diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index e9cfeec781..e0e4e2761c 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -61,10 +61,8 @@ informative: RFC3782: RFC6582: - RFC5827: RFC5682: RFC6937: - I-D.dukkipati-tcpm-tcp-loss-probe: --- abstract @@ -195,6 +193,10 @@ latency before a userspace QUIC receiver processes a received packet. We now describe QUIC's loss detection as functions that should be called on packet transmission, when a packet is acked, and timer expiration events. +TODO need an extended discussion of +{{?I-D.dukkipati-tcpm-tcp-loss-probe LOSS-PROBE}}. + + ## Constants of interest Constants used in loss recovery and congestion control are based on a @@ -308,7 +310,7 @@ Pseudocode for SetLossDetectionAlarm follows: << handshake_count handshake_count++; else if (largest sent packet is acked): - // Early retransmit {{!RFC 5827}} + // Early retransmit {{!RFC5827}} // with an alarm to reduce spurious retransmits. alarm_duration = 0.25 * smoothed_rtt else if (tlp_count < kMaxTLPs): @@ -465,7 +467,7 @@ Pseudocode for SetLossDetectionAlarm follows: alarm_duration = alarm_duration << handshake_count handshake_count++; else if (largest sent packet is acked): - // Early retransmit {{!RFC 5827}} + // Early retransmit {{!RFC5827}} // with an alarm to reduce spurious retransmits. alarm_duration = 0.25 * smoothed_rtt else if (tlp_count < kMaxTLPs): diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index be63674380..1ac4045381 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -59,14 +59,6 @@ normative: informative: - SST: - title: "Structured Streams: A New Transport Abstraction" - author: - - ins: B. Ford - date: 2007-08 - seriesinfo: - ACM SIGCOMM 2007 - EARLY-DESIGN: title: "QUIC: Multiplexed Transport Over UDP" author: @@ -1600,8 +1592,9 @@ Streams are individually flow controlled, allowing an endpoint to limit memory commitment and to apply back pressure. An alternative view of QUIC streams is as an elastic "message" abstraction, -similar to the way ephemeral streams are used in SST {{SST}}, which may be a -more appealing description for some applications. +similar to the way ephemeral streams are used in SST +{{?DOI.10.1145/1282427.1282421 SST}}, which may be a more appealing description +for some applications. ## Life of a Stream