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rbuj authored and raveit65 committed Sep 27, 2018
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If it is unavailable or unsupported on your platform, it will fall back
to the freedesktop.org
<ulink url="http://freedesktop.org/Software/hal">HAL (Hardware
Abstraction Layer)</ulink>. If that is also not availble, the
Abstraction Layer)</ulink>. If that is also not available, the
battery monitor will attempt direct access to the power management system
</para>
<para>
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@

<para>When there is no CPU frequency scaling support in the system, the &applet; only displays the current CPU frequency.</para>
<para>When CPU frequency scaling is supported in the system, the &applet; displays the CPU icon with a progress bar. The state of the progress bar represents the current CPU frequency with respect to the maximum frequency.</para>
<para>By default the &applet; displays the current CPU frequency as a value
<para>By default, the &applet; displays the current CPU frequency as a value
in Hertz (the standard measure of frequency), but can be configured to
display a percentage instead. For more information on how to configure &applet; see <xref linkend="cpufreq-applet-prefs"/>.</para>
<para>Each instance of &applet; can monitor only one CPU. You must start an
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
<imagedata fileref="figures/drivemount-applet_mount.png" format="PNG" />
</imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
<para>
To unmount a drive, click on the drive icon in the panel and then select the <guimenuitem>Unmount Drive</guimenuitem> option, or if the device is a CD-ROM Drive, it may be labelled <guimenuitem>Eject Drive</guimenuitem>
To unmount a drive, click on the drive icon in the panel and then select the <guimenuitem>Unmount Drive</guimenuitem> option, or if the device is a CD-ROM Drive, it may be labeled <guimenuitem>Eject Drive</guimenuitem>
</para>
<screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="figures/drivemount-applet_eject.png" format="PNG" />
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ customizable.</para>

<!-- ==== End of Figure ======================================= -->
<para>
The <application>&applet;</application> downloads weather information from the U.S National Weather Service (NWS) servers, including the Interactive Weather Information Network (IWIN) and other weather services. You can use <application>&applet;</application> to display current weather information and weather forecasts on your computer.
The <application>&applet;</application> downloads weather information from the U.S. National Weather Service (NWS) servers, including the Interactive Weather Information Network (IWIN) and other weather services. You can use <application>&applet;</application> to display current weather information and weather forecasts on your computer.
</para>
<note id="proxies-note-1">
<para>
@@ -445,7 +445,7 @@ customizable.</para>
</figure>
<para>
When you add the <application>&applet;</application> to a panel for
the first time, the application displays the weather for Pittsburg, Pennsylvania by default. To display the weather for a different location, perform the following steps:
the first time, the application displays the weather for Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania by default. To display the weather for a different location, perform the following steps:
</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ customizable.</para>
</para>
<note>
<para>
Forecasts are only available for some locations in the U.S.A,
Forecasts are only available for some locations in the U.S.,
Australia and the United Kingdom.
</para>
</note>
@@ -767,7 +767,7 @@ customizable.</para>
</para>
<note><para>
Most locations do not define a default radar map, especially outside
of the U.S.A. Many locations will require you to specify a custom URL,
of the U.S. Many locations will require you to specify a custom URL,
if you wish to have a radar map.
</para></note>
</sect2>
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@
</row>
<row valign="top">
<entry><para><guilabel>Idle</guilabel></para></entry>
<entry><para>Unused processory capacity</para></entry>
<entry><para>Unused processor capacity</para></entry>
</row>
</tbody>
</tgroup>
@@ -659,13 +659,13 @@
<para>
Thresholds together with indicator allow network graph to scale and better represent actual workload.
If combined network traffic (in + out + loopback) is below threshold1, no indicator is shown, y-axis
on network graph go from 0 to threshold1. When trafic is more than threshold1, one indicator will be
shown and y-axis now go from 0 to threshold2. When threshold2 is reached, two indicator will be shown
on network graph go from 0 to threshold1. When traffic is more than threshold1, one indicator will be
shown and y-axis now go from 0 to threshold2. When threshold2 is reached, two indicators will be shown
and y-axis go from 0 to threshold3. When threshold3 is reached, three indicators are shown and y-axis
go form 0 to whatever is current maximum in graph.
</para>
<para>
Gridlines are hard to explain, just observe and they are obvious.
Gridlines are hard to explain, just observe, and they are obvious.
</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ of the network device.
<listitem><para>
<guilabel>Change icon according to the selected device:</guilabel> Usually the applet will show an icon
representing the type of network device you monitor. So it will show a phone for Point to Point connections
(ppp - modems, etc.), a network card for ethernet (eth), etc.
(ppp - modems, etc.), a network card for Ethernet (eth), etc.
When this is unchecked, the applet will always show the network card icon, no matter which device you monitor.
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ of the network device.
it has been connected to the network.
</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>
<guilabel>Bytes out:</guilabel> The amout of bytes that the network device has sent since
<guilabel>Bytes out:</guilabel> The amount of bytes that the network device has sent since
it has been connected to the network.
</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>

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