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-![Presstube Logo](http://presstube.com/cyclic-vacuum-cannon/img/pt_logo_black.png)
+![A concept drawing of a Cyclic Vacuum Cannon](http://presstube.com/cyclic-vacuum-cannon/img/cvc/cvc-fleshed-out.jpg)
Cyclic Vacuum Cannon
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You can find out more about the Cyclic Vacuum Cannon at its [Presstube Project Page](http://presstube.com/cyclic-vacuum-cannon "Cyclic Vacuum Cannon at Presstube").
-![A concept drawing of a Cyclic Vacuum Cannon](http://presstube.com/cyclic-vacuum-cannon/img/cvc/cvc-fleshed-out.jpg)
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##About Presstube Code Journal##
-I love watching people work. It's one of my favorite ways to learn. In case there's anyone out there who feels the same way I decided to start a code journal where I'd step through the creation of a project from the pre-code planning phase, all the way through to launching it in its finished state.
+I love watching people work. It's one of my favorite ways to learn. In case there's anyone out there who feels the same way I've decided to start a code journal where I'll step through the creation of a project from the pre-code planning phase, all the way through to launching it in its finished form.
-I plan to release each journal entry as a short, 10-15min, screencast. Each entry will correspond to a branch in this repo so you can follow along, and/or take the project in a direction I never would have thought of.
+I plan to release each journal entry as a short, 10-15 minute screencast. Each entry will correspond to a branch in this repo so you can follow along, and/or take the project in a direction I never would have thought of.
I have three different groups of people in mind while making this journal:
1. Like-minded coders who might find it interesting to peer over my shoulder as I work.
-2. Those who are a lot better at all this stuff than I am who might be able to point me in the right direction about how to improve, and/or chuckle at my ineptitude.
-3. People who may never have coded before but are curious about it and want to see what it's all about in the context of a fun, silly, highly visual project.
+2. Those who are a lot better at this stuff than I am who might get a chuckle out of my backwards ways and/or point me in the right direction about how to improve. (suggestions and critique will be incorporated into future journal entries)
+3. People who are new to code but are curious about it, and might like to peek in via the context of a fun, silly, highly visual project.
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