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Task: 2543815
Cherry pick from #998

Omitted changes proposed in the track_leads directory (e.g. lead_scoring.rst + image folder). Both the content and image updates were already pushed from another PR so what was proposed on #998 was outdated and no longer necessary.

What’s left over are the original proposed changes in #998, within the acquire_leads directory which include updates to lead_mining.rst and corresponding image files.

On top of these proposals, I went ahead and made the following changes:

  • renamed the image files in the acquire_leads asset directory, since they were using outdated naming convention (e.g. LM1.png, LM6.png, LM7.png)
  • cleaned up RST formatting issues (headings, line breaks, lists, broken links, guilabels, etc.)
  • rewrote select content to be more concise and follow content guidelines. You can see the first version of proposals here to compare the changes made.

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Hi @meng-odoo

For content review please do the following:

  • confirm that I captured the essence of what Tori was originally proposing here for lead_mining.rst
  • ensure the content (copy + screenshots) clearly and accurately illustrates the features for lead mining
  • double check XPL review on [IMP] CRM: updating flow and screenshots about lead mining #998 to see if I hit most/all of what they suggested be changed
  • let me know if we need to change or add anything (this cherry-pick is from a PR that's 14-months old...good chance something is missing or some content is out-of-date).

Thank you 🙏

cc: @mivu-odoo

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Nudge @meng-odoo
cc: @mivu-odoo

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Hi @samueljlieber (cc: @StraubCreative @mivu-odoo), I've made a few changes to this old cherry-picked PR. Mostly fixing small typos, wording/formatting issues, and adding/clarifying information---plus replacing one image. Please let me know if you have any questions :) Thanks!

@samueljlieber samueljlieber force-pushed the 14.0-crm-lead-mining-vpk-2 branch from 0da0f29 to ec65f87 Compare September 28, 2022 14:52
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Hi @meng-odoo 👋
I made your changes to the document and updated the image. I also added a :guilabel: to line 22:

After the :guilabel:Lead Mining setting is activated...

Thanks for the content updates! Let me know if you have more changes :)

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Hey @samueljlieber, thanks for making those changes! I just have a couple more here that weren't caught the first time around. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thanks :)

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Hi @meng-odoo! Your changes have been made 👍

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Hi @samueljlieber thanks for making those changes! I'm sorry, I found one more change that should be made to the new image I added (adding a red box to match the related image right before it). After we update the image, we should be good :)

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All set @meng-odoo 🙂 Thanks!

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Looks great @samueljlieber, thank you! I'll tag the next reviewer

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Hello @meng-odoo and @samueljlieber!

Nice work on this PR, very clean! I found a couple of small edits. Please tag me again for a second look once you finish integrating the suggestions. Thank you 😸

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Hi @mivu-odoo!
I implemented your changes, ready for another look! Thank you! 🙂

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Hello @samueljlieber!

Thank you for the quick turnaround! I found one small verb tense edit. Once that change is made, feel free to go straight to ZST for final technical review, no need to tag me again. Thank you 😸

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Thank you @mivu-odoo! Hi @StraubCreative 👋 this doc is ready for your review!

Task: 2543815
Cherry pick from #998

Omitted changes proposed in the **track_leads** directory (e.g. `lead_scoring.rst` + image folder). Both the content and image updates were already pushed from another PR so what was proposed on #998 was outdated and no longer necessary.

What’s left over are the original proposed changes in #998, within the **acquire_leads** directory which include updates to `lead_mining.rst` and corresponding image files.

On top of these proposals, I went ahead and made the following changes:

- renamed the image files in the asset directory, since they were using outdated naming convention (e.g. LM1.png, LM6.png, LM7.png)
- cleaned up rst formatting issues (headings, line breaks, added guilabels, etc.)
- rewrote document so content was more concise + followed content guidelines. You can see the first version of proposals here to compare the changes made.
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Hi @meng-odoo 👋
Clean PR, nice job.
Approving, with the following CR's addressed in the commit that follows.

`Odoo GDPR <http://odoo.com/gdpr>`__,
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Make sure to be aware of the latest EU regulations when receiving contact information. Get more
information about the General Data Protection Regulation on `Odoo GDPR <http://odoo.com/gdpr>`__.
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Only one underscore is needed for the link.

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information about the General Data Protection Regulation on `Odoo GDPR <http://odoo.com/gdpr>`__.
information about the General Data Protection Regulation on `Odoo GDPR <http://odoo.com/gdpr>`_.

Comment on lines 67 to 68
See here for full pricing information: `Lead Generation by Odoo IAP <https://iap.odoo.com/iap/
in-app-services/167?>`__.
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Same here. Only one underscore for the link.

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See here for full pricing information: `Lead Generation by Odoo IAP <https://iap.odoo.com/iap/
in-app-services/167?>`__.
See here for full pricing information: `Lead Generation by Odoo IAP <https://iap.odoo.com/iap/
in-app-services/167?>`_.

@StraubCreative StraubCreative force-pushed the 14.0-crm-lead-mining-vpk-2 branch from baf8fc1 to 4af536d Compare December 5, 2022 22:23
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4af536d addresses merge conflicts from #2983 and outdated 14.0 content.

Also includes fixes to change requests above.

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@odoo/doc-review you're up 🙂
I think this is the last PR from the VPK pipeline.
Thanks!

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robodoo pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Dec 6, 2022
Task: 2543815
Cherry pick from #998

Omitted changes proposed in the **track_leads** directory (e.g. `lead_scoring.rst` + image folder). Both the content and image updates were already pushed from another PR so what was proposed on #998 was outdated and no longer necessary.

What’s left over are the original proposed changes in #998, within the **acquire_leads** directory which include updates to `lead_mining.rst` and corresponding image files.

On top of these proposals, I went ahead and made the following changes:

- renamed the image files in the asset directory, since they were using outdated naming convention (e.g. LM1.png, LM6.png, LM7.png)
- cleaned up rst formatting issues (headings, line breaks, added guilabels, etc.)
- rewrote document so content was more concise + followed content guidelines. You can see the first version of proposals here to compare the changes made.

closes #2535

Signed-off-by: Antoine Vandevenne (anv) <anv@odoo.com>
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