From d4ea499f0202be3971fc1267c9657fdd5f0689e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Thu, 29 Oct 2020 12:18:22 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Explain what the bitfield references mean Closes #4269. --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index b242445ee7..03b02b5013 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -322,6 +322,10 @@ Example Structure { ~~~ {: #fig-ex-format title="Example Format"} +When a single-bit field is referenced in prose, the value of the byte that +carries that field with the value set can be used to clarify. For example, the +value 0x80 could be used to refer to the One-bit Field in {{fig-ex-format}}. + # Streams {#streams} From adbf9a65424c2946fd6fcd845e7563b4703bafb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Fri, 30 Oct 2020 11:01:33 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Moer txt Co-authored-by: Jana Iyengar --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 8 +++++--- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 03b02b5013..044b0e6de4 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -322,9 +322,11 @@ Example Structure { ~~~ {: #fig-ex-format title="Example Format"} -When a single-bit field is referenced in prose, the value of the byte that -carries that field with the value set can be used to clarify. For example, the -value 0x80 could be used to refer to the One-bit Field in {{fig-ex-format}}. +When a single-bit field is referenced in prose, the position of that field can +be clarified by using the value of the byte that carries the field with the +field's value set. For example, the value 0x80 could be used to refer to the +single-bit field in the most significant bit of the byte, such as One-bit Field +in {{fig-ex-format}}. # Streams {#streams}