diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md index ac9a1db6ae..71767ec27f 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-recovery.md @@ -797,8 +797,8 @@ is sent on a PTO timer expiration (see {{pto}}) or when entering recovery If a path has been validated to support ECN ({{?RFC3168}}, {{?RFC8311}}), QUIC treats a Congestion Experienced (CE) codepoint in the IP header as a signal of -congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's response when its peer -receives packets with the ECN-CE codepoint. +congestion. This document specifies an endpoint's response when the +peer-reported ECN-CE count increases; see Section 13.4.2 of {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}}. ## Initial and Minimum Congestion Window {#initial-cwnd} @@ -821,8 +821,8 @@ being fully utilized and therefore slow down the increase in congestion window, it does not directly affect the congestion window. The minimum congestion window is the smallest value the congestion window can -decrease to as a response to loss, ECN-CE, or persistent congestion. -The RECOMMENDED value is 2 * max_datagram_size. +decrease to as a response to loss, increase in the peer-reported ECN-CE count, +or persistent congestion. The RECOMMENDED value is 2 * max_datagram_size. ## Congestion Control States @@ -1086,8 +1086,8 @@ the congestion window SHOULD NOT be increased in either slow start or congestion avoidance. This can happen due to insufficient application data or flow control limits. -A sender MAY use the pipeACK method described in Section 4.3 of {{?RFC7661}} -to determine if the congestion window is sufficiently utilized. +A sender can use the pipeACK method described in Section 4.3 of {{?RFC7661}} to +determine if the congestion window is sufficiently utilized. A sender that paces packets (see {{pacing}}) might delay sending packets and not fully utilize the congestion window due to this delay. A sender @@ -1122,10 +1122,11 @@ A receiver can misreport ECN markings to alter the congestion response of a sender. Suppressing reports of ECN-CE markings could cause a sender to increase their send rate. This increase could result in congestion and loss. -A sender MAY attempt to detect suppression of reports by marking occasional -packets that they send with ECN-CE. If a packet sent with ECN-CE is not +A sender can detect suppression of reports by marking occasional packets that it +sends with an ECN-CE marking. If a packet sent with an ECN-CE marking is not reported as having been CE marked when the packet is acknowledged, then the -sender SHOULD disable ECN for that path. +sender can disable ECN for that path by not setting ECT codepoints in subsequent +packets sent on that path {{?RFC3168}}. Reporting additional ECN-CE markings will cause a sender to reduce their sending rate, which is similar in effect to advertising reduced connection flow control