From 2e2dae3dc5cc0d73867bda70b4c2d139d27f517f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Benjamin Kaduk Date: Wed, 7 Jul 2021 13:13:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Editorial suggestions from IESG review --- draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md b/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md index df4304f..1396625 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md +++ b/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ informative: The IETF holds three in-person meetings per year to discuss and understand issues. However, various emergencies can make a planned in-person meeting -infeasible. This document provides criteria for making this judgment. +infeasible. This document provides criteria for assessing meating feasibility. --- middle @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ cannot proceed (e.g., the venue has permanently closed), then it MUST consult with the community on the reason(s) and its proposed remedy. In less clear cases, the LLC SHOULD conduct a formal reassessment process that includes: -* Consulting with the community on the process timetable. +* Consulting with the community on the timetable of the decision process. * Consulting with the community on criteria to assess the impact of new developments. @@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ has the disadvantages of both. The LLC and IESG may cancel a meeting entirely in the event that worldwide conditions make it difficult for attendees to even attend remotely. Not holding -a meeting at all can have wide implications, such as the nomination process and +a meeting at all can have wide implications, such as effects on the nomination process and seating of new officers. Cancellation is likely the only practical alternative when emergencies occur From f8f3ddb3b83a1804e2c8ce790d0c129533aa97bd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: martinduke Date: Wed, 7 Jul 2021 21:54:20 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md --- draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md b/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md index 1396625..79f098c 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md +++ b/draft-ietf-shmoo-cancel-meeting.md @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ informative: The IETF holds three in-person meetings per year to discuss and understand issues. However, various emergencies can make a planned in-person meeting -infeasible. This document provides criteria for assessing meating feasibility. +infeasible. This document provides criteria for assessing meeting feasibility. --- middle