca.crt "${USER}"@$host:etcd-ca.crt - # Quote this line if you are using external etcd + # Skip the next line if you are using external etcd scp /etc/kubernetes/pki/etcd/ca.key "${USER}"@$host:etcd-ca.key done ``` @@ -374,6 +374,6 @@ SSH is required if you want to control all nodes from a single machine. mv /home/${USER}/front-proxy-ca.crt /etc/kubernetes/pki/ mv /home/${USER}/front-proxy-ca.key /etc/kubernetes/pki/ mv /home/${USER}/etcd-ca.crt /etc/kubernetes/pki/etcd/ca.crt - # Quote this line if you are using external etcd + # Skip the next line if you are using external etcd mv /home/${USER}/etcd-ca.key /etc/kubernetes/pki/etcd/ca.key ```