Update hugo-site/content/information/heritage.md

Co-Authored-By: beanpole135 <ken@ixsystems.com>
project-trident · beanpole135 · Feb 19, 2019 · Feb 16, 2019 · Feb 19, 2019 · Feb 19, 2019
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@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ TrueOS provides the OpenRC system for managing services on the OS in place of th
 
 ### Base Packages 
 
-TrueOS uses the package system for installing the OS itself in addition to the pre-compiled "ports". This functionality is called "base packages" and allows single package repository to contain both the OS and all the available applications in a single unified collection of files. This functionality provides the following features:
+TrueOS uses the package system for installing the OS itself in addition to the pre-compiled "ports". This functionality is called "base packages" and allows a single package repository to contain both the OS and all the available applications in a single, unified collection of files. This functionality provides these features:
 
 * The OS and packages are always in sync. A single system update can be used for the entire end-to-end update of the system - even when OS changes (such as a new kernel) are provided during a major release cycle.
-* The OS and packages are always in sync. A single system update can be used for the entire end-to-end update of the system - even when OS changes (such as a new kernel) are provided during a major release cycle.
+* The OS and packages are always in sync. A single system update can be used for the entire end-to-end update of the system, even when OS changes like a new kernel are provided during a major release cycle.
-* The OS and packages are always in sync. A single system update can be used for the entire end-to-end update of the system - even when OS changes (such as a new kernel) are provided during a major release cycle.
+* The OS and packages are always in sync. A single system update can be used for the entire end-to-end update of the system, even when OS changes like a new kernel are provided during a major release cycle.
 * System updates are *FAST* and clean. All updates are performed within a new Boot Environment, ensuring that your live system is never touched while you are using it. All it needs is a reboot to finish the procedures and boot into the newly-updated system.
-* System updates are *FAST* and clean. All updates are performed within a new Boot Environment, ensuring that your live system is never touched while you are using it. All it needs is a reboot to finish the procedures and boot into the newly-updated system.
+* System updates are **fast** and clean. All updates are performed within a new Boot Environment, ensuring the live system is never touched while in use. Reboot to finish the update procedure and boot into the newly-updated system.
-* System updates are *FAST* and clean. All updates are performed within a new Boot Environment, ensuring that your live system is never touched while you are using it. All it needs is a reboot to finish the procedures and boot into the newly-updated system.
+* System updates are **fast** and clean. All updates are performed within a new Boot Environment, ensuring the live system is never touched while in use. Reboot to finish the update procedure and boot into the newly-updated system.