Editorial pass

[MichaelFraser1999]

• Some general thoughts I had while implementing this again for the OSW 2025 demo
• Cleaned up the document indentation to help with readability while editing it
• Removed reference to the revoked parameter as I feel this is best defined in implementation extensions if required. Not convinced it fits so well with a "standard" OpenID Federation deployment

[Copilot]

Pull Request Overview

This PR performs an editorial pass on the OpenID Federation Extended Listing specification for improved clarity and consistency. Key changes include cleanup of document indentation and formatting; removal of the revoked parameter reference; and updates to example values and parameter descriptions (e.g. changing "entity_statement" to "subordinate_statement").

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openid-federation-extended-listing-1_0.md:148

• There is a redundant article in the caption ('the those'). Consider removing 'the' to read 'those specified by the federation_list_endpoint' for clarity.

*Table 1: Additional request parameters accepted by the Federation Extended Subordinate Listing endpoint in addition to the those specified by the `federation_list_endpoint`*

openid-federation-extended-listing-1_0.md:320

• Replace the contraction 'it's' with the possessive 'its' in the phrase 'according to its defined upper limit'.

This request specified no `limit` however the Issuing Entity chose to limit the response size according to it's defined upper limit.

[peppelinux]

Approved along with my suggestions

I'd leave the decision to use error code or value to you, while other small editorials are included in my review.

[selfissued]

Approved with suggested changes. Also, change please change the copyright year to 2025.

[peppelinux]

Suggested change

	| immediate_subordinate_entities | REQUIRED | Array | Array of JSON objects, each describing an Immediate Subordinate Entity using the structure defined in the table below |
	| immediate_subordinate_entities | REQUIRED | Array | Array of JSON objects, each describing an Immediate Subordinate Entity using the structure defined in the table below. |

[selfissued]

Generally, we don't include a period at the end of table entries - particularly when the text is not a sentence.