From f731ce2c31d0cd57fd28c51bb3c35573cdbddc42 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Thu, 7 Jan 2021 12:10:38 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Ellipsis refers to zero or more occurences Not repetitions, which might be read to mean one or more occurrences. This change will conflict, but the conflict is easy to resolve. Closes #4609. --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index f43916a0d4..3090167cfe 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -318,8 +318,8 @@ x (?) = C..D: : Indicates that x is optional (and has length of E) x (E) ...: -: Indicates that x is repeated zero or more times (and that each instance is - length E) +: Indicates that zero or more occurences of x are present (and that each + instance is length E) This document uses network byte order (that is, big endian) values. Fields are placed starting from the high-order bits of each byte. From f163528dabf004bd01806252fa6e3b7d5ae419d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Martin Thomson Date: Mon, 11 Jan 2021 12:41:44 +1100 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] instances Co-authored-by: Mike Bishop --- draft-ietf-quic-transport.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md index 3090167cfe..68a9d000f9 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md +++ b/draft-ietf-quic-transport.md @@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ x (?) = C..D: : Indicates that x is optional (and has length of E) x (E) ...: -: Indicates that zero or more occurences of x are present (and that each +: Indicates that zero or more instances of x are present (and that each instance is length E) This document uses network byte order (that is, big endian) values. Fields