From 5e6c750d0f4a1977f60e8eed7c15fc83a6cd3119 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Wed, 6 Jan 2021 20:12:28 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] This "this" was just confusing The text was probably backwards, but rather than invert it, remove the indirect reference to the subject of the claim and be explicit. Closes #4515. --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index e896545bfa..31b4b90d3f 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -2754,8 +2754,9 @@ setting IPv6 flow labels. The IPv6 flow label SHOULD be a pseudo-random function of the source and destination addresses, source and destination UDP ports, and the Destination Connection ID field. The flow label generation MUST be designed to minimize the -chances of linkability with a previously used flow label, as this would enable -correlating activity on multiple paths; see {{migration-linkability}}. +chances of linkability with a previously used flow label, as a stable flow +label would enable correlating activity on multiple paths; see +{{migration-linkability}}. A possible implementation is to compute the flow label as a cryptographic hash function of the source and destination addresses, source and destination