From 4173b3d7f13514a49a5ecdd1be816bd663d16174 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alissa Cooper Date: Tue, 5 Jan 2021 10:38:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Editorial suggestions --- draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md b/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md index 0d723feaea..35387a8025 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ minimal amount of information that is made available to entities other than endpoints. Unless specifically prohibited in this document, any aspect of the protocol can change between different versions. -{{bad-assumptions}} is a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions that +{{bad-assumptions}} contains a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions that might be made based on knowledge of QUIC version 1; these do not apply to every version of QUIC. @@ -361,7 +361,7 @@ There are several traits of QUIC version 1 {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}} that are not protected from observation, but are nonetheless considered to be changeable when a new version is deployed. -This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made based +This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made about QUIC based on knowledge of QUIC version 1. Some of these statements are not even true for QUIC version 1. This is not an exhaustive list; it is intended to be illustrative only. From 03d626e724b41175ba690fad20e60f587093e590 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Wed, 6 Jan 2021 10:27:38 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Wrap --- draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md b/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md index 35387a8025..e20fa3a528 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-invariants.md @@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ minimal amount of information that is made available to entities other than endpoints. Unless specifically prohibited in this document, any aspect of the protocol can change between different versions. -{{bad-assumptions}} contains a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions that -might be made based on knowledge of QUIC version 1; these do not apply to every -version of QUIC. +{{bad-assumptions}} contains a non-exhaustive list of some incorrect assumptions +that might be made based on knowledge of QUIC version 1; these do not apply to +every version of QUIC. # Conventions and Definitions @@ -361,10 +361,10 @@ There are several traits of QUIC version 1 {{QUIC-TRANSPORT}} that are not protected from observation, but are nonetheless considered to be changeable when a new version is deployed. -This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made about QUIC based -on knowledge of QUIC version 1. Some of these statements are not even true for -QUIC version 1. This is not an exhaustive list; it is intended to be -illustrative only. +This section lists a sampling of incorrect assumptions that might be made about +QUIC based on knowledge of QUIC version 1. Some of these statements are not +even true for QUIC version 1. This is not an exhaustive list; it is intended to +be illustrative only. **Any and all of the following statements can be false for a given QUIC version:**