From f1be4128b8eb32575cf4c5f1915deed935488f11 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Mon, 11 Jun 2018 09:13:54 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Don't cite octet indices any more Also reflow. Closes #1436. --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 27 ++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 2443dfcd0e..53c7888d04 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -315,15 +315,16 @@ Version: DCIL and SCIL: -: Octet 1 contains the lengths of the two connection ID fields that follow it. - These lengths are encoded as two 4-bit unsigned integers. The Destination - Connection ID Length (DCIL) field occupies the 4 high bits of the octet and - the Source Connection ID Length (SCIL) field occupies the 4 low bits of the - octet. An encoded length of 0 indicates that the connection ID is also 0 - octets in length. Non-zero encoded lengths are increased by 3 to get the full - length of the connection ID, producing a length between 4 and 18 octets - inclusive. For example, an octet with the value 0x50 describes an 8-octet - Destination Connection ID and a zero-length Source Connection ID. +: The octet following the version contains the lengths of the two connection ID + fields that follow it. These lengths are encoded as two 4-bit unsigned + integers. The Destination Connection ID Length (DCIL) field occupies the 4 + high bits of the octet and the Source Connection ID Length (SCIL) field + occupies the 4 low bits of the octet. An encoded length of 0 indicates that + the connection ID is also 0 octets in length. Non-zero encoded lengths are + increased by 3 to get the full length of the connection ID, producing a length + between 4 and 18 octets inclusive. For example, an octet with the value 0x50 + describes an 8-octet Destination Connection ID and a zero-length Source + Connection ID. Destination Connection ID: @@ -443,7 +444,7 @@ Google QUIC Demultipexing Bit: Reserved: : The sixth, seventh, and eighth bits (0x7) of octet 0 are reserved for -experimentation. + experimentation. Destination Connection ID: @@ -453,9 +454,9 @@ Destination Connection ID: Packet Number: : The packet number field is 1, 2, or 4 octets long. The packet number has -confidentiality protection separate from packet protection, as described in -Section 5.6 of {{QUIC-TLS}}. The length of the packet number field is encoded -in the plaintext packet number. See {{packet-numbers}} for details. + confidentiality protection separate from packet protection, as described in + Section 5.6 of {{QUIC-TLS}}. The length of the packet number field is encoded + in the plaintext packet number. See {{packet-numbers}} for details. Protected Payload: