From 8e484f802583975b42fcca7da6697cce08ca8ec2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Aram Zucker-Scharff <Aram.Zucker-Scharff@washpost.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Dec 2022 14:21:41 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Gramatical precision in Normative Specifications

Addressing concerns around the grammatical precision of the Normative Specifications section.
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 charter.html | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/charter.html b/charter.html
index c9a161f..9de41bd 100644
--- a/charter.html
+++ b/charter.html
@@ -209,15 +209,15 @@ <h3>
           </p>
           <ul>
             <li>Pre-campaign planning</li>
-            <li>Intra-campaign decisioning and optimization</li>
+            <li>Intra-campaign decisioning and optimization, such as:</li>
             <ul>
-              <li>Interest-based ad or content decisioning</li>
-              <li>User List Marketing/Remarketing</li>
-              <li>Fraud detection and prevention</li>
-              <li>Abuse detection and prevention</li>
-              <li>Frequency and recency controls</li>
-              <li>Error reporting and mitigation </li>
-              <li>Device resource management</li>
+              <li>Interest-based ad or content decisioning;</li>
+              <li>User List Marketing/Remarketing;</li>
+              <li>Fraud detection and prevention;</li>
+              <li>Abuse detection and prevention;</li>
+              <li>Frequency and recency controls;</li>
+              <li>Error reporting and mitigation; and </li>
+              <li>Device resource management.</li>
               </ul>
             <li>Post-campaign reporting and attribution
           </ul>