From 4714a1671618a1cc0a31e04f595956dd4dd3b504 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henare Degan Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2012 14:34:57 +1000 Subject: [PATCH 1/5] Use our name instead of URL --- app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml index 301ca0a37..3e12b00cc 100644 --- a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml +++ b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ - content_for :page_title, "Get involved" %h3= yield :page_title %p - PlanningAlerts.org.au is run by a charity, the OpenAustralia Foundation, + PlanningAlerts is run by a charity, the OpenAustralia Foundation, and relies on the support of volunteers and donations from people like you. If you would like to get involved we'd love to hear from you: From 924563097f96e52d28f27ae7add376cdf7d04cb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henare Degan Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2012 14:35:45 +1000 Subject: [PATCH 2/5] Make the sentence flow better --- app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml index 3e12b00cc..c95152805 100644 --- a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml +++ b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ - content_for :page_title, "Get involved" %h3= yield :page_title %p - PlanningAlerts is run by a charity, the OpenAustralia Foundation, + PlanningAlerts is run by the charity OpenAustralia Foundation, and relies on the support of volunteers and donations from people like you. If you would like to get involved we'd love to hear from you: From 03681df2c585cbb9057c1bea65f536426f876ace Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henare Degan Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2012 14:37:03 +1000 Subject: [PATCH 3/5] Fix typo --- app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml index c95152805..754a6c683 100644 --- a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml +++ b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ %h4 I don't have the time or I don't have the skills. How can I help? %p - You value the service provided by PlanningAlerts but you simple don't have the time or the specialist skills to help out personally? + You value the service provided by PlanningAlerts but you simply don't have the time or the specialist skills to help out personally? %p The best thing that you can do is to #{link_to "donate to the OpenAustralia Foundation", "http://www.openaustraliafoundation.org.au/donate/"}, the charity behind PlanningAlerts. Your donation will go to improving the service. From 612986a803c166be19b1fa2b4c523aef71c5c95d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henare Degan Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2012 14:42:52 +1000 Subject: [PATCH 4/5] Don't answer a question with a question --- app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml index 754a6c683..0f1f4ce7a 100644 --- a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml +++ b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml @@ -22,9 +22,10 @@ %h4 I don't have the time or I don't have the skills. How can I help? %p - You value the service provided by PlanningAlerts but you simply don't have the time or the specialist skills to help out personally? -%p - The best thing that you can do is to #{link_to "donate to the OpenAustralia Foundation", "http://www.openaustraliafoundation.org.au/donate/"}, the charity behind PlanningAlerts. Your donation will go to improving the service. + If value the service provided by PlanningAlerts but you simply don't have the time or + the specialist skills to help out personally then the best thing that you can do is + to #{link_to "donate to the OpenAustralia Foundation", "http://www.openaustraliafoundation.org.au/donate/"}, + the charity behind PlanningAlerts. Your donation will go to improving the service. %h4 I work for a local council or planning authority and would like to make our data available From a64c8d6d3497d225c0885defb44a1e2c612ffe9f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henare Degan Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2012 14:43:37 +1000 Subject: [PATCH 5/5] Put this in a new paragraph to make it stand out --- app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml index 0f1f4ce7a..bff2f44eb 100644 --- a/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml +++ b/app/views/static/get_involved.html.haml @@ -25,7 +25,9 @@ If value the service provided by PlanningAlerts but you simply don't have the time or the specialist skills to help out personally then the best thing that you can do is to #{link_to "donate to the OpenAustralia Foundation", "http://www.openaustraliafoundation.org.au/donate/"}, - the charity behind PlanningAlerts. Your donation will go to improving the service. + the charity behind PlanningAlerts. +%p + Your donation will go to improving the service. %h4 I work for a local council or planning authority and would like to make our data available