From 6503c9e2b728b99bbecc0d658858ff32238f44bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nick Harper Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 11:46:29 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Editorial changes to transport draft --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index db335b20c3..7683ab27c2 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -3276,7 +3276,7 @@ decodes to the decimal value 151288809941952652; the four byte sequence 9d 7f 3e 7d decodes to 494878333; the two byte sequence 7b bd decodes to 15293; and the single byte 25 decodes to 37 (as does the two byte sequence 40 25). -Error codes ({{error-codes}}) and versions {{versions}} are described using +Error codes ({{error-codes}}) and versions ({{versions}}) are described using integers, but do not use this encoding. @@ -4224,15 +4224,15 @@ Largest Acknowledged: ACK Delay: -: A variable-length integer including the time in microseconds that the largest - acknowledged packet, as indicated in the Largest Acknowledged field, was - received by this peer to when this ACK was sent. The value of the ACK Delay - field is scaled by multiplying the encoded value by 2 to the power of the - value of the `ack_delay_exponent` transport parameter set by the sender of the - ACK frame. The `ack_delay_exponent` defaults to 3, or a multiplier of 8 (see - {{transport-parameter-definitions}}). Scaling in this fashion allows for a - larger range of values with a shorter encoding at the cost of lower - resolution. +: A variable-length integer representing the time delta in microseconds between + when this ACK was sent and when the largest acknowledged packet, as indicated + in the Largest Acknowledged field, was received by this peer. The value of + the ACK Delay field is scaled by multiplying the encoded value by 2 to the + power of the value of the `ack_delay_exponent` transport parameter set by the + sender of the ACK frame. The `ack_delay_exponent` defaults to 3, or a + multiplier of 8 (see {{transport-parameter-definitions}}). Scaling in this + fashion allows for a larger range of values with a shorter encoding at the + cost of lower resolution. ACK Range Count: