diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index f3e8bf04a5..6b1d2d81e9 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown here. # Design of the QUIC Transmission Machinery All transmissions in QUIC are sent with a packet-level header, which indicates -an encryption level and includes a packet sequence number +the encryption level and includes a packet sequence number (referred to below as a packet number). The encryption level indicates the packet number space, as described in {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. Packet numbers never repeat within a packet number space for the lifetime of a diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 320ad38a0b..4a09ef03ce 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -3935,7 +3935,7 @@ receive buffer for a connection. A data receiver sends MAX_STREAM_DATA or MAX_DATA frames to the sender to advertise additional credit. MAX_STREAM_DATA frames send the maximum absolute byte offset of a stream, while MAX_DATA sends the -maximum sum of the absolute byte offsets of all streams. +maximum of the sum of the absolute byte offsets of all streams. A receiver MAY advertise a larger offset at any point by sending MAX_DATA or MAX_STREAM_DATA frames. A receiver MUST NOT renege on an advertisement; that