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Modified language so that it speaks to students as well as teachers

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1 parent 51cc244 commit 7bcb78cee36052a6d07f83d602056c34478c3507 moodler committed Oct 21, 2002
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  1. +9 −9 lang/en/help/mods.html
@@ -24,10 +24,10 @@
<P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/resource/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Resources</B></P>
<UL>
-<P>Resources are content: information you want to bring into the
- course. These can be prepared files you've uploaded to the course
- server; pages you edit directly in Moodle; or simply links to
- external web pages that appear within this course.</P>
+<P>Resources are content: information the teacher wants to bring into the
+ course. These can be prepared files uploaded to the course
+ server; pages edited directly in Moodle; or external web pages
+ made to appear part of this course.</P>
</UL>
<P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/assignment/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Assignments</B></P>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/quiz/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Quizzes</B></P>
<UL>
-<P>This module allows you to design and set quiz tests, consisting of
+<P>This module allows the teacher to design and set quiz tests, consisting of
multiple choice, true-false, and short answer questions. These
questions are kept in a categorised database, and can be re-used
within courses and even between courses. Quizzes can allow
@@ -51,18 +51,18 @@
<P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/choice/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Choices</B></P>
<UL>
-<P>A choice activity is very simple - you ask a question and specify a
+<P>A choice activity is very simple - the teacher asks a question and specifies a
choice of multiple responses. It can be useful as a quick poll to
- stimulate thinking about a topic, or to allow the class to vote on
- a direction for the course, or to gather research consent.
+ stimulate thinking about a topic; to allow the class to vote on
+ a direction for the course; or to gather research consent.
</UL>
<P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/survey/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Surveys</B></P>
<UL>
<P>The Survey module provides a number of verified survey instruments that
have been found useful in assessing and stimulating learning in
online environments. Teachers can use these to gather data from their
- students that will help them learn about their classs and reflect
+ students that will help them learn about their class and reflect
on their own teaching.</P>
</UL>

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