From 00e05fbb38c9079150e06806e97b5f4763c70ac2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ianswett Date: Sat, 16 Nov 2019 22:26:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Reference 3168 for ECN And note that 8311 is an update. --- draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index acf0f4deab..9470b3e0d2 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -655,11 +655,10 @@ to support different algorithms. ## Explicit Congestion Notification {#congestion-ecn} -If a path has been verified to support ECN, QUIC treats a Congestion Experienced -codepoint in the IP header as a signal of congestion. This document specifies an -endpoint's response when its peer receives packets with the Congestion -Experienced codepoint. As discussed in {{!RFC8311}}, endpoints are permitted to -experiment with other response functions. +If a path has been verified to support ECN as specified in {{?RFC3168}} and +updated in {{?RFC8311}}, QUIC treats a Congestion Experienced(CE) codepoint in +the IP header as a signal of congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's +response when its peer receives packets with the Congestion Experienced codepoint. ## Slow Start From 3e0c5f00f5aa1e95d2cf8028da01534a642b9d06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ianswett Date: Sat, 16 Nov 2019 22:28:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Update draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md --- draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index 9470b3e0d2..f4fb22c7bb 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -658,7 +658,8 @@ to support different algorithms. If a path has been verified to support ECN as specified in {{?RFC3168}} and updated in {{?RFC8311}}, QUIC treats a Congestion Experienced(CE) codepoint in the IP header as a signal of congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's -response when its peer receives packets with the Congestion Experienced codepoint. +response when its peer receives packets with the Congestion Experienced +codepoint. ## Slow Start From e41a121b775409e5b7f6e276ede0e11eca7936d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: ianswett Date: Sun, 17 Nov 2019 02:04:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Jana's suggestion --- draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index f4fb22c7bb..ab3d8420d7 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -655,11 +655,10 @@ to support different algorithms. ## Explicit Congestion Notification {#congestion-ecn} -If a path has been verified to support ECN as specified in {{?RFC3168}} and -updated in {{?RFC8311}}, QUIC treats a Congestion Experienced(CE) codepoint in -the IP header as a signal of congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's -response when its peer receives packets with the Congestion Experienced -codepoint. +If a path has been verified to support ECN {{?RFC3168}} {{?RFC8311}}, QUIC +treats a Congestion Experienced(CE) codepoint in the IP header as a signal of +congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's response when its peer +receives packets with the Congestion Experienced codepoint. ## Slow Start